Nothing Like Us:LAST CHAPTER on pg.30 - Page 7 | Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

mariarauf48

@mariarauf48

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG the update was super duper long

hats of to you for writting such a long update

now coming to the update i loved it

literally felt so sad for jeevika

the way u described her feelings was just mindblowing

poor viren couldnt see her like this

loved what he did for her

the flashbacks poor viren

virat i hate you how can he do this with jeevika

the way u described theit togatherness when they hugged totally loved it

man truely you are the best writtter

keep it up 👏👏👏

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KtYammie13

@KtYammie13

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow Wow Wow...

Loved it so very much...

Every line was so touchy...and so emotional...

You are the best writer... sersiously... the way you just personalize every character... Hats off yaar... :D

I'm now a huge fan of your writing...

you're just mind blowing... :D

And Virat... How dare he do that with our jeevika... 😡

And thnks for the PM..

Please cntinue to write more n more stories...

Love it...

N i knw i'm younger than you...

but dnt get upset if you dnt get comments and all... dude u have such a big fan fallowing... (Including Me) 😉

So even if some selfish people don't comment... we are there... :D

So.. thnks for making my day by this story... :D

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Syed695

@Syed695

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice Update..! jeevika went thorugh a lot...Loved Viren here...hope he brings her out from the past...Thnks for the PM~!

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Shadow_kissed

@Shadow_kissed

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

an amazing update

feeling sorry for jeevika

and virat , he is so mean..

just wants money

hope now jeevika's life would change

thanx for the pm

and give an update soon..😊

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girl97

@girl97

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

that was so great - amazing - wonderful

no words can describe it

i got so into the sotry

it sounded reality

perfectly written

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Mansi

@2189mansi

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey thanks a lot for such a super long update. Bt it was jus awesome. Too good. I cud actually imagine the scene happenin in front of my eyes. Dat virat is such a b*****d. Hw can some be lyk dis. And virika wer jus adorable lyk always:-) update soon dear.

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Sarah Kelly

@arjunadisidpari

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

The update was totally hawa tight ;)

Your concept is amazing (as usual)

I feel really really sorry for Jeevikaaa...

But I didn't get why Virat said "There is no way In gonna be punishes for your crimes"

Her Crimes?? But in Jeevika's story she didn't do anything...

Loveed it btw do not delete me from yr buddy list bcuz I'm a regular reader :)

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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

im speechless kays👏👏👏
u nailed it
mindblowing
poor jeevika😭
thanks for the pm
continue soon

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing update
Feeling sry fr jeevika

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virika_15

@virika_15

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing!!

Loved it!! Superb concept!

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