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itne jaldi meri demand complete ho gayi.. not bad.. LOL ok this update is for amrutha..(only_kriyaansh) she made me update today itself.. LOL so this one is for u.. 
m already warning u .. its an emotional update.. whatever is happening in current track is really getting on my nerves.. so maine apna poora gussa nikala hai iss update mein.. i really wish aisa kuch ho agar kriya comes back in the show.. 
enough of my bak bak.. now read the chappy. LOL 

Chapter-8


NEXT DAY IN COLLEGE..

The whole gang was in atrium thinking what 2 do.. (except rey)

Si: guys we need to do something..

Bh: yeh saala rey kaha reh gaya..??

Sw: rey aa jayega.. but plan kya hai..?

Sh: hume kuch aise situations create karne padenge jisse unn dono ko ek doosre se baat karne ke alawa aur koi option hi naa ho..

Mi: dude.. tum yeh kal bhi bata chuki ho.. but karenge kya woh toh batao..

Ri: wohi toh nahi pata.. think guys think..

All this was heard by one person.. obviously none other than taani.. she goes to girls locker room and thinks what to do..

T: kya karu kya karu..?? kuch aisa karna padega jisse kriya rey ko aur misunderstand kare and unpe gussa ho jaaye.. agar gussa ho gayi toh woh rey ko jaroor kuch naa kuch bolegi.. n woh sunkar m sure rey bhi chup nahi rahenge.. n unki dooriyaan aur badh jaayegi.. yes.. yahi right hai..

She was moving to and fro in the locker room n saw kriya coming toward the locker room.. n she starts her drama.. she goes inside the washroom..  (the place where there are mirrors and basin) and starts crying.. (crocodile tears)

Kriya comes in locker room to keep her bag when she hears someone crying.. she goes a lil inside and sees taani crying there.. she was about to turn back but stops when taani starts her drama..

T: hey krishnaji pata nahi yeh sab humesha mere saath hi kyu hota hai.. kyu.?? Kya galti hai meri.. yahi naa ki main rey se bahut bahut bahut pyaar karti hoon.. infact maine yeh college bhi toh sirf unkeliye join kiya tha.. and ab jab itne time baad rey mere liye kuch feel karne lage hai toh unka past unki life mein kyu wapas aa gaya.. agar kriya wapas nahi aati toh ab tak m sure rey mujhse apni feelings confess kar chuke hote.. hum toh confession ke itne paas the lekin kriya ne aakar sab bigad diya.. kyu krishnaji.. rey ne toh mujhse kaha tha ki woh life mein move on hona chahte hai.. unhone toh kabhi kriya se pyaar kiya hi nahi tha.. woh toh sirf attraction tha.. kabhi acche se confess tak nahi kiya tha.. I know rey kriya se pyaar nahi karta.. kyuki agar karte toh itni aasani se kriya ko jaane nahi dete.. he let her go coz he was okay with it.. toh ab mujhe avoid kyu kar rahe hai.. I love him and want him back.. 

Kriya listens to all this and leaves from there.. after she leaves taani wipes her tears and..

T: ab aayega mazaa.. jaha tak main kriya ko samajh paayi hoon m sure woh meri baton kaa hurt rey pe nikalegi.. n bingo..!! (and smiles an evil smile)

Kriya was walking in the corridor and all the things that taani said was roaming in her mind..

"unhone toh kabhi kriya se pyaar kiya hi nahi tha.. woh toh sirf attraction tha."

".. kabhi acche se confess tak nahi kiya tha"

"he let her go coz he was okay with it.."

K: kya sach mein main rey ke life mein kuch importance nahi rakhti.. toh fir uss din unhone mujhe hug kyu kiya..

She was lost in her thoughts and did'nt realise when did she come to atrium.. the gang saw her coming from one side and also rey from other side..

Mi: guys guys guys.. look there.. idea..

Misha snatched basket ball from Vicky and gave it to nil..

