Asya OS: I still love you

OMG...this is so good..I actually cried after trading it 😭

Broke my heart because I could actually see Asad doing something foolish like that, breaking his own heart to keep his brothers intact, but I hate the fact that he didn't think of Zoya. In keeping his brother happy he broke that poor girls heart as well. Sure, Zoya says she's happy but she will never be able to love Ayaan when her heart is consumed by Asad and how is that fair for Ayaan, Zoya or him. I think you should make a sequel where Ayaan finds out about what Asad did and questions him, maybe AsYa could get their happily ever after.

This was so beautiful and emotional... never read anything like this in this forum before and I loved it :D

Sacrifice..Edited by PhoenixRadar - 11 years ago

Ufffuffuff. How?? i mean how could you write this well??? 👏

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Sacrifice..

Something you don't understand until you, yourself, do it for someone you love. But it can be done for someone you haven't even met before.

You gave an insight to Asad's character in your own way.. I loved how you took the story and moulded into something so unpredictable. Unpredictable, for me, because I thought these two may have reunited, but you gave us a totally different twist.

I would like to see this side of his character very much onscreen. He has portrayed it once for his brother and sisters and for his mother. I would like to see him sacrificing something for Zoya too..

The last line "I know" was too painful to read, yet so sweet. The sweetest pain, you could say.

For a first work, you have definitely done a very good job.👏

Annie

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

Broke my heart because I could actually see Asad doing something foolish like that, breaking his own heart to keep his brothers intact, but I hate the fact that he didn't think of Zoya. In keeping his brother happy he broke that poor girls heart as well. Sure, Zoya says she's happy but she will never be able to love Ayaan when her heart is consumed by Asad and how is that fair for Ayaan, Zoya or him. I think you should make a sequel where Ayaan finds out about what Asad did and questions him, maybe AsYa could get their happily ever after.

Lovely story though!!!!

That's actually a nice thought. I'd try writing that. And thank you so much for liking it.

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Ufffuffuff. How?? i mean how could you write this well??? 👏

This is the best OS i ever read! I was sooo much into it!! And You ended it? i mean NOOO! 😭

Anyway did i just tell you that you write super ahmmaazing? WooW Woow sooo goood! 👏 🤗

Hope that i get to read more and more of your works soon 😊

Thank you so much!!!

💔😭