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Posted: 13 March 2013 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
OMGGG virat said i love yu to manviii ShockedDancing
cant believe he did tht ...
he did it soo perfectly wasting no timee...
everything he said and did was jst soo beautiful Day Dreaming

perfectly written ...
no answer frm manvi dissappointed alittle Unhappy
bt still atleast she didnt say a nooo
precap sounds interesting ...
sumthing wrng which will not let her confess her love to virat i guess Wink
maybe cancer...

update sooon 
and do pm me 

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Vibhuu !! Clap Your Story Is just Awesome !! Thumbs Up
i Mean the Concept ...  Concept Is really Different From Others yr , Strong Concept h kaafi SmileSmile .. and Uus Pr Tmki Writing .. Perfect CombinatiOn SmileClap .. n yeah !! Confession Part toww ufff .. AALAA .. Wink
 Please Please Cont. Soon nd The Precap Is reallly Scary Big smile .. !! Update Krdeee jaldi ..
Tuba Zaki From FB .. LOLLOL

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Part 14
MANVI'S POV
It was about 15 days. Virat was in London.i was still confused about my feelings foe virat. I mean am I ready to accept him. I was really confused. Suddenly maa enters my room.
"Manvi"?? Beta kya hua"?? She asked.
"Kuch ni maa"!! Bas vo."!!... N I got a call from an Unknown no.
"Hello"?? I asked
"Hello hello mannu"!! It was my di. My jeevika di.
"Jeevika di"!! Di aap kaise ho"? I asked
"Mannu m bilkul thik hu"!! Tu kaisi hai"?? She asked
"Di"!! M bilkul first class"!! I said
"Mannu"!! Mera tujhse Milne ka bahut Mann kr ra hai"!! She said
"Di Mann toh mera b bahut kar ra hai"!! I said
"toh mannu"!! Tu ek kaam kar mere ghar aah ja"!! Vaise b virat b nahi hai yaha tujhe tokne k liye"!! She said
"Di mujhe maa se baat karni hogi"! I said
"Manvi beta jao"!! Ghar ki tension mat lo"!! Tum jeevika se mil aao"!! Maa said
"thanku so much maa"!! N I hugged her
"Di m aah ri hu"!! I said
"Mannu tu 2 baje ready ho Jana"!! Virenji tujhe ghar se pickup kar lenge"!! But plz ti bahar aah Jana"!! Virenji shayad andar nahi aayenge"!! Di said
"di par"?? I said
"Mannu"! Plz samajh"!! Shayad virat ki family ko virenji ka ghar aana acha nahi lagega"!! She said
"Okay di"!! M aah jaungi"!!!
"mannu"! Tujhe ek khush khabri b sunani hai"!!
"Di abhi btao na"?? Plzzz."
"nahi mannu Tu pehle mujse Milne aah tabhi bataungi"!!
"okay Di fir m ready ho jaungi"!!
"okay mannu"! Bye"!!
"bye di"!!
-----
Manvi' beta jaldi se ready ho jao"!! Maa said
"ji maa"!! Bas m vahi kar ri hu"!!
----
I was so exited , finally I m gonna meet my di. N jeeju's car stopped in front of there house. N Di was standing on the door. N I run towards her n hugged her tightly. Not to leave her. She was crying n here same situation with me. From last 5 months we were away from each other coz after our marriage virat don't even wants to hear her name. He hated her. N bcoz of the hate I wasn't able to meet di. But now virat is not in chandigarh so I could meet di. Virat don't know that jrevika di is viren jiju's wife. I will never allow me to meet them. We both went inside. I was sitting in di's room. Were talking alot. Laughing...! Etc etcs. N she asked me about virat n me. I was stunned.
"Mannu". M bahut khush hu k tere aur virat k beech meh sab theek hai". Virenji NEH mujhe sab btaya tumhare n virat k baaren meh".
"Di ! M bhi aapko kuch btana chahti hu"!!
"Ha bol mannu"!!
But suddenly Manvi felt a hard pain in her head.
"Mannu"?? mannu"?? Mannu kya hua tujhe"?? Tu thik toh hai"??
"Di pata ni kuch Dino se mujhe bahut zada headache ho ra hai"! Aahhh*** !!
N she stands n ran towards washroom. N jeevika viren behind her. Both of them were standing on the door waiting for manvi. N she came out after some time.
"Mannu tu thik hai na"?? Chal doctor k pass"!! Mujhe pata hai Teri tabiyat kharab hai"!!
"ha manvi"!! Chalo Dr. K pass abhi"!!
"But di-Jiju"!!...
"Nahi mannu"!! Tu kabhi apna khayal nahi rakhti..! M janti hu rest toh bilkul nahi krti hogi"!!...!
-----
All three of them reached the hospital..!
Jeevika was talking to manvi n viren was on the reception.."!!
"mannu"!! Yeh Teri saari par Red red kya hai"??
"k...kuch ni di"!! Shayad chutni gir gyi hogi"!!
"Oo"!!
"jeevika manvi"!! Chalo dr. Is calling U"!! M bahar w8 krta hu"!!
"Okay virenji"!!
--- inside----
"Yes"!! Doctor asked
