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FF: Rishtey-epilogue part 2 updated pg 63 - Page 3

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here you go with part 5😊

It was just a day like any other day in ETF

Rathod: team, we have a case. Famous diamond merchant mr. Tejwani. Diamonds woth abt some 200 crores were stolen from their safe. We need to go.

 On the way to crime scene:

ARjun: shree yeh tejwani ke details do.

Shree: sir mein try kar raha hun.. but uske bare mein info nahin hai, security reasons

Rathod: dammit!!! Ab hum kya karenge?

Krishna: Mr. hiten Tejwani, 47 yrs old, basically from kutch. Moved to Mumbai with his parents when he was 10. he holds a M.B.A. from Cambridge. Married to mallika, a classical dancer, age-45. love marriage. Couple have no kids of their own but have adopted 2 boys-varun and daksh. Age-21 and 24 resp. he started business with his wife as partner.  In past 20 years they have made huge profit. Honest people. No criminal background, no cases filed against them. This deal was with Sheikh Abdullah from Dubai.it was supposed to be delivered tomorrow afternoon but was stolen from the safe in their office about an hour ago. Baaki we have to see the crime scene.

Shree: wow! Ma'am! You are amazing.. magar aap ko ye saare info inti jaldi milgaye? I mean security ke wajah se unke saare info net se nikal diya hai rite???!

Krishna: Shree ye mat bhulo ki mein cases ke background check karne mein expert hun.. mera network bahut bada hai. Mujhe jiske bare mein jo information chahiye I can get in just few minutes.

Rathod: gud job Krishna.

Krishna: thank you sameer… I mean sir…

Arjun: isne koi bahut bada kaam nahin kiya hai Rathod. Wahi kaam kiya hai jo ek research specialist ko karna chahiye..

 

Crime scene:

Entire team is in the safe room. They check the entire system and observe everything. They saw that there was no windows or any ways to enter the locker room other than the door. Krishna and shree started analyzing the crime scene, whereas Arjun, sameer, chotu and Aisha went to enquire people in that office.

Krishna: shree ye safe yahan kuch ajeeb nahin lagta?

Shree: kyun mam? Yeh to wohin safe hai jisme diamonds the..

Krishna: haan shree diamonds to isime the with no doubt. But 200 crore worth diamonds ke liye ye safe. Maana ki ye office bahut secured hai but ye safe… it must have been something which cannot be opened at any cost but this is soo simple to open even without a proper key.aur aise ek safe ko toda jaata hai… par kyun? Shree tum yahan se fingerprints collect karo. Mein yahan kuch aur dhoondti hun.

She moves to door. Observes something. Then she takes out her tab and clicked couple of pics. After cmplting work there shree and Krishna go out.

 

With Arjun and Rathod

Krishna: Arjun mujhe yahan par bohot gadbad lag raha hai..

Arjun: so is because….?

Krishna: Arjun hum koi bhi keemti cheez ko yuhin koi aam box mein nahin daal ke rahte hai chehe baahar kitna bhi tight security ho. But yahan ye safe bohut hi maamooli hai. I mean bina key k ek choti si pin se bhi kholi ja sakti hai. Usse dekhne se hi ye pata chal jata hai. Ab usse is tarah todkar kholna kuch ajeeb laga mujhe.

Rathod: rawte tum usse ek baar dekhlo.mein mr tejwani se milke aata hun. Krishna tum Arjun ke saath jao. Shree you come with me.

Arjun: Rathod tum mujhse ye kehrahe ho ki mein iske saath jau? I ll go better with Aisha than her.

aisha was super happy that arjun was preferring over krishna.

Rathod: hum yahan as a team kaam kar rahe hai Arjun. And she IS our team member and I am your chief so take it as my order and go.

 

Krishna sees sameer and smiles. Sameer jus nods and leaves with shree.

Crime scene

Arjun: your thinking is right kookie.. kuch to choot raha hai….

Krishna: tumne mujhe abhi kya bulaya? Kookie???!!!! You still remember that Arjun???😛

Arjun: ye kya bol rahi ho tum Krishna? Meri kookie to 3 saal pehle mar chuki hai jab usne mera vishwas toda, mere dil ko thes pahuchaya. You are just ACP Krishna singhania to me now… o I am soo sorry..ACP Krishna Rathod right. Agar aapko koi aitraaz na ho to case ke taraf dhyaan de..?

 

Krishna wiped the tears flowing from her eyes and composed herself b4 speaking again.

Krishna: yeh dekho.. isse todne ki kya zaroorat? Who bhi aise? And ha yeh kam koi andar ke aadmi ka hi hai.

Arjun: can you elaborate please?

Krishna: simple. Yahan, der are no other way to enter o exit other than this door. Aur yeh dekho. Door is completely fine. No signs of any damage. Ab tum samjhe ya samjhau…?

Arjun clenched his jaw and spoke through gritted teeth

Arjun: don't you dare imitate me.😡 Ye haq tum kho chuki ho. Lets go now.

 Saying so, he marched outside leaving a very hurt Krishna behind.

 

After lot of investigations, Krishna-arjun's mind blowing chemistry, rathod's leadership they were able to solve the case. It was none other than mr.tejwani. he was in huge debt unkown to all due to gambling. So he made a master plan of stealing the diamonds and claim for insurance and also sell diamonds to the costumer. In that way he would be left with huge amount of money to live his life free of debts. He had everything planed. From breaking the safe box to turning off the cameras. But the door and absence of videos were enough for K-A to catch him.😃


to be continued...


i know the cases i have written here do not have true potential. i am trying to bring out the emotions, turmoil in every character. so please bear with me...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
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Nice part..
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I read all the chapters in one go...
It was superb...
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Although they have personal differences,but,Arjun shouldnt have behaved with her like this during work.

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i am happy that you loved it...😊i ll update the reason for their behaviour towards krishna in next update... and also their past (unke khud ki zubani) in upcoming updates... 😊
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Grt gng dear..,,
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awesome update
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here is part 6...😊

 

In SUV

Krishna was recalling all the words hurled towards her by Arjun. She was trying her best not to shed tears in front of her team members. SUV stopped at the signal. She gazed out of window and saw a small baby held by her mother. The lady was asking people for alms and was trying to save her small baby from scorching sun. Krishna immediately got down from SUV and went to her. She took off her jacket and draped over the lady covering her baby. Then she took her wallet and handed about 1000 rs to the lady. She caressed the baby's face and turned towards the team watching her.

Krishna(in choked voice): you all go to office. I ll cum after some time.

   She walks off b4 any1 could say her anything.

Sameer who was in passenger seat immediately got off and instructed Arjun to take the rest to office and quickly followed Krishna.

 

Arjun wanted to ask Rathod to stay back. But he knew that Rathod wanted answers. Not that he did not want answers, but he was reluctant to ask her anything.so he let him go and started Suv. shree-chotu and aisha were shocked by seeing their chief following Krishna.

 

Rathod spotted her entering a park with full of small children and stood watching her silently. He saw her sitting on a corner bench and her shoulders shaking. He knew she was crying. He immediately went to her and sat next to her. He kept a hand on her shoulders. Krishna lifted her tear stricken face and saw Rathod next to her.. she immediately crashed to her chest sobbing

krishna: "bhai…" *sob**sob*

to be continued...


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Posted: 11 years ago
mast hai... well this is what exactly is called cheating.. 
inna short update.. galat baat.
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