Love has no boundaries. Virika/Virman FF - Page 18

Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!!!! i read all the 14 chpts at a shott..and woww..amazinggg updateee...just superbbb!!!! beautifullyy writteenn..so sooryyy for not liking or commenting early as i was not aware of this story...now i will keep a track of it..plss do continuee soon n plss PM Me..thnkuu so muchhh..brilliant writerr!!!!!! hats off!!! the storyy has turned out so weelll and the chars are portrayed realyy great!!!

greatt goingg..do continuee soon..eager to read the next updatee!!!! :D :D 
Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!

I loved the way you showed Virat bending into the habbit of calling Jeevika "Bhabhi"

Seriously, this was good. And how they just go on a small dinner party, with close ones!

O my god, such a bitch that Priya is, I really hope Swamini is good.

BDW, the idea was good, not hurting Jeevika but one close to her!

Nice work, continue soon and thanks for the PM
Posted: 11 years ago
VERY NICELY WRITTEN..

GOOD WORK
Posted: 11 years ago
i hate these sisters poor jeevika
Posted: 11 years ago
hate dat priya ðŸ˜¡
hope swamini gets well soon
amazing yaar
loved it
continue soon

Posted: 11 years ago
hate dat priya ðŸ˜¡
loved d part
hope swamini gets well soon
hope dat insane priya dnt create any more problem
continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
priyaaa n now tina also😡
omg i thought dey r gonna harm jeevika bt nooo swamini bt i think its a misunderstanding bymistakely swamini came.
Hope it dosnt creat any prblm now

continue sooon n thanx 4 d pm
Posted: 10 years ago
update soon 
waiting 

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