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ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5) (Page 144)

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Amazin story
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I love your ff
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GREAT
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A lot many people asked me to read your stories:)

And I would like to thank all those people or else I would have missed an awesome story like this. Though I have read only prologue and chapter one but I can say this with confidence that you are one of the brilliant writer here:)  Your language, grammar, vocabulary, everything is just perfect.

Coming to the update, I loved reading a smart Khushi. you know I used to wonder that why people never write a story in which Khushi is as powerful as Arnav? Finally I got one story and that too awesome.

I loved the way Khushi outdid shyam. 

Looking forward to know more about ASR:)

Going to read chapter 2:)


Edited by cheesemad - 28 August 2013 at 1:38am
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Chapter 2

What an amazing introduction to The Arnav Singh Raizada..!! ASR, name says it all. I just loved the way he dealt with the man Pablo.

I liked this, he is kinda sweet to Lavanya, not exactly sweet but not all arrogant and rude. I am loving this Arnav.

LOL..He is to babysit that girl. He has no idea what kind of girl is Khushi, has he? I am eagerly waiting for ArShi to meet.
 

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Originally posted by cheesemad

Chapter 2

What an amazing introduction to The Arnav Singh Raizada..!! ASR, name says it all. I just loved the way he dealt with the man Pablo.

I liked this, he is kinda sweet to Lavanya, not exactly sweet but not all arrogant and rude. I am loving this Arnav.

LOL..He is to babysit that girl. He has no idea what kind of girl is Khushi, has he? I am eagerly waiting for ArShi to meet.
 

Hey! Thanks dear..Glad u liking this FF...the characters are a little bit diff ...and I've always liked a strong and confident Khushi...so all my stories have her as an equal to Arnav wherever possible :)
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Chapter 3

Though no ArShi, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I really loved it<3

Arnav is a jerk, rude, arrogant in short exactly the way as I like him :P I like Arnav's Dadu. He looks like a wise old man. 

The best part of the update was flashback. My Lord!! he actually said that to Khushi?! He is a complete jerk, presumptuous is absolutely correct word for him. I hope Khushi knock some sense in his mind. he is in for a surprise.
Looking forward to the explosive meeting of theirs in next chapter:) 


Edited by cheesemad - 28 August 2013 at 1:53am
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Chapter 4

Now this is what I call nehle pe dehla update. I am in love with this Khushi. Mr. Arrogant is having a tough timeLOL

Khushi came before him?! this thing pleasantly surprised me. Good going Gupta..!! I loved it when when Khushi answered all his questions.

I want to know more about Khushi and her father's equation. this is really interesting.

PS: ASR is not that bad, he has a heartBig smile I loved the way he talked to Lavanya. Mr. Arrogant is understanding too at times:)

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