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hi everyone.. this is the first time i am writing something.. hope you all like it.. dis will be story about Arjun, weeks after Riya's death and Aisha's entry in the team..

Character sketch:

# ACP Arjun Suryakant Raute(29)- Super cop,no nonsence person; 2nd in command in ETF;handsomeWink Living corpseCry

 had a blissful married life with his beautiful wife Roshni for an year. Want to take revenge from Sikander

# Roshni Arjun Raute: wife of Arjun, younger sis of Sameer Rathore.murdered by Sikander 3 years ago. Younger to sameer by 3 years

# ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod(29)-1 amongst Arjun's 2 best friends. Elder bro of Roshni. Elder to Arjun by 2 months.ETF chief. I-am-all-serious-person

# Pallavi Sameer Rathod(25)- Sameer's wife whom he was married to when he was a kid. lively, beautiful lady. Doesn't live with him anymore but love him to a sister to arjun

# Dia Rathore(4)- Sameer and Pallavi's lovely daughter. Lives with her mom away from her dad. Has not seen him in face from past 3 years.adorable kid.

# Anvesha Raute(24)-Arjun's little sister. Always under the care of Arjun after their parents death.bubly. cheerful, always want to see her brother happy. Arjun keeps distance from her after Roshni's death. reason ll b known later. She can recreate any thing or scene with no effort

# Shreekant Sen(25)- tech whiz of ETF. Adorable, smart n of course cute

# Chaitanya Patil aka Chotu(26)- Commando of ETF.muscle man

# Aisha Sharma(26)- Ammunition expert. Newly joined ETF member. Full of attitude. Initially dislikes Arjun' aage ka aage dekhenge


Rest characters will be introduced as story progresses' with some twists n turns Wink


cs: above

part 1: pg 1

part 2: pg 1

part 3: pg 3

part 4: pg 3

part 5: pg 4

part 6: pg 5

note: pg 6

part 7: pg 7

teaser: pg 7

part 8:pg 8

part 9: pg 9

part 10: pg 9

part 11(A): pg 10

teaser: pg 11

part 11(B): pg 11

part 11(C): pg 12

part 12: pg 13

part 13(A): pg 15

part 13(B): pg 15

part 14: pg 16

part 15: pg 17

part 16+note: pg 18

part 17: pg 19

part 18: pg 20

part 19: pg 21

part 20: pg 21

part 21: pg 22

part 22: pg 23

part 23: pg 24

part 24: pg 24

part 25: pg 25

part 26: pg 26

part 27: pg 27

part 28: pg 28

part 29: pg 30

part 30: pg 31

part 31: pg 32

part 32(a): pg 33

part 32(b): pg 35

part 33: pg 36

part 34: pg 37

part 35: pg 38

part 36: pg 39

part 37: pg 40

part 38: pg 41

part 39: pg 42

part 40: pg 44

part 41: pg 46

part 42: pg 49

part 43: pg 51

part 44: pg 53

part 45: pg 56

part 46: pg 59


part 1: pg 61

part 2: pg 63

Edited by princess_pari - 28 May 2013 at 10:43am

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Yayyy! I am the first one to comment! Big smile
I can't wait to read your SS! The Character Sketch sounds interesting.
Why doesn't Sameer's wife and daughter live with him? Shocked
Aww I feel bad for Anvesha... why doesn't Arjun talk to her?
Anyways, looking forward for your update.
Do continue asap.
And please add me to your PM list.


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Awesum cs dear..
luking forward to read it..!!

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Superb CS...
Continue soon




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Love it




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hey everyone... this is the first part of the story i 'm updating... i ll be updating as and when i get time from my clg schedule Smile enjoy Smile

Part 1:

It was a normal day in ETF.. morning 8 o'clock. Arjun in his cabin with is cutting chai n Sameer in his, reading news paper.Shree and chotu in their regular seats completing paper work cursing their chief n their akdu samjhe ya samjhau.. Wink


"tring tring..' sameer's phone rang…he receives the call and call everyone to conference room. All assemble there.

Rathad: where is Aisha?

Shree: Pata nahin sir..abhi tak office aayi nahin hai woh

Rathod: damn it!!! Yeh ladki ko koi time sense hi nahin hai. Use aate hi mujhse milne ko kaho shree

Arjun smirked:  agar aap usse itna sir pe chadake rakhoge to yahin hoga na SIR..

