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TR ff:kahin pyar na ho jaye ch 11 pg 140 (Page 6)

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:00pm | IP Logged
woooww yr awsm plzzz pm me next part.i love this story plzzz continu it...

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
so guys here is the first part of the ff...i hope u will like it...there are so many titles suggested by trians but i like this most...both taani and rey dont believe in love so this title suit this story...thank u jaan for great title...

right now taani is in jodhpur...



IN JODHPUR:

its 1 am of night...taani is still chattingwith sharon...

but now sharon feel asleep so she said good night to her...

Taani put her laptop aside and look at her left side...

Her yug is sleeping peacefully...

She bentdown and kiss his forehead...and said:i love u yug...

Then she go in her dad's room to see that he is sleeping or not...

She go in and saw her dad sleeping with her mom and her sister's photo...

Taani took the photo and saw...her eyes filled with water...tears roll down on her cheeks but she quickly rub it...she cover her dad with blanket and then go in her room...

She sit on her bad...still she didnt told sharon that she is coming mumbai tomorrow...she want to give her surprise...but she never told her that she is a single mother...

She is just 24 and had 4 years old boy...she remember the day when she found yug...

4 years back:

Taani was walking on a road all crying...bcoz her mother and her sister died in an accident ...she was walkingandwalking and walking...she was so far from her home...she realize it when suddenly she heard a crying voice...

She look here and there but couldnt find it...

But after some time she found a baby all crying...baby wad behind a tree...

She went near the baby and took in her hands...baby was so cute...but was crying...

She look here and there to find if someone baby's relative was there .but noone was there...

But baby feel peace in taani's hand...he smile in her hands...

Ta:tumhara is dunia me koi nahi hai???koi baat nahi...me hu na...me tumhe yaha se le jaungi...mene bhi apni mom aur sis ko kho diya...i know kaisa lagta hai apno k bina...ab tum mere sath rahoge...

And taani go back with the baby...

His dad also agree with her decision...bcoz she was happy and her dad want her to be happy in life after two major incidents in her life...

PRESENT:

Taani caressing his hairs:kal hum mumbai ja rahe hai...nayi jagah naye log...aap ko to naye naye dost banana pasand hai na...vaha bahot sare dost banege...aap ko apne dad k na hone ke liye dukhi bhi nahi hona padega...ok...gud night...

And she sleep...

IN MUMBAI:

One guy is sitting in her room...the room is so dark...

Suddenly some one come and said:rey baba...

Rey turn on dim light and said:ji kaka boliye...

Kaka:aap soye nahi ab tak...kya hua???ma papa ki yad aa rahi hai...

Rey:bas sone hi ja raha tha...aap bhi so jao...he avoid the question...

Kaka:thik hai...

Kaka goes and rey again lost in his thoughts...

"ma papa...unki yad kyu aayegi...jab unko meri koi parwah nahi to me kyu unhe yad karu...jab dekho tab ladai...kon kahega unhe husband wife...kon kahega that before 30 years they were in love...and now...ek dusre ko dekhna bhi nahi chahte...ye love hi sari cheezo ka problem hai...soja rey...warna kal subah uthega nahi ...vaise clg to parso se shuru ho rahi hai to kal sharon and swayam se milna hai..."

Then rey go to sleep...

NEXT MORNING:

Taani wake up at 7 am...and first she look at yug...he is still sleeping ...she smile looking at him...she wake up and freshen up...

Then she go in the hall but her dad is not there...

Ta:aaj papa uthe nahi???chalo isi bahane thoda jyada aaram kar lenge...

She go in poojaghar and light a lamp...she pray to god to keep her family happy...

Then she go in kitchen and make two mug of coffee and one glass of milk...

Then she go in her room and wake up yug...

Ta:(slowly patting his cheek)yug...yug...good morning...chalo utho beta...

And she heard a charming voice...

"mummaaa..."

