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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86
awesome update
maan fallen in love with geet in one meeting!!!!!!!!!
loved it...

can you tell me how to post picture??

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 11 years ago

anyone who can make banner for the ss??

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 11 years ago

recap:-so he excused himself and went towards the corridors to receive the call since it was very noisy in the hall...

-:part 9:-

He was discussing some project with adi over the phone and then he suddenly lost his voice...

he saw geet standing with pinky in the corrridor...maan was shockingly surprised..😆😆😆

he hid behind the pillar and tried to overhear their conversation because he saw geet was upset with something...he wanted to know reason of her sadness..pinky in order to uplift geet's mood was telling her that she should forget yestreday's event and cheer up...

they will soon buy a new fish tank for zoro...geet just noded her head..

maan(st):-oh!so she lives here...geet her name is geet...what a lovely name..just like her self...she is an orphan!!??,,,...but that does not matter ...she will soon have me and will be part of family...now maan u have to plan a meeting with her (maan babu itni si der mai itne sare sapne)....oh god!!i get so unpredictable...wen it cums to her..gosh!!

...hmmm..ok this sounds great...i should gift her a new fish tank,apologise and befriend her...hmm...

maan it looks so simple but is it??

he was all busy in his self thought , did not realije that geet and pinky have gone towards the hall where everyone was present...

adi again called him up since maan was no more replying...

maan's cell rang again and he was brought back to the world...he moved his gaze back to the same place where geet was standing earlier...,but then he realijed she has gone..

he got irritated and told adi that they will discuss the matter in the office.😡.😡😡

adi scared kept the call..

maan went back to the hall praying to see her once again...n the wish was fulfilled(meri kripa se)😆😆😆

she was standing near the golgappa stall..he could understand from her expressions that she loved them😊😊..he hid in a corner and clicked her picture 😉😉and saved it as his wallpaper in his mobile..⭐️

he spoke the words in his heart geet..maan ki geet😉😉

Edited by Desipunjaban - 11 years ago

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P0K0

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...very nice,

thank u 4 the pm.

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely update

maan ki geet..

loved it..

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 11 years ago

-:part 10:-

recap:- he spoke the words in his heart geet..maan ki geet..

On much insistence of pinky geet had stayed back till lunch and after that she left back to her orphanage...mr.dhawan asked maan to give gifts to the children an d others in the orphanage...everyone was called and they were standing in lines to receive the gifts...

dev has got everything arranged for the party before hand..(reminder😆😆)...(dev ko mat bhulna..😉😉)

maan hoped to see geet once before he leaves for today...and wished to hear something from her😕(now thats impossible)...

everyone one by one came to him ,took their gifts,thanked him and went back...

then came pinky's turn...she thanked him for the gift and went away...he waited till the last but geet never came..

not wanting to sound suspicious maan asked mr.dhawan ...is anyone left to receive the gifts...for which he ensured checking the list in his hand...dat no one is left..

not happy with the answer maan excused himself and went around in the orphanage to look for her, pretending to talk on phone...so that no one questions his present...(pyaar mei dimaag nahi chalta...stupid ideas hi aate hain😆)..

but not finding her he felt dejected and went back to the mansion...

he roamed in the lawn of the mansion restlesly..

he then sat on the swing ...took out his mobile and stared at geet's picture...

at nite maan was again and again thinking why was she not there again...he has checked every possible place...

does she live there or was she there to meet that other girl...(khali dimaag shitaan ka ghar hota hai..)😆

maybe she doesn't live there😕...questioning and answering self he decided to call the detectives...since they haven't shown up...

scared from maan singh khurana they told him the little info they have collected...he was told by the detectives that her name is geet handa(which he already knew) ,he being orphan(dats now confirmed to maan) and dat she usually visits the e mall to meet her friend pinky...

maan then sent a picture of geet...so that could be of any help...

they assured him they would get the other details soon...satisfied maan went to sleep ...

teaser:-maan's first introduction meeting with geet...and the biggest shock...

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice update

maan ke dimag ne kaam karna banh kar diya hai😆

poor maan ghar jane k pehle apni geet ko last time nahi dekh paya...

loved it

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Infinity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the update...continue soon

pm me

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey...

I read all parts of ur FF today...

and it is very interesting...

first few parts were very hard to read because of capital letters but then u changed it to normal writing concept and then it became very easy to read as well as it looks good also...

so Geet is mute and orphan...Maan is searching for her...he knows she is orphan but don't know that she can't speak also...what will be his reaction after knowing it...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Desipunjaban

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear reader,if you liked the content and want to read the story further click on the link below...i have shifted the story in the geet forum...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3419885

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