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FANAA...new KR 4 shots pg1,23,28 & 31...!!!!!!! - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
demand completed!!!
update!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
weren't you going to update yesterday...<pout>
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Posted: 11 years ago
tumhari demand complete ho gayi hai na yaar, are complete kya exceed ho gayi hai phir bhi u r not updateing jaldi update karna plzzz...
And wasn't this supposed to be an OS [ONE-SHOT]...

Edited by KoolKatz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
update next part soon plzz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os
Update soon dea
Cnt wait..
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Posted: 11 years ago
kriti r u going to update this one...????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice os
Update soon πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2

sh :abhi mujhe tumse baat karni hai mere sath chalo...

abhi :yeah di...aap chalo main abhi aaya...


and then he dial some num some picks the phn

abhi :di se baat karwao

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abhi :hey di kaise ho

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abhi :ha di main mumbai pohoch gya hoon...aur is waqt main st. louis colg. main hoon

btw he's walking in corridor)

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abhi :yes di...main un logo pe kum aur dance pe jyada concentrate karunga...btw di aapne mujhe batya kyo nhi shar di mumbai main hai...mujhe laga wo ny main isliye main mumbai aaya

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abhi :ha di shar di aaj meri tagdi class lagane wali hai...par di ko manana bhi mujhe ache se aata hai...acha di bye wala shar di mujhe kacha chaba jauegi...

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abhi :bye..love u

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and then he cuts the call


at the time he reached fire exit where sharon is waiting for him...he enter fire exit..and sharon blast on him with her questions...


sh :abhi tum mumbai kab aaye mujhe batya bhi nhi...aur ye canteen main kya ho rha tha...aur main tum mere bhai jaise...mr. abhinav rai prakash shayad tum bhul rhe ho main tumahri badi behan hoon...


abhi :di di di...chillax main aaj subha hi mumbai aaya...and mujhe pata bhi nhi tha aap mumbai main mujhe laga aap ny main ho (pata hota toh main mumbai aata hi nhi)...aur ye canteen main aapke so called friends ka chota sa test tha...waise log distinction k sath paas hoote hai...apke frnds distinction k sath fail hue hai specially wo aapka so called best friend... reyansh singhnaia 


sh :abhi main janti hoon tumpe kya beet rhi hai..par...

abhi :di aap wo sab chodo...main itne der se aapke samne hoon...aur aapne ek baar mujhe hug bhi nhi kiya...

sh :awww my baby...come...(and then she take his little bro in her embarace )


abhi hugs shar...


Ab :I missed u di

sh :I missed u too abhi


and then she feel a  wetness on her shoulder...she apart from the hug...and what she saw that abhi is crying...


Sh :abhi kya hua why u crying...?

Ab :dii humare sath hi aisa kyo hota hai...(tears are flowing from his eyes)...hum teeno kyo ek normal bhai behan ki tarah reh sakte...humari bhi ek happy family kyo nhi ho sakti...pehle mom dad ki wajha se hum teeno ko alag hona pada...dad ne aapki custody li mom ne di ki...aur mujhe hostel bhej diya...aap dono ko mujhse toh milne ka permission diya...but aap dono ko kabhi milne nhi diya...aur ab bhagwan ji ne humari mom ko bhi humse cheen liya...ar ab jab hum teeno mile toh ye...dii main apne aap ki bohot helpless feel karta hoon...meri dono behno ki jaan khatre main hain aur main kuch nhi kar sakta...(and and he started crying)


Sh :abhi shh aise rote nhi...(and then sharon cell rings)...

Sh :hello...kya...(and cell drop from her hand tears started flowing from her eyes)


Ab :dii kya hua...kiska phn tha...

Sh :shona...ki wheel chair stairs se slip ho gyi...hospital se phn tha...uski halat bohot critical hai hume hospital jaana hooga...chalo...(both wipe their tears and run towards exit...sit on sharon's car and zoom off)


outside the fir exit

man :abhinav sharon ka bhai toh usne jhooth kyo bola...aur dono ki ek aur behan hai...aur wo hospital main...mujhe jaanna hi hoga akhir ye sara mamla kya hai...




hows the update guyz

plz click like tab and leave ur comments

sorry for the short update

and guess who's the person outside FE


next update after pg 70 but not before more than 80 likes


I also updated pyar ki ye ek kahani part 8

here's the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3396480


love

kriti


Edited by Kriti_rox - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved it... i think it kria...
but who is the person who listen to their talk is it swayan or rey...
bit confused clear it in next part...
continue soon wait early...😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update :-) one more sister? Kriya?

Nikki <3
Edited by 1D_D3-Crazy - 11 years ago