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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
It was really nice...
Thanx for the PM...
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:04am | IP Logged
Plz update Kays, this is the best story you ever wrote! :)
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
KAYS MY GOD I already commented BUT SERIOUSLY MAN where these IDEAS came from :)  Thumbs UpClap
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 6:31am | IP Logged
aww that was amaazing part n thanxs for long part cont soon
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Omg!! What an update!! In soo speechless after reading this. I must say u r 1 of d best writers on this forum! D way u described every little thing!!
N virat!hw cud he even do that to jeevs!! I loved this update man!! Plz continue soon ya waiting for ur update!n plz pm me once its updated
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Res

UnRes

Eerrmmm ... M a bit late to comment but better late than never ... *winks*

I was always a fan of your writings, Kay.
They fascinate me as to the deepness, the content & the maturity...
Nd i get to learn more literature too :D

I never thought I would have to face such a dilemma ... i mean its a simple task like commenting on one's work ...
as an initial reaction I was just tongue tied at such a long update nd after composing myself, I had the urge to write !!

So What do I do?
Just shut up because I have NO WORDS to comment on this piece of yours or struggle to post a decent comment that would somehow equate the brilliance of this masterpiece of yours?

I will still opt for the second option because your work is commendable and deserves every bit of that praise!
Nd moreover i already resd nd dun wanna be a rude soul ... lol
Nd especially that u told me that u are soo excited for my comment ... I hope it's upto your expectations !!
So here I go & help me God to get this right!

The concept is extremely innovative !!
with what we have in front of us so far, its coming together beautifully!
As if the prologue was not enough nd u blewed me away with the first chapter !!
Not to forget your flair of writing, it speaks volumes! Each and every line executed beautifully with immense detail !!

As much as I was in love with Virat's character in your previous SS ... I hate him more in this one !!
He surely is not human nor an animal ... He is way worse than anything !! (No offense EHMMBH's actual Virat ) :P

Viren on the other hand is more like an angel to me nd I guess more to Jeevika <3

Jeevika the pitiful and hapless victim was potrayed soo beautifully nd perfectly that I thought as if she was narrating the story to me nd I could feel the pain :'(

The ending lines truly deserve to be called the icing to the cake !! <3

Believe me when I say this that your work is nothing but an ultimate piece of PERFECTION & this is not just limited to this specific OS but also applies to your beautiful collection of other creations as well!

Take a bow, mate!!!
Thank you for writing another story !! In my opinion with the amount of talent u have got in you I wonder how u stop yourself from showing off .. Lol :P    

Waiting eagerly for the next update ...
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the pm :D       

P.S : U must be wondering by now that how I was able to post such a hi fi comment ... Lol
So revealing the truth I gathered Ideas nd then my sister helped me with the words too ... But believe me its everything I wanted to write nd I meant it nd it was also really very hard for me :P



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Plzzz update update update
Waitin 4 another part plzzz
If possible update ASAP plzzz

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