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VIRMAN FF: DIL HAI TUMHARA- part 7 on page 13

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    VIRMAN: DIL HAI TUMHARA..
      
            Character Sketch

VIRAT VADERA: A Rich nd most handsome guy in d collage he is 20years old
nd he has to be in 3rd year but hes in 2nd becoz he failed in 2nd year. So he is doing it again in delhi's
bst SR collage. His family lives in chandigarh nd r d most rich.people in chandigarh
He is dere only child in his family he has his both loving parents nd dada dadi
his best from childhood is viren but he is in US ( will come later )

MANVI CHAUDARY: D MOST BEAUTIFUL girl in d world she is soo luving caring nd ful.of life
Her family means only her parents nd her bst frend jeevika. Her familyy lives in mumbai nd are d most richest
people over dere she had just returned from US nd now had moved to delhi for studying...nd from getting rid of
people in US

These r d main character of d storyyy nd jeevika nd viren just hv a supporting role so not explaining dem
      

                            
                                       PART - 1
D storyyy startsss from US A girl woke up nd welcomes d new day of her life
She suddenly gets up starts roaming in d house . Finallyyy she packs her bag nd is now leavingg for delhi
She is none other than manvi

On Airport

M: shud i go or not omggg m sooo confused...nooo no confusion i hv to go i cant stay here
suddenly her phone started ringing

Person: where r u baby??

M: its none of ur business stop callingg me

P: how can u talk to me lyk dat u no na i luv u soo much

M: o plzzz dont u dare say dat again (teary eyes) u dont even no d meaning love . I just hate u
nd m going far away from u so stop calling me
   phone cut nd switch off

P:helo helo manvi ..nooo how can she leave me lyk dat o god i cant live without her i hv to found her
M coming manvi i will not let u go...
     
        Now In Delhi SR collage girlss Hostle (at night)

a guy is busy in flirtingg with girlsss

girl : omg m soo lucky dat today atleast i got a chance to talk to u
another girl: yaa right but its just for 5 min till dat witch come nd snatch ojr prince charmingg

A guy is offcourse virat

Virat : hey girls now i take ur leave becoz my date hv come
all d girls looks behind nd saw d witch maya is comingg
becoz virat is virat who changes his gf just in mins nd she is d one who hv been from last week so every girl is
jealous about her..

maya is d girl who hv been wid virat for more dan a week

Ma: hey girls tym to go nd dream about prince charmingg we r getting late for our
movie..lets go virat baby...

V: ya sure bebs..
Lets go... Bye girlsss 😉



So dis is d first part of my first storyyy...
Nd i m able to write it vecoz of 1 person SHILPA...
THANQQQ SO MUCHHH

HERE SO MANY PEOPLE R MY INSPIRATION
SPECIALLY
Shilpa, preeti shadiya,preity,nisha33,nisha310,naina, Niaksharma, Zahara , let it go, vibhubebo nd bluebolt

sry if i forgot sum1 nd my biggest inspiration is Mahuya di i hv read ur docs in TVC nd m her biggest fan
love u alll

Thanqqq shilpa09 for helping me...
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preity_d thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aenna you started a story? awesome👏
the 1st part is looking interesting
hope to see a intense story of virman
want to know who is the guy???? who called Manvi
he is the villain I guess  ...

pm me 

P.S, is the preeti, me? whose name you took in the update?
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This content was originally posted by: preity_d

<font color="#9900CC">Aenna you started a story? awesome</font><font color="#9900CC">👏
the 1st part is looking interesting
hope to see a intense story of virman
want to know who is the guy???? who called Manvi
he is the villain I guess ...

pm me

P.S, is the preeti, me? whose name you took in the update? </font>
😳

   


Thanqqq nd u will soon get to no about d guy
nd yes its u
preeti i luv all ur storiesss
so ur my inspiration...
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Hey Nice Start..!  Continue soon...!
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Hey Nice Start..! Continue soon...!



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Omg that was avssum pm me plz
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Waooo new story on our VIRMAN great looking forward to the next part... plz continue ASAP...
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Nice start...
I guess this is your first story :)
Best of luck :)
Please PM in future :)
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Nice start...

I guess this is your first story :)

Best of luck :)

Please PM in future :)



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PART 2

Here starts a new day in morning manvi came out of d airport nd she first calls her dad

M: hey dad hru
D : hi swthrt hv u reached delhi
M: ya dad can i no where m staying in delhi
D: ya beta we hv our own house dere i will msg u d address nd u can go dere nd collect d keys
from d neighbours nd 1 more thing ur collage is also just few mins away from ur house
M: thats great dad kk now i shud go ttyl dad
D: wait beta i wana ask u about him hows he hv he allowed u to come delhi from US i mean leaving him alone?
M: oh plzzz dad m telling u for d last tym m not wid him anymore i just hate him nd now
m starting m new lyf m moving on so plz dad stop asking me about him
D: beta how can u say he was ur...(cut by manvi)
M: dad plz i hv to go bye ttyl tc
D: o god she never listens to me. I think its her lyf i shud not say anything


In SR collage boys hostle

a guy gets up rubbing his eyes nd after looking at his watch he jumps out of bed nd hurriedly goes to washroom
after freshen up he comes nd start dressing
(hes virat)

V: o god aaj firse late pata nai ye alarm baja kyu nai kal band krne ke baad aaj bhi to banjna chahiye tha pr nai ye to apni marji ka maalik hai kher chod yr virat ti late ho raha hai aaj fir professor entry nai denge class me
bhagooo

here manvi hv entered her.house nd hv freshened up she is getting ready for her first day in collage
she is wearing a denom shorts nd a sleevless top she is lookingg super hot!!! She just locks her house nd take her car
which was here as her surprise from her dad
she starts d car nd drive for d destination