Mi: dude jao n isse kriya ke samne rakh do.. n make sure usse pata naa chale..

Vi: lekin isse kya hoga..

Mi: arey just wait n watch.. nil go naa..

Ni: okay..

Nil goes n keeps the basket ball infront of kriya.. kriya was lost in her world so did'nt see that.. on other hand even rey was busy in his mobile.. so even he does'nt see it..

Nil comes back and the whole gang hides behind the doors..  (it's the corridor)

Kriya was walking and bangs into basket ball and slips.. rey looks up on her scream and runs to save her from falling.. kriya shuts her eyes as she thinks she will meet the floor anytime .. but she falls directly in rey's arms.. (imagine the same scene that happened in d3.. I know all kriyaansh fans will remember that)

Her eyes were closed.. and rey was lost in her.. she opens her eyes on learning that she did not fall.. as soon as she opens her eyes she sees rey.. and even she gets lost in him.. *bang* their famous look look hawaa hawaa with kriyaansh ohooo tune in background..

The gang smirks on seeing this an hi-5's..

Rey was so lost in her that he himself does'nt know what he was doing.. he pins her hair behind her ears and whispers..

R: tum aaj bhi utni hi cute ho baatcutter jitni pehle thi.. infact aur bhi jyada ho gayi ho.. tumhare eyes.. lagta hai inn badi badi aankhon mein main doob jaunga.. tumhari smile.. humesha mujhe kisi aur world mein le jaate hai.. mann karta hai wahi buss jau.. koi itna innoscent.. itna cute kaise ho sakta hai.. I missed u so much ramaira..

On listening this kriya had butterflies in her stomach' she was about to smile but then remembers taani's words..

"unhone toh kabhi kriya se pyaar kiya hi nahi tha.. woh toh sirf attraction tha."

".. kabhi acche se confess tak nahi kiya tha"

"he let her go coz he was okay with it.."

She realizes in what position they are and jerks herself out from his embrace.. rey was shocked on her behavior..  he looks at her with confused expression.. even he realizes what all he said but was not regretting it as he meant those words truly.. even the gang was surprised with kriya's jerk.. but what they heard next .. it felt like earth slipped away from beneath them..

K: BASSS..!! that's it.. aapne mujhe samajh ke kya rakha hai haan?? Kaise insaan ho aap..?? jab man chaha tab mere paas aa gaye jab mann chaha tab taani ke paas chale gaye..

R: kriya meri baat toh suno.. I know maine jo kiya woh galat tha n u have all the right to be angry.. m sorry.. lekin..

K: lekin.. lekin kya..?? aapko kya lagta hai ki yeh poora world aapke around revolve hota hai.. harr baar har cheez aapke hisaab se nahi ho sakti.. oopss m sry.. main toh bhool hi gayi thi ki aap THE REYAANSH SINGHANIA ho.. jiske liye kisiki feelings matter nahi karti.. usse toh sirf apni khushi se matlab hai.. fir chahe koi kitna bhi hurt ho'

R: baatcutter tum yeh kya keh rahi ho'

K: STOP IT.. koi haq nahi hai aapko mujhe baatcutter bulaane kaa.. samjhe.. u know what saari galti meri hai.. ki maine uss insaan se pyaar kiya jisne mujhse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi.. aapke liye toh sirf ek ATTRACTION tha.. m I right..??

Rey was shocked beyond limits.. he was shocked that how can she say his love as just an attraction..

R:kriya tum sab galat samajh rahi ho..

K: ohh toh main galat samjh rahi hoon..  can u explain how..?? kya aapne ek baar bhi yeh jaanne ki koshish ki ki main kaaha hoon.. kiss halat main hoon.. zinda bhi hoon yaa nahi.. no right.. kyu.. kyuki u were okay with it.. kyuki aapko yaha koi aur jo mil gaya tha.. aapne socha theek hai.. kriya nahi toh koi aur hi sahi.. agar aap mujhse sacchi pyaar karte toh meri pre-valentines waali baat par kabhi believe nahi karte..

