Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   

Arhi SS:WAUFMAIO (Page 97)

kaur94 IF-Dazzler
kaur94
kaur94

Joined: 20 April 2012
Posts: 2886

Posted: 25 March 2013 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Aww this was great loved it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilli

divyaarnavsr Goldie
divyaarnavsr
divyaarnavsr

Joined: 04 August 2012
Posts: 1695

Posted: 28 March 2013 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Recommended by rasgulla. . Thank u so much. . I read al parts in a go. . Phew its gr8. .la ws to gud . . Nevr u said her relatnshp status til d epilogue Tongue
Loved ts Hot headed Arnie n khushi. . Though arnav a lot *winks*

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilli

-Shalu- Senior Member
-Shalu-
-Shalu-

Joined: 18 February 2010
Posts: 576

Posted: 02 April 2013 at 8:42pm | IP Logged

Hey Semanti, this is one of the best stories that I have read in a long time! It's been so long that I laughed so heartily reading a FF, I had so much fun reading this. I am so, so, so glad that you were encouraged to share your story in IF, I cannot imagine missing out on this splendid tale. Really.

Your Arnav is one of the most sought after dream man! Just curious, is your Arnav a figment of your imagination or is he inspired by a person you personally know? Seriously, do they even make man like him anymore? He is simply perfect in all sense.  *Sighs* How I wish I could pre-order one. :P

Lavanya, what can I say about this amazing girl that hasn't already been said? I simply love, love, love her!  As cheesy as it may sound, I think people like Lavanya are angels sent in the form of friends. She is just the kind of friend that someone like Khushi needed in her life.

& finally Khushi, honestly I never hated her, though some of her actions were foolish at times but hate, no, her defense mechanisms reminds me too much of someone.. I seriously loved your note in Chapter 13 for asking readers not to judge her even though it was Arnav in question..

True enough some scars really do last a lifetime, unfortunately even time cannot heal some pain. Not everyone is lucky enough to have a loving set of parents & when one have gone through a traumatic childhood, it is not easy to just take that leap of faith and give love a chance. But she did it at last, she trusted him to give them a chance! Woohoo! :D

You are a quirky & intelligent writer, this FF will certainly go into my re-reading list & I almost never read the same stories again, that's how much I loved this.. & Yay, there is a sequel! I'm soo happy!! Will pm you my email add, please do add me to your email list. Thanks in advance.  :)


Edited by -Shalu- - 02 April 2013 at 10:19pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilli

crazyyfan IF-Sizzlerz
crazyyfan
crazyyfan

Joined: 04 May 2012
Posts: 15215

Posted: 03 April 2013 at 6:13am | IP Logged

Unres ~

Read this story at one go and it was amazing !!! Arnav a pilot Awww Embarrassed
 
Thank you for giving an altogether different Arnav and Khushi but still keeping the main essense of their characters intact.Loved all the references in between and all the witty lines!
 
ROFL The excuse wer Khushi says lavanya are her are seeing each other as couple is hilarious and i could very imagine the scene !
 
And yes i totally loved Lavanya here and her playing cupid.The conversations / message exchange between lavanya and Arnav was cute and funny Smile thats such an adorable bonding !
 
Overall an awesome job Clap The story was funny,cute ,Witty and romantic Smile a kind of story i prefer reading!
 
P.S - LOL I think this must be the longest comment ive ever return Tongue


Edited by crazyyfan - 03 April 2013 at 10:48pm

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

meera30CheshireBilli

Eccentrica IF-Sizzlerz
Eccentrica
Eccentrica

Joined: 11 December 2012
Posts: 18021

Posted: 03 April 2013 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
Just fabulous!
I can go on saying as to how every chapter was simple awesome and that it didn't fail to put a smile on my face (even the mushy ones, I must add) or the fact that you portrayed Lavanya in such an endearing way that the readers liked her as much as they loved your protagonists...words aren't enough to describe the absolute joy I felt on reading this SSBig smile.

A truly wonderful epilogue as well.Embarrassed

Off to read all other works of yours and to thank a friend again for having recommended this SS to me.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilli

LooneyLuna IF-Dazzler
LooneyLuna
LooneyLuna

Joined: 17 April 2012
Posts: 4205

Posted: 06 April 2013 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
Hello! 
Expelji was kind enough to point me in the direction of your index. And I have had a blast since.  

Reading this SS is like sitting through a Good chick flick..the one's they hardly make these days..