Rathod: Raute maine ya mere team ke kisi ne bhi kisi ko bhi sir pe nahin chada rakha hai. Agar tumhara mujhe taunt karna khatam hua hoga to kuch kaam ki baat Karen? So team commissioner sir ka call aaya tha. He wants us to meet him immediately. Pata nahin ki kya hua hai but he seemed to be in great stress. Hume abhi..

 he was interrupted by entry of Aisha.

Aisha: sorry sir who…

Rathod: mujhe koi explanation dene ki zaroorat nahin hai aisha. Magar yaad rakhna agar dobara yeh hua to tumhe research desk mein transfer karvadunga aur haan ab se tumhe koi leave nahin milega.u have already had many.

 aisha glared towards grinning arjun.

Rathod: to team hume abhi nikalna hoga.lets go.

All left for commissioner's office.


In commissioner's office

Commissioner: Rathod tumhe to pata hoga na ki chief minister kal puna ja rahe hai apni poori family ke saath?

Rathod: Ha sir. I was told this y' check security. Kya hua sir u seem to be tensed?

 arjun was standing near the window as if showing no interest. Suddenly a person enters without permission

Person: Rathod Sir sorry to interrupt but ek emergency hai. Chiefminister sir ke ghar pe kisi ka call aaya tha about 10 min pehle. Unhe yeh threat mili hai ki wahan puna mein unki beti ko who log sare aam kidnap karke le jayenge... aape ke kahe mutabik lines check kar rahe the tab we came across this…

Comm: phir se threat ke calls??!

Rathod: phir se ka kya matlab hai sir? isse bhi pehle koi threat calls?

Rathod: Ha rathod.kal shaam se yeh 5th call hai. Pehle cm sir ne apni beti ke isharon par kiya gaya mazaak samjha tha as she din wanna go..magar aaj subah se calls ke saath letters bhi aa rahe hai...isiliye I want ETF to take in charge of their security entirely.if they could cancel this visit they would hav definitely done but yeh nahin ho sakta. So you all will join them to pune. Is that clear?

Rathod: Yes sir. Aap fikar mat kijiye. We ll handle everything. Jai hind sir

and team leaves.



Rathod:shree tum cm ke call log check karo.aur ha unke saare phones trap karo. Hume wahan se kuch na kuch zaroor milega

Arjun:usse zyada kuch faida nahin hoga Rathod

Rathod: kya hua Raute? Agar kuch kehna hai to saaf saaf kaho. Baithe baithe gutur gutur karne se koi faida nahin hai nahi hum me se koi bhi tumhare yeh baate samajh sakenge

Arjun: Rathod tumhe sach mein lagta hai ki yeh log security ko skip karke cm ke landline par call karsakte hai to wo itna to precaution nahin lenge ki wo pakde na jaaye.m sure k who calls ya to local booth se hoga ya churaye hue cell phones se. aur ha saare calls ke time bhi limited hoga taki koi unhe trace na kar paye.. ab kuch Samjhe ya….samjhau?

Shree: yes sir. Kaam hogaya. Cm ke ghar ke saare phones ke call log aur details hai. Arjun sir sahi hai sir. 5 calls mein do public booth se hai aur 3 alag alag sim se hai. Maine numbers ke details nikal diye hai. But yeh 3 sims churaye hue hai. Complaint lodge ho chukka hai sir.aur public booth bahut hi rush areas se hai and 2 different locations"

Rathod: oki then. Shree tum in cheeson par dhyaan rakhna aur chotu tum apne kuch aadmiyon ko cm ke ghar ke paas tainaat kardo. Mujhe wahan kaun aata hai jaata hai uska poora info chahiye

Arjun: chotu dhyaan rahe ke har 3 or 4 hours mein wo aadmi change hona chahiye taaki kisi ko shaq na ho.

to be continued...

hope you like it..Smile

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here is the second part... enjoySmile

part 2

Next day early morning

Rathod: team we have to be very careful. Unhone hume khuli chunauti di hai. Arjun tum cm ke peeche wali car mein shree ke saath rahoge. Chotu tum aage commandos ke saath, aisha tum uske peeche waali empty car mein n me in cm's car. We have to be very careful. Sab arms ke saath ready rahoge n be alert all the time. Shree cm ke car ke front aur sides me micro cams laga do aur arjun ke saath monitor karo.

