res magar story happy wala haina
hehe just kidding... of course happy wala hai
aur kuch zyaada hawt-wa bhi... detailed reports coming soon
hola Avi! *tring tring* ek min avi mummy ka phone hai... nahi uthaungi toh accha nahi lagegi na...
*runs to speak to mumma*
haan me back... kahan thi mein... haan hola avi!
pehle a big-wala hug!
a wonderful story and the cherry on the cake was it was with out lovely maaneet... aise hi kuch zyaada likti raho... kya pata ek din u'll become an amazingly great chef... paratha wala
its been really long since i have read such a light-hearted and hot-wa piece
loved every act of dr. khurana... yeh toh real devil-wa hai
starting with nuances of geet taking pains to dress up for her ma[a]n to maan's saali teasings everything was apt and right. sometimes we never realize we take the pains to do something for somebody when given a chance we would never do for ourselves... well here geet is all decked up maybe for revenge but really for him
anyways... maan is already fida and seeing her all prim and proper... wait did i just say prim and proper... naah... i meant hot and sexy, baby is he turned on or what
i have always loved seeing maaneet in this kind of situations... it's always fun to see them go back and forth before each submits to the other just for love for each other
well geet is absolutely right maan is a rogue, scoundrel, badmaash magar that IS the best part... i have always loved the naughty and bad streak in men and when i see it in maan sirf geet mein hi nahi mujhe bhi bahut kuch hota hai
avi i strictly forbid u to post hrithik photos... already i am hyperventilating due to maan aur hrithik ka photo laga kar mujhe maarna chahti ho kya
this part was a bit more to do with what i like to call as history geography. we got to know how maaneet met and maan's side of the story... quite disgusting to know that mrs. sharma can take things this low... well kya kare kya na kare yeh kaise mushkil hai!
arre maan babu yeh tune kya kar diya... snoring sherni ko jaga di! well ab bugto
lurved the way maan came to accuse geet of using him as a sex object but end mein kya hua uska chaal hi usse fasa diya
but the next part seems all sad-wala i know maan will rush to her side and be her strength
hmm... anyways here is my review... did i forget something *scractching my head* oh haan parathas
chal since every single person has spoken about it i'll spare teasing u about it (for now)
lovely SS Avi keep up the wonderful work and hope to see more short and sweet stories in the future
Edited by Maaneet099 - 05 February 2013 at 10:37am