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Ariya SS- Just Married upt part 9 (pg 67) (Page 25)

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Loved it
Update soon

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Awesome update! Clap
Ariya ka dupatta scene was cute! Smile
Continue soon!

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Fabulous chapter!
I love how you have portrayed Arjun and Riya's relationship!
Awww, Arjun remembers how she wore her duppatta when they first met...that is just adorable! ^_^
Can't wait to read more...especially their romance!
continue asap
thanks for the pm
pm me

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
so finaly comment kerne ka moka mil gaya..sorry dr kya karo litle bissyyyh...
hummm realy realy nice update...!!
i lv arjun mom...treat arjun. as a small child...
waooo lv to see kute romance...bw ariya...but next time...mor romance...!!!
every think is perfect...specialy the dress sequence...n after..tumhare paav kabhi jameen per nahi...n the car scence...grate update...
hop u forgiv me...!!
thanks dr for pm...!!
update soon with next part...waited for ariya... in mombai...!!!!

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Amazing chapter

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hey please update soon...eagerly waiting for the next part

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thank you so much all of you...

Read all your comments...I am so over whelmed by all the comments...

Big Thank you for all the silent readerLOL 
Thanks for liking it:)LOLLOL


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Firstly khaan pakad ke sorry...I am really Sorry for making you wait so long..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

iss baar maaf karo mujhe...aage se quick update karoongiTongue

Thank you for all your sweet sweet comments...

iss baar shayad boring update hogi...but yeh zaroori tha...Tried to make it romantic...Smile


PART 4

Arjun looked at his watch. Time was running up.

Riya, ab hume chalna chahiye, Arjun said. She quickly hugged everyone. Shree bought the luggage. Arjun went near Shree and asked, Shree tumne saare documents aur jo bhi important papers sab dhayan se pack kar diya na.Phir last moment mein koi problem na ho jaye.

Jiju, sab set hai. Par aapne Riya se baat kahi ya nahi?Tongue

Shree nahi yaar, ab tak nahi kahan. Par ab waqt aagaya hai, aaj bata dunga usse, Mumbai jana ka asli wajah.Smile

Everyone bid them bye. Both of them in car, Arjun noticed Riya was upset. Ab yeh Anshul hi smile la sakta hai tumhare face pe. Humesha itna bolti ho, par yeh kya Riya tum aaj itni chup. Drive mein kar raha hoon, toh tum baat kar sakti ho Arjun said with a naughty smile.

Aisa toh kuch nahi Arjun, she said with a cute smile.

Kya mein ek sawaal poochoon tumse. Arjun asked looking at Riya.

Haan. She said.LOL

Riya, kya tum kush ho?

Riya answered that with another question, aapne aisa kyun poocha?

Kahin shree ne toh kuch bataya nahi na'Embarrassed

Usine bataya kuch hai na.."Meine who photo bas gusse mein phaad di thi..aur baad hai jigsaw puzzle ki tarah photo ko jod bhi diya..aur kuch nahi..iss shree ko nahi chodungi mein.

Meine kaha tha na batane ke liye, phir bhi bata diya'hayee ab mera mann halka ho gaya..ab dil meine kuch nahin'Tongue

Oho tumahri baate kis speed se chalte haiLOLLOL'meine ek simple sa sawal poocha aur tum yeh kya bol rahi ho'mujhe toh samajh nahi aa raha hai..baaton ke beech breaks lagado toda'he said with a smirk.Smile

Aur yeh photo ka chakkar kya hai'shree ne kuch nahi bataya..ab jab tumne bata hi diya toh poori baat bolo Riya he said.

Sorry'. Sorry'. Sorry'. Sorry'. Sorry'. She said in a goEmbarrassed'hayee re shree ne kuch nahi bataya'toh aapne aisa kyun poocha ki mein khush hoon ya nahi'

Riya, tum pehle photo ki baat poora karo phir mein apni baat bhi boldunga Arjun said.

Vo kya hai na. Uss din mein bahaut gusse mein thi..Aur tabhi Maa ne aapki photo ki envelope meri haat mein de diya, par maa kuch bole , iske pehle meine uss envelope ko phaad diya'aur saat mein vo photo bhi...kyunki mujhe shaadi nahi karni thi'par baad mein maa ne samjhaya'aur kitni mushkil se meine aapki photo ko jod ke aapko dekha'.aapko dekhe shaadi ke liye haan bol diya meine'Smile

Par mein toh kush hoon, aapko kyun laga ki mein kush nahi hoon?

Iska matlab tum poori tarah se khush nahi ho. Apni job vajah se right? He said. Riya was silent for a while. She din't knew what to answer. Finally she managed to say, mein job karna chahthi hoon, par iska matlab yeh nahi ki mein shaadi se kush nahi hoon.[Arjun's self thought, arre Arjun yeh toh abhi bhi job karna chahti hai'accha hua tune permission le li'ab lagta hai Riya ko bhi batana hoga]SmileSmile

Par aapko yeh sab kaise pata? Riya asked him..

