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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Happy Budday Again Bafeee Heart I dunno whats this though...LOL
 wont say more..



red - flashbacks & lyrics
blue - present
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Tumhe Dekha To Yeh Khyal Aaya

Zindagi dhoop tum ghana Saaya

  Aaj fir dil Ne Ik Tamanna ki...Aaj fir dil ko Hamne Samjhaaya

Tum chale jaoge toh sochenge...hamne kya khoya , hamne kya paaya

  Ham Jise GunGunaa Nahi Sakte...

...

'Waqt Ne Aisa Geet Kyun Gaaya '


she heard a familiar voice completing for her

Manvi  - toh aap kitni Der se wahaan khadi hokar sun rahi thi !

J - Kyun ..Ab itna Haq bhi nahi hai mera, Jab tu upar aayi thi  tabse ...

She just smiled & they went in their room. Course there was so much to be done..there always is , ESP when its marriage of your sister tomorrow ...

 She sat there watching her sis putting her things in places & drifted in some thoughts ...

    It must be so painful..dying ! To feel the soul being snatched out


TWO WEEKS BACK

Marriage is a Union of two Souls...' , She read from the wedding card in her hand. 

"Huh how it can be ...when its breaking two souls in the process, Why no One listens to me, Di don't want this marriage !!!! I have to do something " she thought.


She went downstairs where Pinky Chachi was coming towards her ,

 PC - Arre Maanvi do hafte hi bache hain  Shaadi ke Aur Ab tak meri dress hi decide nai hui hai , help Kar na meri !

   Manvi controlled herself from telling her not to worry about that as Nothing is gonna happen & forced her face in what she hoped was a happy expression. She went with Pinky chachi only to be called by Beeji after a while 



BEEJI'S ROOM 


Beeji - dekh Manvi Maine kafi soch samajhkar ye shadi Hrishikesh se karne ka Faisla liya hai, Lekin iska ye matlab nahin ke Yahaan tu  kuch bhi Kar sakti hai, Vadhera Pariwaar Khaaskar Swamini jee ko Shikayat ka koe Mauka mat dena. Itna to main Samajhti Hun ke tu is Shaadi se Zyada khush nahi hai ...Par hamara nahi toh apni behen ki khushiyon ka toh khyaal Karna...


Manvi - Di Kahaan khush hain, wo toh bas apke kehne par ...

     

Beeji( cutting her between ) - usne haan zarur mere kehne par ki Thi par main ye bhi jaanti Hun ke wo Viren ko bahut pasand  Karti hai. Teri baaton  ko bhi main Samajhti Hun par isime Jeevika ki bhalai aur Khushi hai , fir Ek din toh use Jaana hi hai na...mat aa uski khushiyon ke beech ...


    She didn't listened further & ran away. She went to her room fighting back her tears & thinking  how can beeji accuse her of coming in between Jeevika's happiness...her Di's happiness. No she can't cry ...Manvi Choudhary don't cry that easy & why should she cry on a false accusation. & Di...beeji can't be right ...she don't love him !!!

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A voice snapped her back to reality as she saw her Di Standing there with a complaining face...

J- tu Itni Shaam ko Terrace par Kyu gai ...Aur mujhe bataya kyu nahi...

M - doesn't matter does that ...aap Waise bhi pahunch Gaye..

J- mannu...

M - Arre Di ap bhi na..apko pata hai ajkal na california almonds ki koe nayi ad aati hai, usme tum se hi ke lyrics use kiye hain..ache hain !! mai aise hi wo gaate gaate pahunch gayi !! Aur waise bhi  ...

  She left it mid way after a I-know-it-all glare from Jeevika

But she ain't the only one who went to terrace without telling , She smirked to herself as she continued her series of thoughts 

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Yes she don't love him !! 


She composed herself & went towards terrace ..but stopped herself when she heard voices , she slowly proceeded & took a glance ... Viren & Jeevika were talking there. 


'  huh maybe he forgot way to His court & landed right on our roof ' , she muttered to herself & was about to go & interrupt them when she suddenly noticed Jeevika laughing ...the laugh which never fails to make her smile. She just stood there watching them talk, laugh & occasionally blushing too. Jeevika seemed genuinely happy ...somewhat similar to when she is with Maanvi. Suddenly Viren shifted their convo ...

