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FF: Pehli baar Mohobbat ki hai (Arshi & Taarey)<3 (Page 25)

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Afshan9

Originally posted by Dipu_taarey

awesome...arshi...too cute...i love rabba ve bg tune...and taarey llhh...loved it...rey in girls room...and taani ko kya pata hai jo usne kisiko nahi bataya???update soon...
Taani ko yeh pata hai k unke room ka AC Rey ne kharaab kiya hai. Phir bhi taani ne kisi ko bhi ye nahi bataya... Rey yahi soch raha hai...
aawww Afsan thank u so much for explaining on ma behalf!! really sweet f u!!
yea Dipu..thank u so much for ur comment. and Afsan is right.. Taani knows that Rey did something with the AC . how she came to know... ye u wil read in the next update..Smile
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
hey dr it was awesome!!! Khushi bi naROFLROFL
loved ArShi al otEmbarrassed
loved taani a lot dr..her nervousness!!! forgiving rey everytymEmbarrassed their cute si scene awwDay Dreaming precap is reallly interesting ..pls update soon

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..dinu..

hey dr it was awesome!!! Khushi bi naROFLROFL
loved ArShi al otEmbarrassed
loved taani a lot dr..her nervousness!!! forgiving rey everytymEmbarrassed their cute si scene awwDay Dreaming precap is reallly interesting ..pls update soon
thanks for commentin dear... Yea i will update soon...Smile
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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 4:46am | IP Logged
lvd it

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lvd it
m glad u liked it...Smile 

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Posted: 02 February 2013 at 10:10am | IP Logged
loved the update!
love how khushi never stops talking LOL
and i wonder wat rey is up to 

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Chapter 7: Khushi's feedback

Anjali was standing near the door,listening to their talks, Rey and Arnav look at her and smile

Anj: humne inhe bigada? Rey ko apne bigada Chotey! School mein Dadagiri karta tha, sabke saath badmashi karte aur phir dhamki dete ki agar kisiko bataya toh apne Arnav bhai se unki shikayat karenge!Aur phir chotey  aap jake baccho ko dhamki dete ki Rey ki complain na kare!!

Rey skratchin his head and smiling

Arnav: Aur jo apne ise sirr par chadakar rakha hai wo? Koi jab iske complain karta to aap parda dal leti, aap iski side leti..uska kya?

Anj: haan, par.. aap bhi toh

Rey : ( looks at both of them) ok ok… abhi tum dono lad kyu rahe ho? Bigada bigada.. main bigda hua nahi hu ok!!(smiles at both of them)Come on, itne cute scene k badh ek group hug toh banta hai.(Arnav and Anjali smile,they all have a group hug)

Anj: (Smiles) maska lagana koi aapse sikhe! (looks at the room) ye kya chotey?? Ye sab kab hua??

Arnav looks at Rey

Rey:  (starts giggling) wo… ye.. Bohot lambi story hai di.. jo actually mujhe bhi nai pata!

Arnv: Di, please Ramu ko kehke mera room thik karwaye. I hate it right now. Please main aise nai reh sakta isme.

Anj: haan chotey! Aap file lene aye the na. wo actually apke drower me hai. Aap lijiye aur jao, Ramu saaf karlega.

Arnv and Rey leave. Anjali looks at them and smiles.

Scene shifts: Night 11:30, girls room

Khushi and Taani not getting sleep cause its very hot.

Khu: (frustrated) Hume nind nai aa rhai yaha pe, Delhi ki sardi aur Mumbai ki garmi, kaise rehte hai log yaha.

Taa: khushi, iss garmi mein hume bhi nind nai aa rahi. Lagta hai ye Ac kharab ho gaya. Ek kaam karte hai, hum jake living room mein so jate hai..

Khu agree's and they both take their pillow and blanket and move to the living room. Anjali who was in the kitchen drinking water see's them.

Anj: aare khushi ji, kya hua?? Aap dono yaha kyu so rahe hai?

Khushi explains that Ac aint working.Hearing Anjali's voice Rey comes out.And hides behind the wall hearing them and starts smiling thinking his plan has worked. Anjali see's his hand

Anj: Rey?? Kya hua?? Aapki room ki AC bhi kharab hui kya?

