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mariarauf48

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Joined: 12 May 2012

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
OMG the update was super duper long
hats of to you for writting such a long update 

now coming to the update i loved it 
literally felt so sad for jeevika 
the way u described her feelings was just mindblowing 
poor viren couldnt see her like this 
loved what he did for her 
the flashbacks poor viren 
virat i hate you how can he do this with jeevika 
the way u described theit togatherness when they hugged totally loved it 
man truely you are the best writtter 
keep it up ClapClapClap


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KtYammie13

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Joined: 15 January 2013

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
Wow Wow Wow...
Loved it so very much...
Every line was so touchy...and so emotional...
You are the best writer... sersiously... the way you just personalize every character... Hats off yaar... :D
I'm now a huge fan of your writing...
you're just mind blowing... :D
And Virat... How dare he do that with our jeevika... Angry

And thnks for the PM..
Please cntinue to write more n more stories...
Love it...
N i knw i'm younger than you...
but dnt get upset if you dnt get comments and all... dude u have such a big fan fallowing... (Including Me) Wink
So even if some selfish people don't comment... we are there... :D
So.. thnks for making my day by this story... :D 

Syed695

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Nice Update..! jeevika went thorugh a lot...Loved Viren here...hope he brings her out from the past...Thnks for the PM~!

radzzz123

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Joined: 30 August 2012

Posts: 2911

Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
an amazing update
feeling sorry for jeevika
and virat , he is so mean..
just wants money 
hope now jeevika's life would change
thanx for the pm
and give an update soon..Smile

girl97

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:34am | IP Logged



that was so great - amazing - wonderful
no words can describe it 
i got so into the sotry
it sounded reality 
perfectly written 

2189mansi

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Joined: 31 March 2012

Posts: 867

Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Hey thanks a lot for such a super long update. Bt it was jus awesome. Too good. I cud actually imagine the scene happenin in front of my eyes. Dat virat is such a b*****d. Hw can some be lyk dis. And virika wer jus adorable lyk always:-) update soon dear.

arjunadisidpari

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:50am | IP Logged
The update was totally hawa tight ;)
 
Your concept is amazing (as usual)
I feel really really sorry for Jeevikaaa...
But I didn't get why Virat said "There is no way In gonna be punishes for your crimes"
Her Crimes?? But in Jeevika's story she didn't do anything...
 
Loveed it btw do not delete me from yr buddy list bcuz I'm a regular reader :)

sanjana_cool

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 4:01am | IP Logged
im speechless kaysClapClapClap
u nailed it
mindblowing
poor jeevikaCry
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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