Viren - Waise Jeevika..aap Manvi ke itna close hain, apne socha hai kabhi ap Uske Bina Kaise reh paayengi...

Jeevika - nahin, kuch chize Waqt par chod Di Jayein toh hi acha Hota hai. Mannu wajood hai mera...mere jeene ka Aur Main apse Pehle bhi Keh chuki Hun ke ye Badal nahi sakta...Main jaanti Hun ke aane wala Waqt ham dono ke hi liye mushkil Hoga ..par usse bhagne ka koe fayda nahi hai...Aur usse door toh main kabhi jaa hi nahi sakti...Kabhi nahi ...


 Tears rolled down her cheeks ...she wiped them & turned away from Viren..

Viren - Jaanta Hun...ap usse door kabhi ho hi nahi sakti Aur na hi kabhi main aisa hone dungaa & I promise Shaadi ke bad bhi you two will spend a lot of time together. I love you Jeevika & I love the relation you share with Manvi ...& I don't want to be the cause of misery for you two..


Jeevika looked at him & that assurance ...I love you too Viren ..

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The same voice again took her back. She was now done with work & sitting beside her getting ready to sleep...but sleep was nowhere visible in those eyes...

 " It's last time we are here In this room like this "...was all her Di's eyes could convey 


" It's not gonna effect us ...Never...Trust me",  hers replied


'I do ' , she mumbled Quietly & tried to sleep with her head on Maanvi's hand. Somehow She was the weaker one this time seeking peace in an exceptionally calm mannu...

 Maanvi could sense the restlessness in Her Di, & tried to put her to sleep...


Tu Jahaan Main Wahaaann...Sang Sang Yun Chalun Tere, Jaise Tera Aasmaaam

    

Jo Dhoop Nikli Chaayaa Ban Jaunga

Jo ho Tu akeli Saaayaa Ban Jaunga

Jo Uljhan Me ho Man,  Main Behlaungaa

Tu Jaahaan Main Wahaan...Sang Sang Yun Chalun Tere Jaise Tera Aasmaan


Ho Gham ke Baadal Mujhpe Tham jaane de

Baicheniyon ko Mujhse Takraane de

Dukhti ho Koe Baat Mujhpe Aane de...


Dil sochta tha Ke Koe apna Ho..Koe Raaz na Ho Jo Usse Rakhna ho..

Aankhein Na Kholun Main Shaayad Sapna Ho..

Tu Jahaan Main Wahaan...sang sang Yun Chalun Tere Jaise Tera Aasmaan

   Jaiseee Teraaa Aasmaaan


She looked sideways only to see a tear escaping her right eye & that angelic smile of hers on face...which was a lot peaceful now. She closed her eyes & fell asleep soon.

 Maanvi didn't bothered to put her to place & drifted to sleep herself ...Continuing the events of that beautiful day in her dreams...

 

      It must be so painful, to watch her go...to let her go !!

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 I love you too Viren...

She couldn't think clearly anymore... Running  furiously out of house without caring for direction & found herself in front of Ganga Ghat, Her head was spinning 


 ' apna nahi toh behen ki khushiyon ka khyal Karna'

' Mai jaanti Hun wo Viren ko pasand karti hai '

' mannu wajood hai mera aur mere Jine ka, aane wala waqqt ham dono ke liye hi mushkil Hoga'

 ' I love you Jeevika...I love you too Viren'

'  Mat aa uski khushiyon ke beech '

' Usse door toh main kabhi jaa hi nahi sakti ...kabhi nahi '


...she was about to fall when someone held her ...


"Kya hua Maanvi Di ap thik toh ho na " , asked a worried Dabbu sprinkling water on her face .

'I am okay ' , she mumbled slowly & they sat down there looking at the waves quietly.

 After a while..

M - tu yahaan kya Kar raha hai ...kaam nahi tha ghar par ?

D - tha...par ..

M- par kya...dabbe thik toh hai na tu .       

  She added looking at his face


D ( quietly ) - Di ap bhi Jeevika Di ke Hame chodkar Jane ko lekar pareshan ho na ! 

M - Dabbu ...

D- Mai bhi soch raha tha ki Di ki Shaadi ho jayegi ...tab ghar kitna ajeeb sa lagega na , sab kitni jaldi ho raha hai. Par Di kitni khush hain na..

