This content was originally posted by: vironikajainSuperbb update Very romantic nd emotional too loved the way priya's insecurity is shown nd ram's calm as well as anxiousness nd his own fears π
He kissed her to assure her everything will be fine nd proposed her for remarriage awww so sweet π³ nd now Mr meany is going to full fill Mrs sherni 's one of the fantasy nd many more in future π β€οΈ
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This content was originally posted by: ramsakshiroxxxThis is so romantic,cute,emotional and beautiful update..
The kiss part was so beautifulAww he proposed herLove the Blind fold scene with tieThe end part was so cute meany and sherniπ
This content was originally posted by: creativewritingMadam!!! Don't you think, you are taking advantage of innocent ppl like us.. π
I mean update was awesome, emotional, romantic, lovey almost every indian masala was there but it was damn small yaar.π
Matlab tiny miny update...
And don't blame me for anything. I am very demanding... π³
But seriously kaha gaye woh 4 pages ke update kaha gaye aaj toh 2 line ke update se kaam chala rahe
hai 1 month wait karne ke baad.. Hum jurm ke khilaw awaaz udayege. π
chalo yaar thik hai bahut draame ho gaye mere ... π
I really appreciate ur update. It was small but still it was amazing, astounding, breathtaking, eye-pooping, mindboggling, intense, hallucinatory, fantastic, exotic, magnificent, glorious, awe-inspiring, remarkable, extraordinary, impressive, super...yaar seriously aur adjective yaad nahi aarahe hai.. But pls bhavano ko samjho
Collecting particular bits from your writing & telling u is quite difficult.. But kiss, the suspense u created, last line Meanie and Sherni were master piece.
But madam!! aapne suspense create karne mein promotion kar liya hai phele ek suspense create karte the aap but aab pichla clear kiye bina second suspense de diya !!!! what is Priya's fantasy I m dying to know..
Hats off to u and ur updates are ...π π π, aapke charan kaha π
But fact remains the same it was very short and u must compensate.. matlab thoda sa if possible u know I dnt want to be bossy π
And make it fast π
Cheers!! Waiting!!! & Big wala π€ π€ π€
Arrey sorry most imp the way he proposed that was cool & priya asking him with straight face that was he willing to make the same mistake again was cherry on top.
This content was originally posted by: 123fiza1Awesome update...worth the wait
U hv penned down the emotions n romance beautifully..
Well described from the start till the end...Romance is in the air...
Ram proposed to priya n also kissed...these were the highlights of the update...
Now the blindfold.. π
Wondering whats there in ram's mind.
This content was originally posted by: tulshan1989lovely and romantic update
pls update next part soonwaiting
This content was originally posted by: luvbalhthanku it was pleasure reading...
worthy wait.. loved it so much
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