R: kriya.. m sorry.. I know maine jo kiya hai woh..

K: please reyaansh.. sorry boke atleast mere pyaar ki toh insult mat karo.. aapke liye shayad woh ek attraction tha.. lekin mere liye.. it was my first love.. and unfortunately main aaj bhi aapse hi pyaar karti hoon.. coz mere paas koi on-off button nahi hai.. ki jab chaha tab pyaar aur jab chahu tab nafrat' arey main toh aapke liye apni jaan tak dena chahti thi.. (tears started flowing from her eyes unknowingly)

All the time rey's head was down.. but when he heard her saying "main toh aapke liye apni jaan tak dena chahti thi" he looked up in her eyes.. even he had tears in his eyes..

K: but aaj .. I feel like a fool.. achi khasi bevakoof bann gayi naa main rey.. n aap keh rahe ho main aapko galat samjh rahi hoon.. if I am wrong toh aapke aur taani ke beech jo hai woh kya hai..?? kya aap uskeliye feel nahi karne lage the..

R: but..

K: just tell me yes or no.. (she shouted)

R: hmm..

K: kya aap taani ko shivam ke saath dekhkar jealous nahi ho rahe the..??

R: *he just nodded his head in a yes*

K: kya dance camp mein .. bonfire waale night pe aapne woh song taani ke liye nahi gaya tha..??

R: *he again nodded his head in a yes*

K: agar aapko meri diary nhi milti.. agar main yaha nahi aayi hoti kabhi toh kya ab tak aap taani se apni feelings confess nahi kar chuke hote..??

Rey was just silent..

K: I ll tell u.. ab tak aap taani se confess kar chuke hote.. n swayam 'sharon ke saath saath aapn dono bhi aaj st.louis ke ek couple hote.. n after all this can u plss tell me how m I wrong..??

Rey was just silent.. he knew that kriya was right.. whatever she said was totally correct.. may be he would have done the same thing if that day swayam would have not made him realise.. he would have still hated her if he would have not read her diary..

K: nahi hai naa koi jawaab.. kyuki aap bhi jaante ho ki yeh sab sach hai.. so just deal with it.. yeh phaltu mein guilty and sorry hone ki jaroorat nahi hai.. u know kal tak mujhe lagta tha ki mujhe yaha wapas nahi aan chahiye tha.. I was really very guilty for hurting u.. but today m happy.. m happy ki mujhe aaj aapka sach pata chal gaya.. today m free from my guilt' thank u so much MR.REYAANSH SINGHANIA.. thank u so much.. aapke yeh ehsaan humesha rahega mujhpar..

And she started going from there but stopped in her tracks.. without turning (their position was like both are facing in different directions.. their backs were facing each other) and said..

K: atleast taani se aapka matter sort out kar lijiye.. kyuki she really loves u a lot..

Saying this she left from there.. she went to fire escape and fell on her knees crying..

On other hand rey was left just shocked.. he hated himself even more now.. the gang was shocked beyond limits.. kabir and misha were shocked too.. they knew about everything but they never knew kriya had kept so many things inside her.. 

(I forgot to tell.. only gang was present in the college as they wanted to execute their plan.. they had called kriya by some excuse.. n ofcourse taani came behind them to implement her plan)

Gang came out frm their hiding and were facing rey now.. Sharon just went and hugged him.. rey just hugged her tighter and cried badly.. he knew she was right and whatever she said was apt.. he did'nt deserve an apology..

The whole gang was silent.. none of them knew what to do.. misha went to fire escape as she knew kriya would also be crying right now..

Taani witnessed the whole scene and was very happy.. she thought her plan worked.. woh jo chahti thi woh finally ho gaya..!!