Arjun narrated the whole story about the company call, and how he spoke to her dad, How he and Rathore made the plan to go to mumbai. Riya tum office jao, aur phir sochna ki tum job karna chahithi ho ya nahi.

A widesmile appeared on Riya's face, but disappeared again'Maa aur papa she quipped.Tongue

Mere ma aur papa ko mein samjha loonga une koi pareshani nahi hogi. Unki chinta mat karo. Before Riya could say anything they reached Home. Both of them went inside.Smile

Achhe se liya apne ma papa se, Arjun's mom asked Riya. Haan maa sab ache se hogaya. Jao tum dono so jao, kal phir jaldi jaana hoga na. aaram karlo aaj raat.

Riya tum jao, mein maa aur papa se kuch baat karna chahta hoon he said.

She went to room and quickly changed her dress and lay down on bed. It was almost half an hour; she was waiting for him in the room. But Arjun was still talking to his parents. Kya baate ho rahi hogi..Riya was thinking.

Arjun, maa thank you so much'you are the best, he hugged his parents.Embarrassed

Chal nalayak, sab planning karne ke baad akhir mein hum logo ko bataya..LOLLOL

Maa, aisa nahi hai.

Cha lab sojao, ek hi toh ladla beta aur bahu hai...aap dono kush rahenge, tabhi hum kush rahenga beta'Samjhe ..his mom said. Aur haan dhyaan rak ab bahu ki zimmedari tumhari..dhyan rakhna uski.Smile

After a while finally Arjun came to room, he saw Riya tossing on the bed. He made slight noise to get some attention. Riya saw Arjun came back, she quickly came near Arjun and said,

Jaldi bataona, kya kaha ma aur papa ne..pet mein gud gudi ho rahi haiLOLLOL'jaldi batayiye na..

Arjun was lost in her. She was looking so girly in her cute pink night suit. Her loose pony. This was for first time Arjun saw a girl in such a wear.Embarrassed

Bataona!!she snapped him..

Kuch nahi! Bas tumhare khayal rakhne ko kaha'that's it.

Mujhe laga tha ki aap mere job ki permission lene gaye the..she made a puppy face.

Itni jaldi udaas ho jaati ho tum'he said hugging her from behindWink. Vaise tum kush ho sakti ho, tumhe job karne ki permission milgayi. She immediately turned to Arjun, her eyes were twinkling, both of them share a momentary eye lock.

Ahh!! She exclaimed'OuchAb kya hua Riya Arjun asked her.

Aapke haath itne cold haiLOLLOL. Mujhe kuch ho raha hai. Pata nahi kya.LOL

Arjun was shocked after that and he was smiling at her innocence. Riya, jab pehli baar kisiko hug karte ho na shaayad aisa hota hai.Embarrassed

Par aapko kaise pata'kahan se experience hai aapko. Riya said, hitting him on his chest.

Rathore ne bataya mujhe, ab chodo yeh sab, Arjun said and was about to leave.

Riya pulls him back and sorry!! Aap pakad sakte hai todi der ke liye. She took his hand and put his hand around her waist. She hugged him. Riya was completely embraced in Arjun's arm's.

He smiled and kissed her hair. Both of them went to bed.

Both of them turned to each other, held each others hands and had a peaceful sleep.

Next morning

Riya woke up early, she saw Arjun was still sleeping peacefully, she quickly got of the bed and took the shower and got ready.Smile

Good morning ma, she said taking blessings from her mother.

Tayariyan hogi na Riya..Aur haan job se zyaada pareshan mat ho'.tumhe jitney din chahiye job karlena'

Riya hugged and said thank you ma..

Maa, Maa Arjun was screaming from his room. Subah subah chai se neend khulti hai janab ki. Chai le ke jao. Police officer toh hai, par ghar mein tumko hi boss hona padega Riya, usse toh kuch bhi ghar ka kaam nahi aata Arjun's mom said about Arjun. Riya stood blushing..

Riya prepared Tea and held the tray and went to room. Good morning Arjun, she said giving the tea cup. Tumne banayi hai Arjun asked her. She nodded in yes. He took a sip and said, achhi bani hai.Smile

Both of them get ready, all the luggage was packed.

Rathore: Arjun, ho gayi tayari'.tum dono ek ghadi mein aao. Mein aur shree dusure ghadi mein aajayenge.

Riya was in room she heard shree's voice. She turned back, she was surprised to her her parents and shree there. Thanks maa, she said. Mujhe bahaut achha laga.

Arre Riya, yeh sab toh jiju ka plan tha'tum dono ko sendoff dene ke liye aagaye hum, Shree said giving his sister a hug.Embarrassed

Everyone bid them a bye and both of them happily travelled to Mumbai.

They reached Mumbai'

A new life for both of them'with lots of love, a great bond of friendship..small and cute fights between them'lots more of only Ariya..

Keep waiting for the new life of Ariya'.

To be continued..

I hope you all liked the update...

Finally both of them reached mumbai..ab romance ke liye time milega shayaad..LOLLOL

Reply kaisa laga yeh update...

reply with long comments...Embarrassed

silent readers...jaao reLOL..


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