Ta:ha me yahi pe hu...chalo utho ab...

Yug:mummaaa...plz five minutes more...

Ta:no beta chalo utho ab...aap ki five minutes mujhe pata hai...vo kabhi khatam nahi hogi...chalo...

She take him in her hands and he wrap his tiny hands around her neck...

Yug:"mummaaa...i love u..."

Ta:i love u too...

She go in wash room and take some water in her hands and apply on his eyes...

Yug:mmm...mmm...mummaaa...no ...plz...yug ko sona hai abhi...

Yug dig his face between taani's neck and shoulder...

But taani continue it and she wash his face with water and brush his teeth...

IN MUMBAI:

"Triinnn...triinnn..."

Alarm rang...but still rey is sleeping...he forward his hand to turn off the alarm...and cover himself with blanket again...

Again after 5 minutes...alarm again ring...this time he throw it on ground...

Just then kaka come and said:utho rey baba...8 baj gaye...

Hearing this rey jump...

Rey:kya...8 baj gaye???oh no mujhe to 7:30 baje swaron se milne jana hai...oh god...sharon se bacha lena...swayam ko to me handle kar lunga...

He quickly took shower and take breakfast and then rush to meet them...

JODHPUR:

Taani is serving breakfast...her dad come and sit...

Ta:good morning papa...

Taani dad:good morning bete...

Just then yug come there...taani is standing near the chai...he come and wrap his hands around her legs...

Yug:mummaa...good morning...

Ta:good morning...

Then yug go to his dadu and touch his legs...

Dadu smile at him and put his hand on his head...

Then three of them star their breakfast...

TD(taani's dad):taani beta...sab packing ho gayi na??

Ta:ha papa...sab ho gaya...

Hearing the word papa yug look at taani...

Taani understand that he want to know his dad's name but jab usse hi ye nahi pata to vo kaise batayegi...

To change the topic taani offer milk to yug...

Ta:yug...chalo milk pi lo...

Yug:milk...no mumma pls...yug ko milk achha nahi lagta...making various faces...

Ta:yug...pls beta...

Yug:no mamma...its taste...yuk...yug ko nahi pasand...

Ta:thik hai...to mamma aap se baat nahi karegi...

Taani turn her face in other direction...

Yug cant live without talking to his mom so...

Yug:mummaaa...thik hai...sirf aap ke liye yug milk pi raha hai...

Taani smile ,give him milk and kiss his forehead...

Ta:mera shona bachha...

Her dad is watching them...his daughter is smiling so he is happy...yug is the reason for taani's smile...thats why he always love yug more and more...

After the breakfast they get ready and left for mumbai...



So guys...here is the first part...it took so long to write...so plz like and comment...

 Precap :

Kya likhu???mmm...yug and rey ki first meeting ke bare me soch rahi hu...

Edited by Dipu_taarey - 29 January 2013 at 11:09pm

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
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yahooo i am  first


pari i am angry on you tum baar baar kyo bhul jati ho dosti mai no sorry no thank you

btw update is so awesome loved it the relationship between yugaani was awesome...

oh i thought that yug is taani's baby but he is orphan and taani adopt him how sweet my taani

and rey don't worry you will fall in love so soonWinkWink


Edited by taareylove - 29 January 2013 at 10:14pm

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dipu_taarey

Originally posted by taareylove

Originally posted by Dipu_taarey

thank u so much all of u...so many titles...but i choose...hmmm...abhi nahi...after an hour when i update tab pata chalega sabko...thanks to all...


naughty girl no no naughty pariWinkWink


thanks...i m really naughty jaan...

i know you are so naughty tabhi toh you are my frnd because i love naughty personsBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Wonderful:)))
Lovrd it:)
Thnkz for the pm:)
Cont. Soon:)

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Nice start. Update

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
nice one even before i got ur PM i read ur update that was awesome...waiting for next part

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Nice start
please pm me when u update next

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