Originally posted by havokhotline
I just went 'Awww' through the entire thing. :D
Brilliantly depicted emotions from your end. ;) I loved it! :D
Thanks so much for the comment! It means a lot
I'm really glad you liked it!!!
Originally posted by iiDona
Alright, read the part, it was almost impeccable when it comes to an Espresso date.
Yep agreed... Tbh, I would love an Espresso date... But for now, I'll just write about it instead
About the details, I see you played it safe not mentioning the city.
Yea.. I figured I should stick to the feelings and emotions rather than contrasting Asad and the city.. That was my intention at first, to not include Zoya, but I'm a hopeless romantic
Do you live here as well?
Not downtown... But I lived in Toronto for a couple of years, I'm in Brampton now
Though I'm going to uni next year, and Downtown is where I'll be
Fair enough, either way. I personally would not want to know what was wrong with Zoya. Hey, it is your call. Do continue writing, I will be sure to check out your works as they come along.
There are a lot of requests to continue it... I'll probably be continuing it.. But I respect your opinion... That's kind of why I ended it there.. But let's see :P
BTW, I cannot afford Starbucks either. I am a Tim Hortons/Williams person. My coworkers, on the other hand, have taken it upon themselves to turn me broke. Peer pressure to drink Starbucks everyday. I am trying to switch to tea so that I do not have to conform #StudentLife.
Conformity... We're all victims to it
Anyway.. Thanks a lot for the comment!
Means a lot to me :D
Take caree <3 Hope you have the strength in you to switch to tea so you don't turn broke
Originally posted by --Kriti--
wowww this is so good...
should be one of the best os of the week...:)
Aww! That's so sweet of you! Thank you soo muchh
Originally posted by muzzy_skHey it was awesome yaar and the title was well give! Asad's feeling were described so well and loved your writing style too. Would love to read the next part so please do continue.. And also write about Zoya's problem.
Loved the OS. Thanks for the PM. :)
Heyy! Thanks a lot for the comment!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed read it!
Will definitely try to continue soon... :)
And my pleasure for the pm
Originally posted by laizu
Its a nice OS. Loved it.
How time changes people. Wishing in the show also we will see Asad Zoya talking and smiling over the coffee cup.
Yepp.. I'm waiting for that day! :) To see the change in them as they spend moments conversing with each other as friends, at least, without fighting
Originally posted by anamika2010
hey hinal sis,i have already read it on blog..its awesome! loved it...
Hey dii :D Thanks so much for the comment!
I'm really glad you loved it
Originally posted by Rarepearl
hey the os was beautiful. it was sad to know about the death of Dilshaad and Asad being all alone for years. Zoya had also lost her family. it's good they shared their grief wid the other n know dat dey hav mutual feelings too. i hope u continue dis os to a proper end where dey r together.
Hey Nimra :)
Thanks soo much for the comment
I will try my best to continue the OS and give it a nice ending
It may take a while, but I'll do it for sure
Originally posted by Mus@
Beautifully written and expressed
Thank youuu :D The comment means a lot to me
Originally posted by kandygrover
Really cute os:)
Heyy! Thank you for the comment
Originally posted by vampyrgirlricha
OMG it was superb,awsm, fantabolous...really cute ...ab toh update quikly yr...n wht happened to zoya???
HEYYY! How are youu????
And thanks for the commment
I'm glad you liked it
Zoya ko kya hua.. I dont even know..
I have to find out
I'll try to find out.. and that too very soon