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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by thendralfan007

The T/CConfused romance put me off ... till i came to a part of another girl Ermm Question  ... then I thought to myself ... aha a mystery ... can't wait to see what will happen next ...
 
Great beginning Gisel ...ClapDay Dreaming 
 
agree!..waiting for the twist in the twister!

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
 Great beginning Gisel ...Clap  Wating to see Tamil and Thulasi Love Story
 

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
gisel what a grain..!! Wink u have
TC romance sa Shocked.. <<<ENA KODUMA SIR ITHU>>>LOL
why this kolaveri gisel...!!!
but in the other angle this story is different..!!!Thumbs Up
i guess the girl who met with an accident is thulasi..Confused
and hw she knows  tamil  as deepak..???Confused
waiting for the next part

gisel thanks for the pm..




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Episode 2

Meanwhile in a far away ancestral house decorated with flowers and lights with a music band playing. On a balcony in the far east corner, a girl stood there wearing an exotic bridal dress leaning over the railing,
"Listen to me! Everything will be alright! You shouldn't marry him! They are trying to make use of you and your money...Please for once, don't listen to your father...Trust me! I'm your best friend! I'll come tonight and let's get out of this city for good. Give me your car keys now...", her best friend's voice echoed into her thoughts. Should she listen to her? Tomorrow was her engagement and the day after was her wedding. She was getting married to her father's sister's son only. What would go wrong? He was one guy who didn't know what was love and would abide by his mother all the time. And his mother, all that mattered to her was money. Her father's hard earned money.
"Dear..."
"Father" she turned to see her father entering her room.
"My little girl is getting married and going to leave me."
Hesitantly, "Father...I think...I think...I..m..not ready for this..."
Her father inhaled, "It's because of him. Isn't it? When it comes to marriage, caste creed, religion matters or it will affect your life in the later stages."
She immediately said, "No...not at all. Why aren't you believing me on this? I love no one."
Her father, "Listen to me! You have to get married! And you know that your aunt is not going to let it off like this. She has power. She can do anything. Don't try anything stupid!" looking at the breeze from the open balcony. He went and closed the window, "Sleep. It's going to be a big day tomorrow."


The disco party was in full swing. Anand and Shamila were dancing on the dance floor with the other strangers while Charu sat in a corner siping her coke and looking into her iphone.
Anand noticed her, "Sharmi...Sharmi."
Shamila who was enjoying herself didn't hear him over the loud music. 
Anand, "Sharmi!!" in her ears.
Shamila, "Oh my God! What?" stopping her dance. 
Anand, "What is going on between them?" pointing towards Charu.
Shamila, "I don't know. You are the police. You should know."
Anand, "Hm...Since college the four of us have been good friends. We never had secrets. What is this fight that they are hiding from us?"
Shamila, "Let Tamizh come, then we will know."
Anand, "Try calling him."
Shamila, "It says switched off."
They looked worried. Something was really serious this time. What was it? They turned to look at Charu, who was looking at the phone and smiling, all of a sudden, confusing them even more.


