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vijika

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 10:45am | IP Logged
sorryy for latee reply was kind of busy with exams...

i'm sad because you ending itCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

about the update...i thought u will give romantic scenes...but this was awesome...loved the way viren took care of jeevika...the way he st0od by her...he is so perfect and jeevikaa to sweeettt...that was to perfectt...ahwww lovedd itt to the coreee

taking about your skills...u are an awesome writer i always look forwards for your storiees and updatees...you have such marveloous ideass and conceptt...that any reader just gets attached to it

lastly...thank you for an awesome storyy..and please writee some moreTongueTongue
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Beautiful update!! 
Loved the way u had portrayed virika's emotions! 
Viren is such a sweetheart! Love him loads for being the human he is!
The ending was awww...they had a girl!! It was soo sweet! 

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 10:24am | IP Logged
wow such a perefect ending for a perfect story...
well done truely amazingClap
Aaliya... sweet name... !
Viren is such a sweetie, he's like a stress releaser to Jeevs,!!
Lovely ending... seriously no words to describeThumbs Up

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 1:29am | IP Logged
I am prob the late lateef so see this work and few others of yours- don't go on forum too much thus miss lot of these FF/OS/SS!! But anyhoo better late than never! 

Like I say, I prefer to read more than write and this is def the kind of work I would read and actually loved to read this morning!! Simple concept yet works like magic due to your extraordinary treatment and superb flair with your writing! Detailed and descriptive narration of facts and plot and characters are well etched especially Jeevika in this work of yours stand out- one can feel her pain!!! 

And yeaa you were right, its not good- its def better than just that!!! I would have made longer comment but time constraints so wanted to put this out there briefly and I will save the rest for your other work i read day before yesterday- "You are my Heartbeat"!!! Superb job!

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Posted: 09 May 2013 at 6:16am | IP Logged
nice 

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Posted: 02 June 2013 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Awesomeee

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