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Posted: 27 March 2013 at 3:36am | IP Logged
loved the umbrella part loads
superb 
continue 

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Posted: 28 March 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
good part gisel..good consistency..bullet mark then and now getting the same interest from her..
umbrella scene also very good thinking, to help with memories...now waiting eagerly for the next part..
 
p.s.  gisel, seeing both the falling down scenes in yr sig, must comment on the diff..the first one too good and out of ordinary and the second somehow seems makeshift and like acting!.


Edited by vjayam - 28 March 2013 at 10:54am

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Episode 18

Tamizh, "Kalyanama? Enaka?"
Everyone turn to look at Thulasi who can't stop laughing.
Patti, "Yaaru da intha paayan?"
Tamizh, "Paayana?" and laughing much to the annoyance of Thulasi, "Ithu Thulasi, patti. Enoda...", falling short for words and realising that he was in the middle of big problem. Thulasi wouldn't agree to be his wife and his patti won't leave him until he has a wife. What was he going to do?
Thulasi comes foward, "Hello, patti. Nan Tamizh oda friend. En vela vishayama gramathila konjam survey panna vanthen."
The guy comes with the bag, "Thambi. Oru bag thaan iruku. Yaaru room la veka? Unga room la ya illa guest room la ya?"
WIth everyone suspicions building up, he manages to quickly reply, "Guest room la vechurunga. En dress elam thaan ein room laya irukai."
Patti, "Vaanga ula poi pesalam."
With Thulasi in earshot distance, Patti, "Oru nimisham Tamizh. Thulasi poturuka sata naan un poranthanaluku vangi thanthathu thena?" 
Both of them look at each-other realising that they might have to do a lot of explaining. Patti, "Ena da pesa matengira?"
Tamizh, "Cha. Cha. Illa patti. Athu vera colour. Ithu vera colour. Patha vithiyasam theriyala?"
Patti, "Theriyaliya...hm...late aiduchu, saptutu poi padunga."


Thulasi peacefully sleeping in the guest room. The window wide open and the curtains fluttering with drizzles after the rain.
*Creak*
Tamizh slowly crept inside the room, locked the door and went near her bed. The moonlight fell on her making her face glow. He slowly walked from the foot of the bed towards the canopy. There being no power in the house he failed to notice a night table that fell down making Thulasi wake up with a start. Thulasi turned startled towards the sound to see a shadow over her. 
*Muffle* 
He covered her mouth with his hands, "Sh. Sh. Sh. Naan thaan. Tamizh." and slowly released his grip.
She calmed down and whispered, "What are you doing here?"
Tamizh, "How are you peacefully sleeping with no current?"
Thulasi stood up and went near the window and spoke gazing at the sky, "Ivalo azhagana thendral kaatru. Epdi thookam varama irukum? In fact, in many years, today was the day I got a beautiful sleep only to be disturbed by you", she turned to accuse him but her heart stopped in repulse when she saw that he stood right behind her, "Oh my God, Tamizh! You scared me! Tell me, why are you here in this room?" 
Tamizh, "We should get out of here. I can't stay and get married." 
Thulasi teasingly, "Aww. But I wanted to see your marriage. It will be fun."
Tamizh teasing back, "Ena pondatti nakkala?"
Thulasi, being serious, "Ena Tamizh? Pondattiya? We, we...I told you.."
Tamizh just went closer to her with a playful smirk, she went backwards hitting against the window. He caged her in betwen his arms holding the window grills.
Thulasi, "Tamizh...no..."
Tamizh, "See. If I get married now, it will be a fraud because I'm already married to you. Getting divorce would take one year. We can't file it because that will also account to fraud of getting citizenship. So you see, we kind of have to put up with each-other."
Thulasi, "Are you telling me that you are not going to leave me?" That question struck him hard. Tamizh closed his eyes remembering their past. 
"Promise me that you will never leave me Tamizh." kept echoing in his thoughts.
"Tamizh, leave me please." Thulasi shook him to reality.
Tamizh, "I...I...I want to ask you one question. En kana pathu pathil sollu."
Thulasi, "Ok."
Tamizh, "A promise. A promise to a person you loved. What would you do? Will you ever break the promise?"
Sadly Thulasi looked at the love in his honest eyes and though she knew she would regret it she said, "No. I wouldn't break the promise."
Tamizh held her cheeks. She looked into his teary eyes that sparkled. "Thank you Thulasi. Thank you so much." 
Unclear as to whether to push him away or draw him closer; she held her breath as her heart continued to beat faster. Her eyes widened as Tamizh leaned forward and kissed her. 

(To be continued...)

