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FF: Pehli baar Mohobbat ki hai (Arshi & Taarey)<3 (Page 3)

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
awesome concept...

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Nice concept
good character sketch
loved d idea
pls continue soon
pls pm.me

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
nice concept.
do cont. soon. and pm  me.

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:09am | IP Logged
Thank you guys for all the love and support!! i 'l try my best to keep ul entertained!! And Thanks for the suggestions. Is there any chance where now i can move dis to fan fictionn section????Confused
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Chapter 1: Introduction

Raizada Residency(Mumbai)

Alarm rings. Its sharp 6.00am' Arnav opens hiz eyes. Gets up from his bed..Freshen ups.Everythin be's ready, his jogging suit, socks, sport shoes. Gets ready by 6:30. Leaves the house for jogging.

Meanwhlie sumwhere is lucknow'. Alarm rings'. A girls faintly opens her eyes..Frowns n lifts her Hand and puts it off'  6:10'6:30..

Buaji: Aare ooo sanka devi, utho, 7 baje ghar se nikalna hai..7:30 baje ki train hai'mumbai nai jana hai kaa??

On hearing the word Mumbai Khushi opens her eyes' "kya!!!! Buaji aap bhi naa'ab utha rahi hai hume!! Late hogayi main.. Ab train chuth gayi toh?? Jalldi kijiye buaji meri madat kijiye !!Abhi bhi thodi packing baki hai'.

Buaji: Tum humesha aakhri waqt ka intezar kahe karti ho??tumhari  ye adat kab jayegi khushi bitiya.. ab hadbana se ka faida'shant ho ja'tumhari amma aur maine sab kar diya hai...abi jaldi se taiyar ho jaa.

Khu: sach buaji????? Waah buaji aap duniya k sabse ache bua  hai... Pata nai ap nai hoti to kya hota!! Hugs bua with a tear in her eye.. but wipes her tear as she breaks the hug and smiles at bua and leaves to get ready!

In Mumbai at sharp 7:30

Arnav returns from jogging and goes to his room..his ironed suit,polished shoe is kept ready. Gets ready and comes down to have breakfast at sharp 8.00 am. Shyam, Nani and Anjali come to the dining table and sits.

Anj: Good morning Chotey'ye lo tumhari Green tea.

Arn: Good morning di, where's rey?? Aaj bhi late?

Anj: Rey.. ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai kya? Use dance se fursat mile tab wo kuch khayega na! tum breakfast karlo main usse abhi bulati hu..

Jus then Rey enters'(with bg music Aadat se majboor startin music, sliding from the staircase)

Nani: ye lo naam liya aur shaitan hazir'.aagaya Rey..(every1 giggles.)

Rey: Good morning Everyone!!! aur nani apne jo kaha maine suna' main aur shaitan??? Main toh acha baccha hu!! Aur isiliye sab mujse Bhai se jyada pyaar karte hai' hain na anjali di?? (winks at anjali)

Arnv: Watever , I am getting late, I don't have time for all of this. 8 baj gaye, main office ke liye nikal raha hu,

Anj: aare thik se kha k toh jau chotey..

Rey: (with a naughty smile)haan chotey' kha lo'.!!

Arnv: Watever guys, Di, main office mein kha lunga.. m really running late!!  Shyam jiju lets leave. (arnav and shyam leave.)

Rey gets up from his seat, takin orange juice glass in his hand and leaving, just then anjali stops him

Anj: ye kya? Aap kaha chale..thik se toh kha lo.

Rey: kha toh raha hu!! And di muje aaj reherse karne jana hai, Swayam aur sab mera wait kar rahe honge. Ye compition jitna humare liye bohot jyada zaruri hai, isse jitney pe jo paise milenge use hum save karenge aur bohot jald apni dance academy kholenge ..(rey smiles)

Anj: (puts her hand on Rey's cheek)tum log zarur jitoge , main bhagwan se roz pratna karti hu ap sabke liye!

Rey: uff di' apne mang liya'socho hum jeet gaye!! Ok di, nani, main chalta hu..byeee!!!! (winks at nani and leaves')

Nani: bhagwan iski saari sapne pure kare' Chotey ne kitni baar kaha tha isse ki Chotey se madat leke Dance academy kholo..par Rey ko apne mehnat se kholna hai'

Anj: haan nani' aur dekhna ..ek din Rey apne saare sapne apne balbute par zaroor pura karega!!

Both smile each other.'

