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virika ss:7 (days ,wishes ,surprises) ch.3 pg.11 (Page 6)

_Shru_ IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
awww it was such a lovely update... waiting 2 see more surprises of viren... continue soon nd thnx fr da pmSmile

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Natasha137 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
it's awsome...i loved jeevi childish behaviour...

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radzzz123 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged

               DAY 2 : 8 FEBRUARY 2013


It was a new morning and a new day. A day ahead in their journey of their life and a day less in the arrival of their baby. They both were really happy and excited about their baby.

Today jeevika had her appointment and scan. It was their second scan and they were really eager to see their baby's image.

"leevika, utho subah ho gayi hai"

"and today we even need to go to your gynecologists"

"our appointment is of 11 am and its already 9"

"you need to get ready and leave'

"it will take atleast 30 minutes from our home'

"so be quick' viren told her.


"viren ji , pls. just 2 minutes more"

"me and my prince wants to sleep more"

"please virenji , please"


"jeevika first et ready and then you can sleep again"


"okay , fine….

Come on , now pick me up and help me change'

"I am not in a mood to do it myself'

"come on.." she demanded and waited for him to pick her up..


Jeevika was driving viren crazy. Everyday she made him do something new , which he had never expected. Jeevika vadhera who was once his shy wife , who would not even say some romantic lines easily .. now wanted him to make her change. That was really awesome. He liked it and happily agreed to. After all he got very few chances to romance with her. He moved towards her, removed the blanket and picked her in his arms. She closed and eyes and hid her face in his chest. She could hear viren's heartbeat and could very well make out that they saying that "viren loves jeevika"..


He took her to the rest room and made her sit on the basin while he removed a new pair of clothes and filled the tub with warm water. By the time he had made all the arrangement , jeevika had already dozed off. He once again woke her up and directed her to the bath tub. But it seemed that she was in a naughty mood at present. She pulled him in with her and hugged him while taking a nice bath. Even viren pampered her and she loved being pampered. After this romantic and hot bath she was fully awake and was no more in a mood to doze off again. Soon they both got ready left for the hospital.


Upon their visit the doctor asked a few questions and then sent jeevika to change. Soon she came back and the doctor took them in the sonography room. Jeevika lied down on the bed while holding viren's hand and looking at the screen infront of her.


"virenji, look that's our baby"

"my little prince

See he is so handsome

Just like you" she said while tears coming in her eyes.


Viren wiped off her tears and kissed her forehead.

"yes jeevika , he is really charming

And I am sure all the girls would be after him"

"after all he has got such a handsome father and such a lovely and beautiful mother"

"viren ji , who told you that you are handsome"

"no you are not'

"virat is handsome… you are toh … toh… super duper hot and my dream boy'


She said it so loudly that even the doctor could hear her. Viren went all re but jeevika was not at all concerned about her surrounding and where she was. She was just happy .

Soon they left the doctor's cabin and it was already 2 pm.


"virenji ," jeevika said while looking out of the window

"yes jeevika"

" I am hungry , I want to eat something'

"and now itself'

"something spicy ,  sour and sweet'

"in fact I want a mixture of all of them'

" and I am telling you that I am not to eat after we reach home"

"I want to eat something on these larries.. she said while pointed towards a group of stalls near a beach.


"jeevika , but you should not eat outside , especially on these stalls'

"they are not good for your health'


But jeevika was not going to listen. She looked towards vire with pleading eyes and was about to cry. Viren gave up and turned the car towards the beach. They both got off and immediately jeevika ran towards the chat pakodi's stall.


"bhaiya , ek plate chat karna …  aur hai thoda zyada teekha aur khatha" she said to the man on the stall.


By the time viren reached their , she had already started eating  was looking here and there. She offered a piece to viren but when he refused to eat , she just thrust a piece into his mouth and started after seeing his expression. Viren was speechless on her behavior but was just staring at  her seeing her laugh full heartedly. She both spent some time together  walking here and there and finally it was the time of sunset….


As the sun began going down , viren took jeevika towards the sea and made her stand there while he took out a small box from his pocket.

Jeevika had a confused expression on her face and was about to ask him many questions but before that he crushed his lips on hers and they both kissed passionately.


Next he came towards her and opened the small box , which contained a beautiful ring and "JV"  was carved on it. It was a small present from him to her. She gave her hand in his hand and he slided  the ring into her finger and with this said a few lines of one the poems…


"Today we are obliged to be romantic
And think of yet another valentine.
We know the rules and we are both pedantic:
Today's the day we have to be romantic.
Our love is old and sure, not new and frantic.
You know I'm yours and I know you are mine.
And saying that has made me feel romantic,
My dearest love, my darling valentine. '

With this they hugged each other and walked back towards their car.

The way back home was full of romantic talks and old romantic memories…


didn't had much time.. but still updated

do read and comment...Smile

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urmil Goldie

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Loved it...always love viren pampering jeevika..try to pm me nxt time u update

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surbhi1994 Goldie

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged
my 7 words 4 u
mind blowing
hats off

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Kays94 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
such a sweet update Clap

every line had soo much pise, and the way you wrote it made it sounds 100 times more romantic and special that it already is!!! this was my favorite line:

She could hear viren's heartbeat and could very well make out that they saying that "viren loves jeevika"..


just simplyyy perfect!!! no wrods for you hun Big smileClap

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Natasha137 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
its awsome...wonderfull...keep updatinggg

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jenna_p Goldie

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written...Smile
Nice update..

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