Rey and kriya both were hugging their best frnds.. it was killing both of them.. it pained kriya to say all this but what she heard from taani and whatever she saw in dance camp.. she was not able to forget it.. here rey was dying each second.. only universeji knew what he has stored for these lovers..

Pyaar toh ab bhi dono ek doosre se karte hai.. but life mein sirf pyaar kafi nahi hota..!! ek relationship mein trust bahut important hota hai.. !! n today this lack of trust has separated these lovers..!!


i guess it was quite a big chappy.. all joota chappal welcome.. Tongue i know bakwass chappy hai but i wanted to take their story ahead in this way.. 
so like and comment fast fast.. i ll soon reply to all the comments on last chapter..
demand as u all know.. 50 likes.. 
but this time i dnt know when will i update.. Ouch

cyaa..
sanjana.. Embarrassed


 



Edited by arshafever - 10 March 2013 at 7:04am

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frstly...thank u so much meri day happening banane keliye coz jo aisa updtes hote hai...it really makes my dayLOLlove uBig smile

ok coming to the updte...
i feel pity for the gang kitna kuch kar rahe haiAngry

jai ho...jai ho...tani pehli baar zindagi mai kuch accha kaam ki hai...again jai ho...LOLtumhe toh oscars milni chahiye...Clapwow kya acting thi...

bechari kria humesha usse kyun??CryCryCry

yes we remembered the same "slippin frm the basket ball"Embarrassed kya din tai...Day Dreamingbut abCensored

tum aaj bhi utni hi cute ho baatcutter jitni pehle thi.. infact aur bhi jyada ho gayi ho.. tumhare eyes.. lagta hai inn badi badi aankhon mein main doob jaunga.. tumhari smile.. humesha mujhe kisi aur world mein le jaate hai.. mann karta hai wahi buss jau.. koi itna innoscent.. itna cute kaise ho sakta hai.. I missed u so much ramaira..

rey dubara aisi cheesy lines bola toh dekhna tumhe kya karthi hoonAngrygadha

wow!!! uske baad jo wrds kria ki zubaan se shower hua...hats off to u sanju...Thumbs Up
agar kria d3 mai wapas aayi toh yeh zaroor honi chahiye...Tongue

haan it hurts but cant helpWinkWinkWink...

rey kuch bolega nahi na...bolne keliye kuch toh nahi hai...AngryAngryAngry

m in love with ur story...re
loved it...Embarrassed
keep writin...

n nxt updte kab dogi ?Ouchplz jaldiLOLLOLLOL



Edited by only_kriyansh - 31 January 2013 at 3:51am

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Nice update
just hate taani
Kriyaansh separate again
Update soon
Thanks for d pm

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It was beautiful!
Rey needed this reality check !
Kuddos to ***** 4 d 1st n last time !
Do update soon.

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u know what??i just loved this part a lot!!!!!!! thanks for the pm ...if not i would have missed it

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DAMMM. . . . . . . .
Mai kitne acche moud mai thi,
wen i saw ur pm,i just ran and came here,
i was super excitd 4 our kriyaansh reunion scene. . .but my moud is totaly spoild aftr reading the update. .
I mean agar aisa kuch kerna hi tha toh phle hi bata dete. . . . .
I feel so dishearted r8 nw. . . . . . .
Iss taani ki toh mai. . . .
I always Hated her,
and yeh update padhke ,maine use HATE PE PERMANENT STAMP LAGA DIYA HAI. . . . . .
Godd. . .urgghhh woh,chudail,daayan, bhootni. . . .damm. . .
Duniya ki saari gaaliya usse pade. . . . , .
I totaly and 4verly HATE HER. . . . . . . .
Itni badi misundrstanding usne B***h ne humare kriyaansh ke beech khadi ker di. . . .
Buss ek baar mujhe mill jaaye,I WILL SHOW HER THE ACTUAL HELL. . . .
I realy dnt knw,abb aap kya karoge. . . . .
Meri saari expectations to duub gayi hai. . . . . .

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