Arjun: Rathod who on the way kuch nahin karenge

Rathod: yeh tum kaise kahoge rawte? Yahi unke liye aasaan s place hai kyunki ye highway hai. Yahan unke crime ka witness milna bahut mushkil hai.Aur ETF ka involvement last moment pe hua hai jo unhe shayad hi pata hoga. Tum apne in theories ko apne paas rakho .

It was time for the departure and all ETFians took their positions. Journey to puna was very smooth and there was no trace of any kidnappers.Rathod was a bit confused but he decided not t change his plans. CM and his family attended the function and sat in the lounge. Cm's daughter Mridula, a girl of 16 years was strolling in the garden. Sameer along with arjun went for rounds leaving aisha with the lil girl. Shree was arranging the cameras and chotu overlooking the security of rest of the family. Suddenly all heard a loud shriek. All members rushed towards the garden. They saw an unconscious aisha bleeding heavily from her head and saw a note next to her. Arjun asked shree and chotu to take aisha inside and give her 1st aid. He noticed that Mridula was missing and called everyone to search for her. Cm and his wife's sobs were uncontrollable. Arjun picked the note and read it loudly:

Mridula sirf meri hai.. ab usse mujhse koi nahin bacha sakta."

They had no idea about who would dare to kidnap cm's daughter and couldn't make out the reason too. Shree in meanwhile came and informed them that aisha was better and ll be back to consiousness in few hours.

Shree:sir, kahin ye who pattan lala ka kaam to nahin hai? Last time jab usne sheen ko kidnap kiya tha tab aapne use bacha liya than a? yeh kaam usika hoga..

Arjun: nahin shree, yeh kaam uska nahin hai. Mein use acchi tarah se jaanta hun.woh kabhi kisiko chetavni dekar nahin kidnap karta. Piche se waar karna uska aadat hai. Aur waise bhi who ab salaakhon ke piche hai. Uska ye kaam mein involved rehna possible nahin hai.


After about 2 hours aisha was up.

Rathod: aisha yaad karke batao ki garden mein kya hua tha/ ab us bacchi ko hume bachana hi hoga".

Aisha with difficulty sits up and speaks: sir mein aur mridula garden mein the. Achanak usne kaha ki use rose bushes dekhna hai. To hum wahan badhne lage. Phir suddenly bushes mein se 2 log bahar aaye aur mridula cheeki. Ek ne uske muh bandh kiya aur jab tak mein uske taraf jaati dusre ne piche se mere sir pe waar kiya. Dekhne par to who log koi professionals nahin lage. Ek jisne usse pakda tha who baar baar ye kehraha tha kiusne usse thukrakar acha nahin kiya. Aur ab who usse badla lega. Phir mein behosh ho gayi. Lekin meine dusre aadmi ko goli maari thi jo shayad uske haath ko laga tha.

Shree: lekin ma'am hume to koi goli ka sound sunai nahin diya tha…

shree piped in just to get an angry glare from rathod.

Rathod: silencer naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai shree

Then they all, except aisha moved for investigation.

After some time they got to know that mridula lived with her grandparents here in pune and attended school where as her parents lived In Mumbai. Dey went to her school and gathered as much info as possible. A boy named suraj was after her but she gave no encouragement to him.she had refused his proposal on valentines day the previous year in front of whole school. Den soon after exams she moved back to her parents. After a year now she was with no doubt abducted by the same guy.dey did not know where she was but after lot of work dey found her to be in his friend's house. They all moved there fully armed as they knew suraj was not alone. Soon they surrounded the entire area and rescued mridula. But the suraj and his saathi lallan escaped. Entire team was after them chasing. Suraj was caught and lallan, a criminal friend of his managed to escape. Arjun shree and sameer were after him. He was about to escape again, but something unexpected happened which left trio's mouth open in shock.

Few moments back, lallan was trying to move in zigzag so that they could not shoot him. Suddenly a bike in its full speed raced next to him and shot him on his leg making him fall on ground. R and R were sure that was no one from ETF. They captured lallan n handed him over to chotu. They turn towards the biker and stood shell shocked when they saw who it was.

Only one word left from arjun and sameer's mouth- "Krishnaa"…

guess who is this krishnaa... i ll introduce 'Krishna' in nest part...

have a nice timeSmile

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