Scene shifts' Lucknow station

A girl in pink salwar walkin back n forth with phone in her hand. Dials a number "Khushi kaha ho tum. Humesha late, time dekha hai. Train nikalne me sirf 20 min baki hai. Agar train miss hui toh?? Toh hum Shyam bhai ko surprise kaise karenge'aur Sharon..wo  station par humara wait karegi..aur'.

Khu: aare baba'ek min muje bolne toh do, main pohonch gayi, station par hu' lekin aap kaha hai. hume dikhai nai de rahi hai'( see's d girl)aare dekh liya, dekh liya' haye gulabi rang ka salwar.. mudd toh jaa meri gulabo'.

The girl turns.. and smiles with a relief on her face.. khushi starts waving her hand like a small kid'and yells'''Taaaniii'..!!!!!!!''

Taani smiles and says  "abhi chalooo' warna hum yahi reh jayenge'.''

Khu: aise kaise reh jayenge!! (they both climb the train)Mumbai ko humse ab koi nai baccha sakta Taani'(trains starts moving')

The train leaves for Mumbai'.

Scene shifts Rehersal hall:

Sharon: what is dis Rey?? Humesha late, kabhi toh time pe aya karo.Dis is seriously not done..humesha'

Rey: Sharon Sharon Sharon' take a deep breathe, kitna bolti ho tum!! Itna bologi toh energy kum ho jayega phir tum dance  nai karogi' dance nai karogi toh hum reherse kaise karenge..aur '

Swayam: rey.. tum dono ki baatein hui toh' dance kare???

Sharon: yea' Swayam is right' we should start now.

Rey: hmm'. Haan haan, Saari duniya galat'Sirf Swayam sahi.. badi na insafi..badi na insafi'(does melodramatic poses)

Sharon: (blushes) ok watevr guys.. tumhara b din ayega Rey'jab tum bhi kisiko pasand karoge, That time dekhlena'sab revenge lungi!!

Rey: (put hez arm around Sharon) yeah right!! Aur wo din ayega ..lekin tumhare sapno mein!! Kyunki..love..aur main!! No ways!!!

Swayam: U never know rey! bhagwan ne tumhare liye jise banaya wo zarur ayegi!!

Rey: oh cum on!! Main janta hu..bhagwan bohot busy insaan hai, m sure wo mere liye kisiko banana bhul gaye!! (winks at Sharon..) ok ab please reherse kare???

Sharon, Simi,nilesh, Vicky, Rini, Amar and the whole dance team starts rehearsing!!!

Precap:

 Railway station

 A group of people run towards Taani and Khushi and push Taani,her leg hits her suitcase.. she loses her balance, closes her eyes' and bangs Rey who was standin next to Sharon ,she was about to fall down when Rey holds her waist. Her eyes still tightly closed, he keeps staring at her for a moment.(look look hawa hawa, Taarey bg music)

Raizada house

Khushi: aare itne batimiz hai aap! Ladkiyo se koi aise baat karta hai?? Maafi mangye inse'

Arnav: maafi' what the'. Watchman'. Inhe andar kisne aane diya' watchman'



Edited by AndyTaarey - 28 January 2013 at 12:43am

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:33am | IP Logged

Unres...

 
Wow.. I'm first!!!Big smile
Update was sooo sooo. sosoo... Awesome!Tongue
Rey and Arnav's bond!!! Awwwiieee...
Anjali di... I just love her!!!
Then Khushi Kumari Gupta!!!Embarrassed
Taani...Ummm...She's a darling!!
Precap me..
Taarey awww...Embarrassed
Pehele mulakat mehi.. wow!
Arshi..
Arhi's nokhjokh!! What d??LOL
 
Update soon! Pm me!Smile


Edited by Curvmars - 28 January 2013 at 12:38am

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:41am | IP Logged
wow dear...amazing update...mumbai ko an khushi aur taani se koi nahi bacha sakta...lol...rey doesnt believe in love...interesting...precap is awesome...taarey and arhi first meet...update soon...

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Curvmars

Unres...

 
Wow.. I'm first!!!Big smile
Update was sooo sooo. sosoo... Awesome!Tongue
Rey and Arnav's bond!!! Awwwiieee...
Anjali di... I just love her!!!
Then Khushi Kumari Gupta!!!Embarrassed
Taani...Ummm...She's a darling!!
Precap me..
Taarey awww...Embarrassed
Pehele mulakat mehi.. wow!
Arshi..
Arhi's nokhjokh!! What d??LOL
 
Update soon! Pm me!Smile
Thank you sooo much for liking it, You have no idea how scared i was!!! 10 mins i wasted before posting it,wondering whether to update it or no!!! uff... ab jake i can breathe!!!Big smile

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