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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged

The early morning breeze blows on my face,
I stand still for a minute-soaking it all in
The place that buzzes with crowds during the day,
Is calm,its resting giving its secrets away

Its beautiful,its serenity has made me drown,
Its vulnerable-it has let its guard down
It reminds me of myself-empty sometimes,yet so full...
Free of appearances,full of thoughts

Its times like these that the real beauty shows,
When through all pores,the deepest thoughts overflow

A flock of pigeons takes flight nearby,
Breaking out of my thoughts i see life crawl by...
Sometimes its this lack of speed I crave,
Amidst the wish for the crowds,its this loneliness that I crave

The flock is back-settling to peck on its feed,
I join the small group that feeds them,
In that moment-standing alone,
With my thoughts at rest-I am at peace'.
Thats what just a calm pleasant morning does to me'.



Edited by princess163 - 30 January 2013 at 9:52am

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Beautiful poem really put it beautifully the peace that a pleasant morning brings in...

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Awesome is the Word for your Creativity. I can resemble some of my Life's part regarding to your Poem! I always Hear these Pigeons Crowd and The Emptyness but calming silence in every Morning which gives me pleasure to Live, pleasure to dream big and pleasure to Make myself cheerfull All Day Around! , its just like a Phrase "A Thing of Beauty is Joy Forever" .

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

It reminds me of myself-empty sometimes,yet so full...
Free of appearances,full of thoughts
nice poem.  good job.
 


Thank you Smile

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dsupriya

Beautiful poem really put it beautifully the peace that a pleasant morning brings in...
 


Glad you liked it...thanks!Smile

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Awesome is the Word for your Creativity. I can resemble some of my Life's part regarding to your Poem! I always Hear these Pigeons Crowd and The Emptyness but calming silence in every Morning which gives me pleasure to Live, pleasure to dream big and pleasure to Make myself cheerfull All Day Around! , its just like a Phrase "A Thing of Beauty is Joy Forever" .

Please Write More and Elaborate them here! Regards.
 


Thanks a lot for your generous praiseEmbarrassed
Glad to find someone who feels similarlySmile
Nature, its beauty, its enormity and warmth make both a soothing and intriguing combination for me :)
I write quite a lotTongue
I could direct you to my blog if you would like to read moreEmbarrassed

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by princess163

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Awesome is the Word for your Creativity. I can resemble some of my Life's part regarding to your Poem! I always Hear these Pigeons Crowd and The Emptyness but calming silence in every Morning which gives me pleasure to Live, pleasure to dream big and pleasure to Make myself cheerfull All Day Around! , its just like a Phrase "A Thing of Beauty is Joy Forever" .

Please Write More and Elaborate them here! Regards.


Thanks a lot for your generous praiseEmbarrassed
Glad to find someone who feels similarlySmile
Nature, its beauty, its enormity and warmth make both a soothing and intriguing combination for me :)
I write quite a lotTongue
I could direct you to my blog if you would like to read moreEmbarrassed
mention not please!

I have always got some inspiration from God's creativity i.e Variation of Beauty in mature. It always make me Astonished whenever I see anything New.:)

Yeah, you can PM me that. However, i will advice you to Share your Creative Stuff here with us! And we will be overwhelmed reading master pieces!Embarrassed it will make activity here!

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