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Idle _Oishi_

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
wow..amazing writing skill..loved it..u should write more

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Idle hooriya93

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 12:06am | IP Logged
I really like the title. I am not any good at titles but I think yours is awesome. I really liked how described Asad's feelings of loneliness in the beginning. Nicely written. Although I do wish you had explained why Zoya was depressed. I would like to find out. 
Good job.

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Idle AlwaysLife19

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
OMG!! Look who's here? Meri SG waali friend! Where were u all these days???

Anyways, coming to the OS, it was beautiful... No, seriously... And I would love to know what happens next...

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 2:46am | IP Logged
awsm!

just loved it!

pls do continue it pretty please :)

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Idle -RadxAli-

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 2:54am | IP Logged
HINAL ! AHHH ! YOU ARE ACTIVE HERE ! =O I missed you damn ! *Rushing to inform Richa* HInz wroote a OS ! =D

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Hey, hinal di...its awesum...cont soon

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Idle _palak_

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 5:07am | IP Logged
plz plz plz continue soon !

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Idle SilentPromises

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SilentPromises

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 5:46am | IP Logged
I loved how you framed Asad's emotions and his determination together... also the name of the OS is so catchy.. loved it Clap

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