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FF: Rishtey-epilogue part 2 updated pg 63 (Page 5)

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Nice part..
Continue soon!
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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
I read all the chapters in one go...
It was superb...
Loved Krishna's charecter...
Although they have personal differences,but,Arjun shouldnt have behaved with her like this during work.

Jaldi update karo aur mujheapne PM list me add karo.


Do one thing...
To make it easy for the readers,write the chapter numbers and their page numbers.
Ex: Ch1 pg1.
Like this,ok.
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Edited by zebbie - 04 February 2013 at 10:12am
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i am happy that you loved it...Smilei ll update the reason for their behaviour towards krishna in next update... and also their past (unke khud ki zubani) in upcoming updates... Smile
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Nice update..
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nice update
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Grt gng dear..,,
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waiting fr maha epi..!
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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 3:19am | IP Logged
awesome update
lovely part
waiting for mre
continue soon
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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 4:55am | IP Logged
here is part 6...Smile

 

In SUV

Krishna was recalling all the words hurled towards her by Arjun. She was trying her best not to shed tears in front of her team members. SUV stopped at the signal. She gazed out of window and saw a small baby held by her mother. The lady was asking people for alms and was trying to save her small baby from scorching sun. Krishna immediately got down from SUV and went to her. She took off her jacket and draped over the lady covering her baby. Then she took her wallet and handed about 1000 rs to the lady. She caressed the baby's face and turned towards the team watching her.

Krishna(in choked voice): you all go to office. I ll cum after some time.

   She walks off b4 any1 could say her anything.

Sameer who was in passenger seat immediately got off and instructed Arjun to take the rest to office and quickly followed Krishna.

 

Arjun wanted to ask Rathod to stay back. But he knew that Rathod wanted answers. Not that he did not want answers, but he was reluctant to ask her anything.so he let him go and started Suv. shree-chotu and aisha were shocked by seeing their chief following Krishna.

 

Rathod spotted her entering a park with full of small children and stood watching her silently. He saw her sitting on a corner bench and her shoulders shaking. He knew she was crying. He immediately went to her and sat next to her. He kept a hand on her shoulders. Krishna lifted her tear stricken face and saw Rathod next to her.. she immediately crashed to her chest sobbing

krishna: "bhai…" *sob**sob*

to be continued...


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