He stopped the car in front of a house. The lane was silent too. He got off the car and opened the passenger door. The lady was sleeping peacefully, "Is she sleeping or in coma? Who knows?...hm...how do I take her in?" with hands in his hips, he looked around. No one was there. He went and opened the gate and then the door and then came back, "Madam?" shaking her. 
No response. 
"Hm. I have no other choice." and he held her and carefully he took her in his arms and slowly he carried her into the house, with the gentle breeze blowing lightly messing up her hair. He entered the house and went inside a bedroom and put her gently in the bed. And for the first time he noticed her face properly. He sat down next to her; pulled up his collars; took the jug from the night stand; poured out the water into his hands and was about to splash it on her when he stopped, looking at the peacefully sleeping face. He gently rubbed off the mascara off her face with the water and a tissue. He placed the jug on the night stand and got up and turned to go when he felt a tug. 
He turned to see his watch tangled to the girl's bracelet. 
He looked at her again. 
No sign of moment. 
He released himself and went out to the hall. 
He checked his pocket to put his phone on charge, when he realized it wasn't there, "Where on earth is my phone? It must have fallen in the alley. Enough is enough. Now this lady has to pay me for my bike and my cell phone." and he stormed back into his room, "Hello! Madam! Wake up!" 
The lady didn't even stir.
"Has she passed out into a coma? Aha... I have a feeling that I'm going to be on tomorrow's news for murder or kidnap. Madam, wake up! Above all I have to call her madam, What is her name? Did she run away from her marriage? That too in a Volkswagen. She must be rich. Aiyoo BRAMAHA! What is your problem? Why so much trouble in one night?" in a furry, he thumped at the night stand making the jug of water fall on her. 
In a split second, she sat up straight in shock.
"I'm sorry. I didn't mean to." she heard someone say. She turned to look at the guy who was standing by her bed side. Did she know him? She tried remembering only to find that her head ached when she tried. She held her hand to her head hoping to lessen the pain as she closed her eyes browing her forehead. She heard him say, "Are you alright?" 
She opened her eyes and looked around. Where was she? and who was this man whose question didn't seem so genuine? She looked down at her dress getting more confused. Why was she wearing a bride's dress? 
"Are you ok? What's your name? Do you know me? I'm Tamizh. Only people in my..er..profession call me Deepak", the man cut into her thoughts. 
"Huh?" 
The man enquired raising his eyebrows, "I'm Tamizh. You are?" . 
What was her name? She closed her eyes trying to remember. Nothing. She could remember nothing. She opened her eyes in haste on realizing she didn't remember anything and it was only this man who was standing next to her that she remembered. Nothing else. A tear rolled down her cheeks in fear. "Don't cry. I just asked your name. Nothing else." 
"I don't remember." she found herself saying, much to the dismay of Tamizh. 
"WHAT?" 
"What is my name? Who am I to you?" she asked him in return.
She suddenly noticed her ring with a T symbol embedded with diamonds and remembered that he had just said that his name was Tamizh, "Are we husband and wife? or are we just engaged?" 
Tamizh looked at the lady dumbstruck. 
This women whom he hardly knew an hour back had called him by his name just after the accident and now she was asking him if he was her husband? What the hell was happening?

(To be continued...)



Edited by Gisel - 05 February 2013 at 8:17am

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Hey Gisel, great to see you back here and writing!

As you know I'm a fan of your stories and I read the first part when it was posted.  I saw how it mentioned that your friend wants to see only Deepak and Sruthi in the story and no one else bothering them, so I got excited and I was like yes a nice story with just TT in it.  

Then I started reading the story and when I saw Charu and Tamil in the same sentences I got worried and a little disappointed.  I was like nnnooo please no Charu and Tamil together, I want to see TT together!!!

Just read the second part as from the ending of the first part I was curious to see where this isgoing.  I liked the second part and it's interesting to see how Tulasi (not sure if  that is her name...lol) after hitting her head is not remembering much.  I can totally picture Deepak and Sruthi together in this situation.  Story is going good so far, hoping to see Tamil and Tulasi together here.  Also love the different atmosphere and setting to the story.


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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged
very interesting gisel...this really seems so mysterious and magical at the same time...
this is great writing,,switching between scenes and keeping the suspense..great build up..
 

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Wonderful part  Gisel Clap

Second part is so classy and good. Three different situation and places. I think first situation belongs to that lady in the car, maybe her flashback? And then Anand, Bujjimaa and Charu. 
That lady forgetting her identity Shocked I think its Thulasi. Like Smiles said TA oda expression we can apdiye imagine it, when he was WHAT. Great script, very thrilling. That suspense keeps you on the seat, good Smile

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
Super part GiselClapStar I like it, oru good suspends pack nu sollelam..are C&T lovers or friends..enneku puriyave illaConfusedLOL..
Thulasi a thaan irukonum anthe lady, has she forgotten her id, omgShocked

Gisel waiting for the next part..enne nadakum nu theriyele, waiting!Big smile

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