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ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5) (Page 144)

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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cheesemad

Chapter 2

What an amazing introduction to The Arnav Singh Raizada..!! ASR, name says it all. I just loved the way he dealt with the man Pablo.

I liked this, he is kinda sweet to Lavanya, not exactly sweet but not all arrogant and rude. I am loving this Arnav.

LOL..He is to babysit that girl. He has no idea what kind of girl is Khushi, has he? I am eagerly waiting for ArShi to meet.
 

Hey! Thanks dear..Glad u liking this FF...the characters are a little bit diff ...and I've always liked a strong and confident Khushi...so all my stories have her as an equal to Arnav wherever possible :)

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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Chapter 3

Though no ArShi, I enjoyed it thoroughly. I really loved it<3

Arnav is a jerk, rude, arrogant in short exactly the way as I like him :P I like Arnav's Dadu. He looks like a wise old man. 

The best part of the update was flashback. My Lord!! he actually said that to Khushi?! He is a complete jerk, presumptuous is absolutely correct word for him. I hope Khushi knock some sense in his mind. he is in for a surprise.
Looking forward to the explosive meeting of theirs in next chapter:) 


Edited by cheesemad - 28 August 2013 at 1:53am
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 2:08am | IP Logged
Chapter 4

Now this is what I call nehle pe dehla update. I am in love with this Khushi. Mr. Arrogant is having a tough timeLOL

Khushi came before him?! this thing pleasantly surprised me. Good going Gupta..!! I loved it when when Khushi answered all his questions.

I want to know more about Khushi and her father's equation. this is really interesting.

PS: ASR is not that bad, he has a heartBig smile I loved the way he talked to Lavanya. Mr. Arrogant is understanding too at times:)
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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Chapter 5
Khushi answered all the questions perfectly. Didn't loose her calm and most importantly impressed ASR.

I was eagerly waiting for some revelation about Khushi and her father's relationship. Now things are quiet clear as in why does she hate him. The thing she said when he was introducing himself with Lavanya surprised me. She is feisty and that is what I am loving about her.

Like ASR, I am wondering too who is Sujoy Gosh? Interesting.

 
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:40am | IP Logged
just started readng d story... looks nice...
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Posted: 26 September 2013 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Fantastic concept and wonderfully written
just start reading this story, character sketch, teaser and prologue was amazing...Clap
and also read 5 chapters, they were fabulous...i already reading ur story between the lines, but i can't hold myself reading ur other works..wow loved the way u write out arnav and khushi characters, both r confident and strong , intelligent ...Thumbs Up
loved the auction scene, arshi's conversation on meeting,,their together press conference...arnav is very impressed from khushi's confidence and answers to the media...now looking 4wd to the rest of the story..Smile


Edited by chandni00 - 26 September 2013 at 11:20pm
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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
the prologue and the teaser caught my attention! and oh, the cast is awesome!
cant wait to read  more/1
and i feel stupid for not having read this story b4!
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Posted: 05 February 2014 at 9:14am | IP Logged
started reading it 3rd time... 
Chap1-5...superbly building the story line...

ASR arroagnt somewhat, successful, 

Khushi-confident, sharp, perfect biz woman...

they started on wrong foot...

the press conf left Arnav impressed about Khushi...



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