Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

VirMan FF-He was my destiny ch 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updt...virat carried manvi to her room...cont soon...n kamini vibhu batayegi kab ki udt kiya he...next time bhuli to dekh...just kidding
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HE  START  TO  BEHAVE  LIKE  A  GENTLEMAN  NOW. JALDI  HI  MANVI  USE  SWEETMAN  BANA DENGI. CONTINUE  SOON.
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Posted: 11 years ago
oye hoye virat ko kya hua ...itna sweet kabse ban gaya woh ...😉
jst loved yur update ...its going on very goood ...👏
pls update soon nd do pm me plsss 
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Posted: 11 years ago
just read the last couple of parts this is sooo interesting n im happy virat n manvi r gettin closer nw he does care for her yayeee !!!!
pls pm me wen u update i really wanna read the next update n plz continue it very quickly plz plz plz😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome story pls continue
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😉😉 PART 5 😊😊
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At night !
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M-oouchhh !! Ohhh !!
She wakes up n saw virat was sleeping on his couch !
N she saw water bottle was empty !
M-ohhh ! Sunder paani rakhna bhool gya !
Kitchen se le ATI hu !!
(she struggles to stand but her feet was paining alot )
M-aahhh !!
N virat wakes up !!
V-manviii !!
U okay !!
M-virat m okay !! (she didn't like virat to touch her n she maintained distance !!)
V-tumhe ek baat samajh ni ATI ?? Super women ho ?? Chain se ek jagah baith nahi skti?? Bola tha na ?? Kuch chahia toh bol Dena !
M-vo virat ! Paani !!
V-do m lata hu ! Aur chup chap jakr bed pe baith jaoo !
N manvi sat on her bed !
Virat gives her water !!
N both slept !
M-gud ni8 !
But virat didn't replied !
N she slept !!
In morning !! Virat left for office at 7 !!
Manvi in Kitchen...
Feeling better now !!
m-Sundar !! Yeh lunch virat ko office meh pahucha do !!
Vm comes
Vm-are manvii?? Beta !! Tumhara pair kaisa h abh ??
M-maa !! Pehle se better h !!
Maa-beta ! Apna dhyan rakhoo !!
Sb-dhyan?? Bhabhi kuch logo ko parties meh tamasha krne ka shok hota h !!
Logo ki izzat mitti meh milane ka !!
M-buaji ! Maine jaan bujh kr kuch nahi kiya tha!! Vo...
Sb-acha?? Abh bol do k mandap meh b jaan boojh kr nahi baithi thi??
M-(in tears n left towards her room)
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FLASHBACK
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beeji-jeevika beta tayiyar ho gyi??
Chal neeche sab Tera w8 kr re h !!
Manvi kaha gyi??
Abh yeh ladki kaha chali gyi??
sb comes---
Beeji chaliye Shadi ka mahurat nikla ja raha h !!
B-ji swaminiji !!
Chal beta !!
M-(I m sorry beeji !! Par m kya kruu ! Di aapne mujhe kaisi problem meh daal diya h??? )
N beeji took manvi toh mandap !!
(manvi's face was covered with ghunghat so no one was able to guess )
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M-(yeh galat ho raha h...manvii !!
N she saw beeji n all were so happy)
(agar inhe di k bare meh pata chala toh sab toot jaenge) beeji ki izzat mitti meh mil jaegi...! Vo nahi sehen kr payenge yeh) mqnvii be strong ! Tere pass aur koi Rasta nahi h !! This is ur destiny !! ) U hav to do dis)
Shadi over !!
M-(crying badly) coz that was not a mistake !! That was a blunder !!
she had spoiled virat's life !! She knows he will hate her like hell !!
Both manvi n virat were sitting in the Mandap !!
Almost guests were lefttt !!
N suddenly virat saw manvi's face in a plate which was placed in front of manvii !!
(he was super shocked !! N he puts manvi's duppata up !!
V-Manviii?????
M-n manvi was crying badly !!
Everyone was shocked to see manvi in place of jeevika !!
B-manviii??
N she came towards her !!
B-manvii tu yaha kya kr ri h?? Aur jeevika kaha h?????
V-(couldn't utter a single word !! ) just standing there !!
Sb-(angry) Manviii?? Yeh kya h???
Tumhari himmat kaise Hui?? Yeh sab krne ki??
M-(just crying...was not able to utter word)
B-(crying) manvii yeh tune kya kiya??
Chal mere saath abhiii !!
M-beeji meri baat suniye !!
Beeji ek min. Suniye (crying)
Beeji dragged her into her room !!
B-manvii yeh kya kiya tune ??
M-beeji !! Plz meri baat suniye !!
Beeji !! Di !!
B-manvii tune ek baar b nahi socha ??
Tune apni behen ki zindgi barbaad kr di?? Virat ki zindgi barbaad kr di !!
M-beejjjiii !! Beeji Maine jo kuch b kiya di ki khushi aur aapki izzat bachane k liye kiya !!
B-kya????
M-(crying) ha beeji !! Di virat k saath kabhi khush nahi rehti !!
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Outside
Virat was fuming in anger !!
N thrown his pagdi !!
Vm-virattt !! Beta plz shant ho ja !!
V-Mom !! Mujhe ghar Jana h abhii !!
 
 
 
 
 
 
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I know U all will be mad at me not updating a lonnggg update !! Lol :P I m really sorry !! Actually I was hospitalized from last 2 days !! Although I hav written this part :D but I hope U are liking my story !! N so sweet of U all !! Such lovely comments :) n if U hav a misunderstanding that everything will be alryt itni jaldi !! So guys m sorry !! But our Virman has to suffer alot foe there happily married life :D <3<3
Thankq :)
Love bebo ;)
 
 
 
 
 
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Edited by vibhubebo3 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update...! like when Virat cares...but he is in his old self...rude and arrogant...Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
M not liking ur story coz m luvng it.. Pls pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update ya really good 😊
and the story is jst going fab m loving it 😉
and do take care of urself afterall health comes first ...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waooo fabulousss
hope virat start loving manvi..
Update asap