"Dr..."!! (jeevika cuts Manvi)
"Dr isse bahut Dino se headache n vomitings ho ri hu"!! She is not feeling well"!!
"Okay"! Aap kuch test Kara lijiye"!! Dr. Said
"Dr. Kuch nahi hua hai"!! Aap medicines de dijiye"!! I'll be f9"!!
"No mannu"!! Chup chap chal test toh tu karegi"!!
"Excuse me"!! N one skull x-ray too"!! Dr. Said
"okay Dr. Thanku so much"!! Jeevika said
-----
After all tests when manvi was going for x-ray...! Nurse came running out of the x-ray room n Entered in Dr's room
"Dr. X-Ray machine meh sparking ho gyi hai"!! We can't do x-ray now"!!
"Oo"!! Mrs kapoor (jeevika) i m really sorry..! Aap ek kaam kijiye 2 din meh jab baaki tests ki reports aah jaengi"!! Aap tabhi aah jayiye"!! Uss din aap x-ray b Kara lijiyega"!! M really sorry"!! M aapko kuch medicines de deta hu"!! I'll feel better"!! Doctor said
"Okay Dr. Thanku so much"!! We will collect reports on Monday"!! Jeevika said
-----
Manvi reached home..
"yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai"??? Aur vo khoon"??
(when jrevika asked manvi about that redness on manvi's saree)
"bhabhi"???? Bhabhiii"?? -shlok enters manvi's room
"sh..shlok"!! Ha bolo"?? Manvi hesitates
"kya hua bhabhi"?? Ur okay"?? - shlok asked her
"ha shlok" bas thodi thak gyi hu"!! Manvi said
"bhabhi aap rest kr lijiye"!! M aapke liye dinner room meh bhijwa deta hua"!! Shlok said
"Nahi shlok". M table par aah ri hu"!! Mujhe akela khana acha nahi lagta"!! Manvi said
"bhabhi fir ek kaam karta hu" m bhi apna khana aapke room meh hi kha leta hu". Vaise b aj koi bhi nahi hai"!! Sab shopping par gaye hai"!! Badi maa neh toh dinner kar liya." m abhi lekr Ata hu"!!
-----
"Bhabhi"!! Aapko shopping nahi krni"??
"Nahi shlok mere paas toh sarees hai so... (smiles)"
"bhabhi aapko bhai ki yaad aah ri hogi na"?? (shlok teases)
"Ha"..nahii.. Nahi." virat toh Apne kaam Se gya hai na"!! Aur muzhe bhala uski yaad kyon ayegi"??
"*coughs*- shlok..
"shlok"-manvi glares at him
N shlok starts laughing
N was about to leave but turned
"Bhabhi don't worry"!! 10 din aur w8 kar lo"!!
----
Manvi slept
3 days passed..
Manvi n jeevika gone to hospital toh collect Test reports.
"See, chinta ki koi baat nahi hai"!! But aap x-ray Kara lijiye...! Doubt clear ho jaenge"!!
"Okay" thanku Dr."- jeevika said
-----
When manvi came back home. Was sitting in her room n vanshika mom enters.
"Manvi beta"! Tumne packings kr Li h na"?? Hume Jaipur k liye kal nikalna hai"!!
"ji maa"!! Maine subah hi packing kr Li thi".
"Beta"!! Tumhara chenhra itna utra utra kyon hai"? Kia hua"??
"kuch nahi maa"!! Vo bas...-
"virat ki yaad aah ri h"?- vanshika maa asked
"Nahi maa aaisi koi baat nahi hai"!! Vo bas aaise hi"!!
"chalo koi baat nahi beta"!! Tum rest kr lo"!! Hume subah jaldi nikalna hai"!!
"okay maa"!!
----
"Precap- viren came to hospital to collect manvi's X-ray report"!!
Dr-" Mr. Viren..! Mujhe bahut bada doubt hai"!! Manvi ki x-ray report Negative hai"!! We need to do MRI as soon as possible. Its not normal.
Viren-"but Dr. Kuch ghabrane wali baat"--
Dr- Mr. Viren aap plz tension mat lijiye"!! Abhi we only have a doubt..! MRI reports se sab kuch
clear ho jaega"!!

Edited by vibhubebo3 - 15 March 2013 at 5:34am

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Posted: 15 March 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged
me first me firstBig smile
loved the update.lovely jeeman part.
so manvi is having some problems.
loved bhabhi_devar scene they are just like virat_jeevika in the show.
manvi is missing virat awwWink
continue soon and next time add some virman.
thanks for the PMBig smile


Edited by keertu - 15 March 2013 at 5:49am

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Posted: 15 March 2013 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Kya ho gaya meri mannu ko?? Superb update but cant wait after precap.

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Posted: 15 March 2013 at 5:59am | IP Logged
interesting update...
blood nd all
is she having tumor or thng?
I jst doubt dnt mind ok

And did she actually miss virat...
Ths is going to be very interesting
And specially wat will her reply be

Thanx alot for the pm
And pls update soon

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Posted: 15 March 2013 at 6:01am | IP Logged
really really good.  I like where this is heading.
 
thank you for allyour PM's.
 
 

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