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Posted: 30 March 2013 at 6:40am | IP Logged
"Ena pondatti nakkala" so cute...Embarrassed
Paravaillaiye pattiku evalo naybagama...?Wink

Nice part...gisel...Smile
TT convo at night...so cute...Embarrassed So magical...Embarrassed
Thanq...!!!Smile


Edited by suha1995 - 30 March 2013 at 6:41am

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Awww Gisel is back Big smile
Superb superb superb Clap Thuls getting memories and Ta marriage omg evlo twist, haha waitingg.
All the best on your exams Gisel Wink
Ahh the dialogues are cutee   Smile

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Gisel ... I super enjoyed the conversation between T/T Smile ... ooohhh ... i'm getting shivers imagining the middle of the night scene Embarrassed ... will the kiss take place or not ... SmileCry

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Episode 19

A couple of seconds and she pushed him away angrily and without a caution, she slapped him.
"What were you thinking? This is not how I wanted my first kiss! Not in...not in..." looking around her at the moon beam that came from the window and the clatter of the after-rain drops and the monsoon breeze carrying in the sweet smell of roses and an handsome man who loved her. This was much better than what she had ever dreamt of, "...not when I was unsure..."
He just smiled when she referred to this as their 'first kiss'.
Thulasi looked up to him, "I'm not Thulasi. Tamizh. I have never had the opportunity to experience the love of a family. I don't know where I as born. I was brought up in an orphanage. Then one fine day, a NRI couple decide to adopt me and take me to America. There after 2 years, they died in a car accident leaving me a huge fortune. I was at foster homes for the money I had and I  studied there. Kanagu was a brother from one such home. Deepa and Kalyani, my friends and the company that was all my life. I never thought about marriage. For me, life is about earning money in a constructive way and providing for the rightfully needy. You...you won't fit in my world. I mean I won't fit in your world."
Tamizh stepped forward and held her shoulders to make her look at him, "Why not?"
Thulasi, "I won't be able to do your chores everyday. I will not give up my career at any time. Sometimes I might have to work late. I might..."
Tamizh silenced her with his fore finger on her lips, "When you are 80. Weak and feeble. When you want to laugh at the mistakes and blunders you had made. When you are happy watching the lives that you have made better. When you want to rest yourself in some shoulders that would give peace. I want to be there with you lending my shoulders. I want to grow old with you. I want to be by your side. A wife is not about doing chores and not having a career. In fact your career sounds better than mine. Do you think there will be a job for me there?" She smiled at him, her glow was back, her charm was back, "I want to be your husband, not master. I want to share my life and love with you. Do you believe me? Do you want to spend the rest of your life with me?"
She stood silent not even facing him. He had tried his best. Disappointed he turned away to go. He stopped short and turned to face her again, "Nalaiku epdiyavuthu we should go back to the city. I actually came here to ask for my shirt. Nalaikum patti intha shirt a patha prechana aidum. So please..." Thulasi looked down at the shirt she was wearing as Tamizh looked away. Thulasi walked towards him and patted his shoulders, "Shirt nalla prechana varuma? Nan samalichikiren. En purushan shirt a nan podurathila ena thappunu ketukiren ippo neenga ponga."
"Seri...huh?...ai, Thulasi. Ena sona?" turning to look at her. She was smiling at his confused face, "Thulasi?". She just nodded and said yes with her eyes, "Thulasi ya vida matenga pola."
"Epdi vida mudiyum kuttima?" taking a step closer and putting her hair behind her ears. 
"Kuttimava? En pera thavira vera elam kupuduvenga pola iruku?"
"Ein kuttima pidikaliya?" 
"Hum...nala thaan iruku."
He took her hand inbetween his hands, "I love you kuttima. Romba bayanthen. I will always be there for you."
"I don't know why but I believe you." looking back into his eyes.
"Thank you kuttima"
She just smiled, "Seri nga. Go and sleep. Nalaiku pattita vishayatha sollitu kelambidalam."
"Uhum"
"Ena?"
"Illa..."
"Ena?"
"Illa...Innaiku kalayala thaan namaku kalayanam achu...apdina..."
"Apdina?"
"Apdina..."
"Aha...enga suthi enga varenganu theriyuthu. Ponga poi padunga."
"Enga suthi enga varen?"
"Atha en vayala vera sollanuma? Ponga."
"Illa..."
"Azha paru...second night ku ivalo avasarama?"
Thulasi bit her tongue while Tamizh looked at her confused for words.

(To End)



Edited by Gisel - 03 April 2013 at 11:35am

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Wow...gisel
Thulasi regaining her memory or she acted as if she lost her memory...Confused
Anyways superb part...!!!Smile

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