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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written and expressed ClapClap

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
Really cute os:)

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
OMG it was superb,awsm, fantabolous...really cute ...ab toh update quikly yr...n wht happened to zoya???

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 4:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _Oishi_

wow..amazing writing skill..loved it..u should write more
Hey!  Thanks so much :D  I'm so glad you liked it!!  Big smile


Originally posted by hooriya93

I really like the title. I am not any good at titles but I think yours is awesome. I really liked how described Asad's feelings of loneliness in the beginning. Nicely written. Although I do wish you had explained why Zoya was depressed. I would like to find out. 
Good job.
Heyy!  Thanks for the comment!  D'aww Embarrassed  I'm usually not good with titles too...
I just got inspiration from Starbucks.. and perhaps Ishq waala love too LOL
I will try to think of what I could write about as an extension of the OS :)
Thanks once again! Appreciate it :D


Originally posted by AlwaysLife19

OMG!! Look who's here? Meri SG waali friend! Where were u all these days???
Anyways, coming to the OS, it was beautiful... No, seriously... And I would love to know what happens next...
Heeey :D  Whats up??
I've been busy with school.. Final high school year is a pain in the behind Tongue
Thankss :D  I'll try to continue this one as a Two part OS Wink
Appreciate the comment Big smile


Originally posted by abhiyakreya

awsm!
just loved it!
pls do continue it pretty please :)
Heyy!!  Thanks for the comment :D
I will definitely try to continue it :)


Originally posted by -RadxAli-

HINAL ! AHHH ! YOU ARE ACTIVE HERE ! =O I missed you damn ! *Rushing to inform Richa* HInz wroote a OS ! =D
:D  Big smile  I just became active noww LOL  I missed you sooo much!!
:P  OS accha laga? Wink


Originally posted by Piyuksgian

Hey, hinal di...its awesum...cont soon
Heyy!  Aww, I don't get called di very often LOL  
But thanks for the comment!! :D
I'll continue as soon as I get an idea Wink


Originally posted by _palak_

plz plz plz continue soon !
Hey :)  For sure I'll continue... Though warning: I am lazy.. It make take a while xP


Originally posted by SilentPromises

I loved how you framed Asad's emotions and his determination together... also the name of the OS is so catchy.. loved it Clap
Heyyy!  Thanks for the comment :D
I'm really glad you liked it!
It took a while to pen down, just to be somewhat consistent, and I'm glad it was appreciated Smile

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by havokhotline

I just went 'Awww' through the entire thing. :D
Brilliantly depicted emotions from your end. ;) I loved it! :D
Embarrassed  Thanks so much for the comment!  It means a lot Big smile
I'm really glad you liked it!!!


Originally posted by iiDona

Alright, read the part, it was almost impeccable when it comes to an Espresso date.
Yep agreed... Tbh, I would love an Espresso date... But for now, I'll just write about it instead Wink About the details, I see you played it safe not mentioning the city. 
Yea.. I figured I should stick to the feelings and emotions rather than contrasting Asad and the city.. That was my intention at first, to not include Zoya, but I'm a hopeless romantic LOL
Do you live here as well? 
Not downtown... But I lived in Toronto for a couple of years, I'm in Brampton now
Though I'm going to uni next year, and Downtown is where I'll be Big smile
Fair enough, either way. I personally would not want to know what was wrong with Zoya. Hey, it is your call. Do continue writing, I will be sure to check out your works as they come along. 
There are a lot of requests to continue it... I'll probably be continuing it.. But I respect your opinion... That's kind of why I ended it there.. But let's see :P
BTW, I cannot afford Starbucks either. I am a Tim Hortons/Williams person. My coworkers, on the other hand, have taken it upon themselves to turn me broke. Peer pressure to drink Starbucks everyday. I am trying to switch to tea so that I do not have to conform #StudentLife.  
Conformity... We're all victims to it LOL  
Anyway.. Thanks a lot for the comment!
Means a lot to me :D
Take caree <3  Hope you have the strength in you to switch to tea so you don't turn broke WinkThumbs Up  


Originally posted by --Kriti--

wowww this is so good...
should be one of the best os of the week...:)
Aww!  That's so sweet of you!  Thank you soo muchh Embarrassed


Originally posted by muzzy_sk

Hey it was awesome yaar and the title was well give! Asad's feeling were described so well and loved your writing style too. Would love to read the next part so please do continue.. And also write about Zoya's problem. 
Loved the OS. Thanks for the PM. :)
Heyy!  Thanks a lot for the comment!! Big smile
I'm really glad you enjoyed read it!
Will definitely try to continue soon... :)
And my pleasure for the pm Smile


Originally posted by laizu

Its a nice OS. Loved it. 
How time changes people. Wishing in the show also we will see Asad Zoya talking and smiling over the coffee cup.
Hey!  Thanksss Big smile  Yepp.. I'm waiting for that day! :)  To see the change in them as they spend moments conversing with each other as friends, at least, without fighting LOL


Originally posted by anamika2010

hey hinal sis,i  have already read it on blog..its awesome! loved it...
ur di
Hey dii :D  Thanks so much for the comment!
I'm really glad you loved it Big smile


Originally posted by Rarepearl

hey the os was beautiful. it was sad to know about the death of Dilshaad and Asad being all alone for years. Zoya had also lost her family. it's good they shared their grief wid the other n know dat dey hav mutual feelings too. i hope u continue dis os to a proper end where dey r together.
Nimra
Hey Nimra :)
Thanks soo much for the comment Big smile
I will try my best to continue the OS and give it a nice ending Smile  It may take a while, but I'll do it for sure Wink


Originally posted by Mus@

Beautifully written and expressed ClapClap
Heyy!
Thank youuu :D  The comment means a lot to me Big smile


Originally posted by kandygrover

Really cute os:)
Heyy!  Thank you for the comment Big smile


Originally posted by vampyrgirlricha

OMG it was superb,awsm, fantabolous...really cute ...ab toh update quikly yr...n wht happened to zoya???
HEYYY!  How are youu????
And thanks for the commment Embarrassed
I'm glad you liked it Big smile
Zoya ko kya hua.. I dont even know..
I have to find out LOL  I'll try to find out.. and that too very soon Tongue

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
brampton, I see. I am currently in Brampton to visit someone.  I assume you will be going to St. George or Ryerson. Small world. Good luck to you :)

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by iiDona

brampton, I see. I am currently in Brampton to visit someone.  I assume you will be going to St. George or Ryerson. Small world. Good luck to you :)

Wow.. That's interesting!!
Yepp Smile  I'm actually confused between both LOL
But first, I have to get acceptances.. So just waiting for those now Wink
Thank you =)

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
I want more
and pm too

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