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Ariya SS- Just Married upt part 9 (pg 67) (Page 5)

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
Amazing update

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
Nice starting yrrr...Continue soon...

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
Dear Prava,

I am glad I am able to read one of your stories from the beginning. In general, I am by now quite tired of Ariya romances, most of them quite forced, but here you have attempted something novel and fresh, and I find it really promising. There will none of the endless sniping at each other in the office, none of Riya's casting longing glances at a surly Arjun, no secret tears, in short none of the very fatiguing stuff that has made me allergic to all thing Ariya.

You now have a professional Riya,  but one who is in another work area, who is open and easygoing and who treats Arjun as a friend-in-the-making, and an Arjun who is more tentative and unsure of himself than one could have imagined. The touch about Arjun almost ending up as a substitute teddy bear is delightful, and their interactions so far are also very well done.

All in all, as I said, most promising. I hope, no, I am sure that you will be able to maintain this touch.

Shyamala B.Cowsik

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Hi Friends I am back with a new SS..

I Hope you will like this story..It's a fresh story with no flashback of Roshni in Arjun's life.

This will mainly have friendship of Ariya and their cute mast and romance...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Not much the cases...LOL

Here i present you a small prologue..




Edited by sashashyam - 31 January 2013 at 3:03am

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
good start..dear..Smile
interesting to see a new arjun and cute riya..Day Dreaming
looking forward 4 ur next updates..ab jaldi se continue karo yaarThumbs Up

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
oh my god valliShocked...dats ..err...wellErmm...i dint expect dis kind of ss on arjun nd riya...Tongue
its...unexpected story...yea..i loved it.Embarrassed.bt i dnt knw hw to express dat hw bowled i am.
good going valliClap yea...

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
awesome yaar

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
nice.. Smile

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