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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 8:02am | IP Logged
wow wow wow awesome
i really luved this update n the story the idea n concept is fabulous
plz update it quickly Smile

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
this is sumthing different and really interesting Thumbs Up
enjoyed reading wanna knw fast wat happens next ...pls update soon Smile
and do pm me 

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Nice! :)

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nice story :) plz pm me wen u update i hv sent buddy req to u

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 6:22am | IP Logged
awesome...update soon n pm me

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Its great story. All ur stories are different. I luvd haunted 1. I thnk it was ur first. This new 1 is also great.

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
WinkWink PART 3 SmileTongue
 
Continue...
Vm-par virat !
V-plz mom aap yaha se abhi chale jao !!
Vm left...
Manvi crying (siting in the garden)
Vm-manvi ?? Manvi beta ! Plz rona band kro...dekho agar shlok ko pata chala k uski pyaari si bhabhi ro rahi thi !!
Toh vo kisi ki nahi sunega !
M-(smiling) ji maa !
vm-chalo ! Abh ready ho jao !! 7 bjne wale h !!
Guests ate hi honge
m-ji maa !!
N manvi left...
Vm-(hey bhagwan plz mere dono bacho ki zindgi meh khushiya bhar do !! )
*****
Manvi goes to her room !! Where virat was sitting on bed !!
Working on his laptop !
M-v...virat !
V-hmmm !
M-party start hone wali h ready ho jao !
V-mujhe b pata h !!
m-vi...!
V-shhh !! Tum plz meri tension mat liya karo ! Tum khud toh ready ho jao ! m bacha nahi hu jise bolna pade !!
**************
In party...
Virat was talking to some people !!
manvi was coming from the stairs !
V-ignored)
M-(came to KC)
KC-haye ni manvi !
Kinni soni lag ri h tu !!
KC's friend-kadambari ye toh badi pyaari bachi h !!
Apne virat puttar ki toh kismat chamak gyi !!
Lucky haan...
SB (swamini bua)
Sb-kismat toh tab chamakti h jab ladka ladki ek saath khush ho Mrs dixit...!
Kadambri mere saath aao mujhe tumse kuch baat krni h !!
KC-ji di chaliye !!
N SB left glaring at manvi...
M-aunty m abhi aati hu !!
N manvi goes to shlok's room !!
M-shlok ? Tu tayiyar nahi hit abhi tak !!
Sh-bhabhi !! Batayiye na m kaunsi shirt pehnu ??
Kuch samajh nahi aah ra h !!
M-(smiling) shlok !! Kabhi toh khud b decide kra kro??
Sh-bhabhi aap toh janti h !! M humesh badi maa (vanshika mom) k select kiye hue kapde pehenta tha ! Aur jabse aap ayi h !! Tabse aap mere kapde select krti ho !
M-ha Baba !! But m humesha tumhare kapde select krne k liye thodi yaha hongi !!
aj 18 saal k ho gye ho !! Bache thodi ho !!
Sh-bhabhi !! Mere 18 saal k Bache Bhi ho jaenge tab b m aapke select kiye hue kapde hi pehenunga !
n both start laughing !!
Suddenly virat enters shlok's room...
V-shlok !! Abhi tak tayiyar nahi hua !! Sab neeche Tera w8 kr re h !!
Manvi (silent)
Sh-ha bhai bas aah ra hu !
bhabhi kapde select kr ri thi !!
V-kabhi khud b kuch kaam kr liya kar !!
Humesha koi yaha nahi hoga Teri help krne k liye !!
(glaring at manvi)
Sh-bhai bas aah ra hu !!
M-(tears)
Sh-bhabhi ! Bhai neh fir se divorce ki baat ki !
m-(hugged shlok) crying !!
Sh-(abh toh kuch krna hi padega !! M bhabhi ko aaise rote hue nahi dekh skta !!
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.
.
*****FLASHBACK******
virat enters in his room (angry)
v-tum samajhti kya ho Apne aap ko??
Zada shok h adarsh bahu banks ka !!
Yeh dhyan rakhna m iss zabardasti k rishte ko poori life nahi ghaseet skta !!
Aj se 6 month baad m tumhe divorce de dunga !!
M-virat meri baat toh...
V-nahi sunna mujhe kuch b !!
M-ha thik h !! Mujhe b tumhare saath iss zabardasti k rishte ho nibhane meh koi interest nahi !!
Maine jo b kiya mujhe uska reason tumhe batane ki koi zarurat nahi h !!
Kyonki tum iss layak hi nahi ho !!
*********FLASHBACK ENDS****
 
 
 
 
 
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Edited by vibhubebo3 - 07 February 2013 at 2:55am

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
bebo... pls cont soon...
i want to read more of it...!!!!!
thanks for the pm...

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