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Great update..
and do add riya..!

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 6:19am | IP Logged
well... here is part 7... enjoySmile

Krishna: "bhai…" *sob**sob*

Sameer: shhh kishu… calm down… don't cry baccha……I cant see you like this… I am soo sorry….

Krishna kept sobbing.. after some time she gathered herself and spoke

Krishna: bhai, I am such a bad wife, bad mom, bad sister, bad friend na… I could not save abhi nor ansh…nor I could save Roshni and i could not stop pallavi… I knew everything, but I was soo helpless… m soo sorry sam… ho sake to mujhe maaf kardo.

Sameer: kya hua kishu? Jo hua kya wo tumhare haath mein tha? Nahin na……

She then narrates him whole story. Sameer is shocked and ashamed of himself for not trusting his sister.

 

Sameer: Krishna itna kuch hogaya aur tumne mujhe kuch nahin kaha? Mujhe naa sahi par Arjun ko to keh hi sakti thi rite??? Kyun? kyun sab kuch tum akele seh rahi thi pure 3 saal?! Aakhir kyun?

 

Krishna: sam tumhe lagta hai ki ye mein jun ko bol sakti thi? Who rosh se paagalon ki tarah pyaar karta tha aur aaj bhi karta hai. Maine rosh ko warn kiya tha but she neglected it. Mein us condition mein nahin thi ki mein khud aa saku. Mein ye ache se jaanti hu ki Arjun kya feel karta hai aaj, kyunki mein khud us daur se guzar chuki hun. Na mein mere bhai behan ko bacha saki na apne pati aur bacche ko. Isiliye I din tell him. And I wanted you all to hate me. But pallavi kabhi nahin maani. I ws in contact with her.but woh kahan gaayab ho gayi I don't even know.. m so sorry sam…… cos of me you are separated from your wife and daughter.

      She started sobbing again

Sameer: please baccha don't…don't blame yourself… I know dey are alive. We ll search them… you need to be strong… mere liye… please…..

 

After some time he took her to her PG and made her rest.he told her to take care, kissed her forehead and left to office.

 

 

Office

Arjun was pacing in office after ordering the rest to complete their work.

 He saw sameer enter and walking to this very cabin. He seemed to be in some tension.

Arjun: kya hua Rathod?itna pareshaan ho???

Rathod: mujhe khud pe ghin aa rahi hai kI maine uspar trust nahin kiya Arjun… she just wanted all of us safe.. but pallavi usse bina bataye chali gayi and we all blamed Krishna.. she had reason for everything. He narrates everything to Arjun. Ab tum bolo ki kya Karen… woh khush hone ka dikhava kar rahi hai Arjun par woh andar se poori tarah se toot chuki hai…. 



Arjun was shocked by this revelation.

Arjun: kyun kiya usne aisa… kya usse mujhpe vishwas nihin tha? Kyun kyun kyun? ( he screamed)aur maine na jaane gusse mein usse kya kya keh diya…. no sameer. How will I face her after knowing this?? Why do I do things like this? I should have had spoken to her rite???  No kya arjun rawte kabhi apne alawa kisi aur ki baat suni hai jo aaj sun leta? You know sam she told it was not deliberately done. But I just kept on hurting her…. O god what have I done……!!!! Ab woh kahan hai?i want to talk to her…

Sameer: apne PG mein. Ro ro ke bura haal ho chuka tha. I told her to stay there itself. Shayad kal baat hopaye. But please don't hurt her.. please Arjun…

Arjun: trust me sam. I ll never hurt her. Trust me on this.

Rathd: oki Arjun… ab tum bhi ghar jaao. Bahut der ho chuki hai.

They hug each other.Big smile



to be continues...

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged
just read ol d parts..!!!
lovely update..!!!
aww feeling bad for krishna..!!! she has gone through so much pain..!!
hope everything will be alright..!!
cant wait for the next part..!!!
continue soon..!!!

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 6:36am | IP Logged
beautiful dear..
loved it..
kishu nyc name.!!

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
teaser for part 8:

arjun:

you wer jealous of roshni and pallavi rite ki wo dono kitna kush hai apne pati ke saath,apne bacche ke saath'.. you were jealous rite'Shockedisiliye tumne ye sab kiya na' bolo Krishna bolo'.chup kyun ho????Confused



 i ll update next part soon...

please do commentSmile



Edited by princess_pari - 06 February 2013 at 11:45am

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Nice update dear...
Teaser seems to be very interesting...
Can't wait to read the next chapter...
Thank u...Smile

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
niceee!!!

cant wait for next update!!!

update soon!!!

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