   She suddenly remembered why she came here & tears welled up in her eyes

M - Pata nahi main itni Galat aur Selfish kab ho gayi...

D - di kya hua...ap aise kyun Bol Rahe ho..


M ( Quietly ) - I'll let her go...I have to !!


Dabbu - aap selfish nahi ho Di...pata hai mujhe bhi aisa lagta tha, Mai bhi nahi chahta tha ke Jeevika Di Jayein , par mujhe laga aap Kar sakte ho toh Mai kyu nai ..

    She finally broke down & they hugged sharing their sorrows , guilt ...watching those peaceful waves..

Manvi ( wiping her tears ) - chal Dabbu ..Hame ghar Jaana chahiye, dophar ho gayi sab dhund Rahe hone Hame. Aur bahut ho chuka Rona...we need not only to be strong but also happy ...Di ke liye itna toh Kar hi sakte hain na ! 

 He nodded & they went home together ...without any burden !

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Viren was slowly coming down using a rope & was relieved when he could feel ground beneath him. He turned around to go only to bump in Maanvi . He knew Manvi ain't very fond of him, so wasn't sure if she would tell beeji or not.

Manvi - aree jeeju badi jaldi baatein ho gayi apki...don't worry main beeji ko nahi bataungi but this better be last time before marriage ...do weeks tak ka Intzaar toh Ab Karna padega apko.

Viren was stunned for a while, not only because she called him jeeju so sweetly but also because she seemed truly happy , her eyes beaming with happiness just like when she is with Jeevika..


V - Err..thanks.

  They chatted for a while & then Dabbu was called by someone ..

V -  Manvi I also wanted to say that I never meant to take your place & ...

"I know & I do know you 'r best for Di...little things... how you cared for her. I always ignored them on purpose just to convince myself. I am sorry ...but hey that doesn't mean You won't have to deal with me if Shez ever unhappy because of you " , she added mischievously.

  & they just laughed ...together for the first time ...

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Finally the long awaited day Arrived & Everything went Flawless, That is if we don't count Virat & Maanvi's fight over Viren's shoes, some of Chachi's remarks which left Swamini red as a carrot & Dabbu's complains that He couldn't get Enough jalebis & Ofcourse arrival of One of Jeevika's fellow teachers which Manvi & punters pretended not to notice !!!


It was time for Vidai. Maanvi packed all of Jeevika's important things in a separate bag & Placed It in Viren 's Car, Who was Assuring her that he'll take care of Jeevika & All other things  (1. As to make sure she eats sth ,2. That she changes in some light wears from that Lehnga , 3.That never believe when she says I already ate,4. DO NOT lie to her ...Goes on till 457 ) that she wrote down on a paper for him to follow...

Finally she went In & They all came for Vidai , With Maanvi holding the heavy attire for her. Virat opened the car door as he saw them Approaching...


Everyone was In tears Except Maanvi who much to Both families's surprise was smiling. As she made Jeevika sit in the car..

,  She pulled Jeevika's Dupatta which was touching ground putting it in her lap, Pecked her forehead & wiped the tears In her eyes assuring her that everything wil be fine..She slowly closed the door Watching the Car go Away...watching her go, letting her go...The car turned & finally went out of Sight...as she kept smiling

    Its Indeed...like death, to let you go !!                 


            ISHQ DI MERE MITRAAN PEHCHAAN KI

              MIT JAAYE JADON ZIDD APNAAN DI


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Im so damn sure, this one's for Neha.
Beautifully written.
So well expressed.
Jeeman never fail to amaze me.

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ktloversera

Im so damn sure, this one's for Neha.
Beautifully written.
So well expressed.
Jeeman never fail to amaze me.


   Yup...Exclusively & Solely For bafee Heart
Thanks mate ...


I just thought for a change, today ...not to make dahi of her DiMag for update & put my lazy & crappy mind to work LOL
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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Haha no making dahi . Rofl.

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged
aaah.. nai padhna mujhe abhi par the starting lines.. that song...KILLLERRR!!!

i will be back later...

love you Pliyuuu :*

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 5:04pm | IP Logged
absolutely beautiful

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amazing!!!

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beautifully written and portrayed Clap

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