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Vibhu3

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
WinkWink PART 2 WinkWink
(guys in starting updates I will narrate manvi's dairy n flashback too...so be prepared !!
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****flashback ends*****
vanshika mom-vm
vm enters manvi's room !!
vm-manvi beta !! Tu ready ho??
Hume market Jana h !!
m-(wiped her tears)
ji maa !!
(its now 1 month virat n manvi to be married !! But both hav no good convo with eachother !! Sometimes virat stays in office only !! Foe case discussions n all !!
virat Neva saw manvi is his wife !! Manvi was just a bad dream in his life !! Virat was hating manvi from that day !! She sat in the mandap with him ! He regret that day !! He Neva wanted to get married. !! But just because his bua he agreed to tie up with jeevika ! Whom he Neva liked !! But after what manvi did that day !! He had no trust on marriage or love !!!!
jeevika was 23 manvi was just 21 !!
had completed her graduation !! Wanted to become an interior designer !! But her all dreams were shattered that day when virat put sindoor in her maang !!!!
virat was 25 !! He always saw manvi as a teen !! Who need to grow up !! But now she is his so called wife !!
M-maa !! Shlok k liye yeh kaisa h??
vm-ganpati ji ?"
m-maa !! Mujhe lagta h !! Usse uske birthday pr yeh thik rahega !!
vo naye saal meh kadam rakhne ja raha h !!
vm-ha beta !! Tu yeh pack krwa lo !!
Sundar (su) (driver)
su-madam !! Virat Baba ko office meh lunch de diya h !!
vm-ha sundar yeh saaman gaadi meh rakh do !!
aur yeh box sambhal k rakhna !! Isme ganpati ji ki murti h !!
m-maa !! Aap please virat ko call krke puch lijiye k vo aj ghar jaldi aah jae  !! Shlok naaraz ho jaega !!
vm-ha beta !!
vm called virat !
vm-hello virat ??
v-ji mom !! Boliye?
vm-beta !! Aj 6 bje tak ghar Aaah Jana !!
shlok ka birthday k na !!
v-ha mom !! Maine meeting cancel kr di h !! M uska gift leke 6 bje tak ghar pahauch jaunga !!
vm-thik h beta !!
v-okay mom bye !!
vm-bye beta !!
vm-virat neh kaha h vo aah jaega !!
m-thik h maa !!
****in car*****
Vm-manvi !! Jeevika se baat Hui tumhari??
M-nahi maa !! Meri 1 month se jeevika di se baat nahi Hui ! 
m beeji se jhoot bolke di se baat nahi kr skti !!
Vm-beta. !! Tum tension mat lo beeji jhada din tak jeevika se naaraz nahi reh skti !!
M-ji maa !!
Vm-acha manvi !! Tum aj yeh saree pehenna !! Tumper yeh colour bahut suite krega !!
M-thanku maa !!
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Both reached home !!
M-maa !! M jakr saari arrangements check kr leti hu !!
Vm-thik h beta !!
Kc-(kadambari chachi)
Haye ni manvi !! Kithe gayi thi tu !!
Dekh toh yeh kya kiya h !! Maine kaha tha white flowers yaha lagane h !! Aur yeh ghada yaha laga k chala gya !!
M-chachi aaap tension mat lo !! M thik kar deti hu !!
Kc-manvi !! Dhyan naal !!
Manvi stood on the stool !!
Suddenly inder chachu called her !
Kc-haye ni !! Inse kuch nahi hoga !!
Hunde aayi !!
M-thik h chachi !!
Manvi wasnot able to reach to the flower so she took another stool n started putting the flower but she didn't notice that the stool was broken !!
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N virat enters vadera mansion !!
N he saw all preparation were going on he saw manvi on the stool !! He ignored !!
But suddenly he noticed the stool  was not balanced. !!
N manvi was about to fall but he catches her !!
everything was still !! Both were motionless. !
manvi closed her eyes tightly !!
N when she felt she is safe she opened her eyes n saw virat holding her !
both had an eye contact !!
N virat put her down ! n started shouting !!
V-tarun !! tarun !! Jab yeh stool toota hua h toh andar rakhne ki kya zarurat h ??
(glaring at manvi) jab kisi aur ko toota hua stool dikhayi nahi deta !! Iska matlab yeh nahi h k tum b andhe ho jao !!
N he went to his rooms in anger !!
Manvi's eyes were wet !!
she expected This behaviour of virat !!
Vm-manvi !! Beta shant ho jao !! Virat neh meanly aaisa nahi kaha hoga !!
M-(crying) maa !! Maine apni life meh ek galti ki !! Iska matlab yeh toh nahi k har baar m jaan bhuz kar galti karti hu !!
uss galti ki saza m abhi b last rahi hu !! Aur poori life mujhe yeh saza kaatni yogi !!
N she ran towards garden !!
N started crying...
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Vm goes to virat !!
Vm-virat !! Yeh kya tarika h apni biwi se baat krne ka !!
V-kaunsi biwi mom??
M uss ladki ko na apni biwi manta hu na kabhi manungi !! I just hate that girl !!
Vm-virat??
V-kya mom !! Galti Usne ki aur uss galti ki saza m kaat raha hu !! Mom m nahi dekh sakta uss ladki ka chehra !! I hate her !!
 
 
****part 2 endss here ****
Hope U all are liking !!
n thanks foe such lovely comments. !! I appreciate :)
N yeah !! I know some of U were confused abt virat liking jeevika or not !! But it was an arrange marriage. !!
He Neva liked jeevika !!
N yeah !! If U want me to pm U !! Send me buddy request now !! N sorry !! But I can't give U links coz m a new member n links sending is not allowed to mw now !
thankuuu :*
 
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
hey i like all ur stories.. nd im loving this one too.. do continue... nd pm meSmile.. 

Edited by sreshta90 - 30 January 2013 at 11:37pm

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Its damn fab...cont soon

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very different.
cont soon.

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NICE  UPDATE. POOR  MANVI. 

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Omggg mjhe to sach me is waqt
virman north or south pole lag rahe hai jo
kabhi nai.mil sakte but i no its just a start nd u will
make a true virman storyy its really excitinggg
nd m luvinggg all d updatess...
Cant wait for d next one also
update ASAP

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Its soo exciting... update super soonn.. jus cnt wait for d nxt 1!
Do PM! ;)

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