Rey:  (shuts his eyes tight..opens it and turns) damn….( looking at Anjali, taani and Khushi) Nai wo main.. reherse kar raha tha..aur apne room mein ja rahu hu sone k liye. Good night.(starts walking)

Taani looks at Rey's expression and remembers the screw driver incident and how Nil and Vicky were nervous when they were talking to them. She realizes it was all Rey's another prank.

Anj: khushi ji aap ek kaam kijiye, aap humare kamre me so jayeye hum aur shyaam ji aapke room me chale jate hai.

Rey stops(to himself) : Oh no! ye kya!

Khu: nai Anjali di.. wo..(looks at Rey and gets a brilliant idea ) Nahi nahi..Aap kyu Anjali di?? Rey hain na! wo humare room mein so jayenge.

Rey: Kya!!

Khu: smiles and goes to Rey and drags him near Anjali… Kaise bhai hai aap?? Bichari Anjali di waha garmi mein soyengi aur aap aram se kaise so sakte hai? (looks at Anjali) Faisla ho gaya di.. Rey humare kamre me jake soyega aur hum inke kamre me..Aap bhi khush aur hum bhi khush!!! ..(looks at Rey and smiles and continues)  Aap jake aaram se soyiye!!

Anj:  (smiles) thik hai.. Aaj k liye aap Rey k kamre me so jayiye..hum kal apka AC thik karwa denge. (Anjali goes)

Khu to Rey:  (smiling)Ab jayiye… so jayiye!! Karya dene ka bohot shokh hai na aapko.. samjiye ye humari taraf se apke liye karya hai!! (raises her eyebrows)

Taani be's smiling at the back . Khushi takes her pillow and leaves. Taani following her but taani comes back

Taa: waise Rey.. ap ek kaam kijiye, woh screw driver leke AC thik kijiye. Shayad thik hojaye aur phir aap chain se so sakenge! (Smiles at Rey)

Rey: shocked and keeps staring at Taani and Taani smiling and looking at Rey..(look look hawa hawa bg music Taarey).

Khu: Taani.. chaliye!!

Taani leaves.. Rey keeps staring as she goes.

Scene shifts: in girls room

Rey: Yaar ye seriously garmi ho rahi hai..ye Vicky ka plan flop ho gaya!! Pehli baar humara plan flop..(gets up and sits,suddenly remembers Taani's words)

Flash back

Taa: waise Rey.. ap ek kaam kijiye, woh screw driver leke AC thik kijiye. Shayad thik hojaye aur aap chaine se so sakenge! Smiles at Rey

Then remembers khushi saying" , Pata nai kyu Taani apki tarafdari karti hai,

Rey smiles.. Taani ko sab kuch pata ha, phir bhi usne Anjali di ya kisiko nai bataya, kyu?

Goes in flashback(bg music Mitwa)

Remembers the station scene, her innocent face, then living room scene where she was with her eyes closed doing yoga and then mornings scene Rey on his knees in front of her and she  smiled…

Rey comes back to his senses

Woooahhh rey!!! Stop!! Thodi bohot cute hai iska matlab ye nai ki tu uske bare me soche!! Cute hai? Ye main kya keh raha hu…Stop it …No ways!! Closes his eyes and tries to sleep.

Precap:

Rey's room

Arnv: Pehla kabhi dekha nahi toh ab ye sab dekhe dimag kharab ho gaya tumhara. Tumhare wajah se Rey ko bahar sona pada.. usko taklif hui.. because of you .. (suddenly stops seeing Tears in Khushi's eyes, the 1st tear that dropped from her eyes made him weak within..he cudnt speak)

Aranv in his car over the phone

Ji Mr.Shukla. Yea presentation ready hai, wo(opens the laptop bag and finds a letter, opens it and reads) Hume maaf kardijiye humse galti hui, khushi???

Rehersal hall

Arnav: We need to talk!

Rey: (in his mind) Damn, kahi bhai ko mere prank ka pata toh nahi chala..

 

 

 

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