You had me at Men in Uniforms. And then you added the word Captain..and before I could react to that there were stormy grey eyes. I know you have already called dibs on this arnav, so I beg you to write me another one..because the asr of your imagination is freaking amazing. (i will pay you!)

I love the role reversal..in terms of past baggage carried from arnav to khushi. Something I have always wanted to see happen.

Khushi as a phangirl of Varun!!! How do you come up with this stuff?! Hilarious. Her character is really endearing, wouldn't say completely relatable..cause of the aforementioned baggages, and yet plausible. 

And who doesn't want a best friend like Lavanya!! Nosey, equally weird and FUN! 

I like that you added Garima and the role you gave her = perfect. 

And who can complain when you are in a location as breezy as Goa. 

I enjoy the references you add throughout the story, may it be angry birds or Sharbat (I fell of my chair at that one..I always keep reading hazel eyes, but this never clicked!). 

The language you use makes it such a easy and fun read. 

Whats more the IPK rabba-vey wala passion is always in the air..I guess when you have an ASR this Hot its kind of hard not too, for anyone let, if it is our Chamkili! 

Lastly, I enjoy khushi's monologues a LOT. It reminds me of this TV show called offspring..

Still have to read through the rest of your index..but just wanted to let you know I am hooked! 

Thank you for weaving this amazing SS. 

Hitashi 

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilliEXPELLIARMUS

Khuarv Senior Member
Khuarv
Khuarv

Joined: 31 December 2011
Posts: 463

Posted: 07 April 2013 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
I just finished reading the ff. I totally loved it. The best part
of your ff was the unexpected twist and turns Wink ,never under
mining the seriousness of the plot but in turn making the story
interesting. I rofl when khushi tells Arnav that she is a lesbian
in order to avoid going out with him ROFL . Lavanya is such an
awesome friend. Khushi is finally happy due to the persistent nature of
Arnav and lavanya. After reading your ff one hopes for a true friend
like lavanya and a patient life partner like Arnav. Amazing work.
Garima is one strong character to have endured the abuse and
still make her life worthwhile by progressing professionally
Clap .Hope to see more of your work in the future.

Edited by Khuarv - 07 April 2013 at 11:31pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilli

AquaSandhya IF-Sizzlerz
AquaSandhya
AquaSandhya

Joined: 13 August 2012
Posts: 13933

Posted: 10 April 2013 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
I have been really lucky of late. Have been coming across some great FF's from writers who love Arnav and Khushi.

Came across WAUFMAIO accidentally and boy amd I happy that it happened!!!!! Comedy is a difficult genre to write and you certainly have a knack for writing humourously. Added to that is your ability to write an emotional comedy. WOW, you certainly are blessed. 

It is so good to read romantic stories that are easy to read and enjoyable all the way. Love and angst do not necessarily have to co-exist. Yes, life and love go through ups and downs but the down side does not necessarliy have to rip a person apart. and that is how you handled it. Khushi with all her emotional baggage handled her pain pretty well, I should say given the fact it is her father who is the root cause. Your Arnva on the other hand is my dream guy. So patient, willing to wait while being there for her all the time. 

Loved the way you developed Lavaya's character. Your Lavanya is witty, courageous, cute, hot and above all the best kind of friend everyone wants. 

I read WAUFMAIO before your OS's unfortunately coz I didn't see your index. Despite that I loved every single of them. I have read the sequel too. Loved everyone of them. Looking forward to reading more. 


 


The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CheshireBilli

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Arhi os:HILARIOUS CONVO BETWEEN ARHI.

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 10 11

Author: Hina69   Replies: 81   Views: 43842

Hina69 81 43842 18 April 2015 at 7:21am by anera
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

Author: Hina69   Replies: 78   Views: 34996

Hina69 78 34996 26 March 2015 at 7:21pm by frankie123
ArHi FF: Koi Aap Sa~Thread 2 Link on Pg 140 & Pg 1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 139 140

Author: love_iqbal_khan   Replies: 1115   Views: 111432

love_iqbal_khan 1115 111432 23 March 2015 at 4:57pm by ayaman
Arhi OS: Mints23's Birthday Gift - Stolen Moments

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

Author: chitrajay   Replies: 168   Views: 6996

chitrajay 168 6996 04 April 2014 at 2:08am by arpitasharma
Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 213   Views: 94537

jasminerahul 213 94537 26 January 2012 at 3:08am by meluhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index