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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Nil ka dialogue superb tha ek silent killer to dusri action thriller..
Awesome update...thanx 4 pm..update soon n don't 4gt 2 pm me.

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Curvmars

Loved the update dear!!!Embarrassed Khushi all worried that how she is going to say sorry to him>?LOL taarey scene...Embarrassed.. Rey to Rey hain!!! Precap.. wow... fab job dear!!Big smile Update soon! Pm me!Smile
Thank God u liked it. Means a lot to me... thank u so ,uch and il definately pm u wen i update!Smile

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShivTRSS

Very nice updates. And muje PM Kyun nahi kiye pehle? Chalo koi bat nahi. Aagese karana haan. Anyways, I am really loving this opposites attrack thingy. Rey the prankster and the precap
i tot i pm-ed u... u wer nt in ma friend list...saw u in the likes section of the character sketch!! il add u up!! accept kariyo!! and m glad u liked dis FF and its concept!! means a lot to me!Big smile

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dipu_taarey

loved it dear...khushi...bolti hai to bolti hi jaati hai ...rey kya karne wala hai???update soon...
Rey ne Ac kharab kar di... and you know mumbai ki garmi!!! Big smile now lets wait for the girls reaction on it!!! Wink

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mon_tr

Nil ka dialogue superb tha ek silent killer to dusri action thriller..
Awesome update...thanx 4 pm..update soon n don't 4gt 2 pm me.
Uff...thank God kisine toh wo dialouge notice kia...LOL thank u so much for liking it... God bless you!! and yea ur in ma friend list..i wont miss to pm u!Thumbs Up

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AndyTaarey

Khushi : Atte hi gadbad kar di, ye Devi maiya, thoda bacha nai sakti thi aap hume??? Chai zameen pe girr jati,humpe gir jati..lekin nai!!! Chai ko toh us..us khadus laad governor pe hi girna tha!Subah bhi pata nai kya gyan diya unhe yoga pe. Khushi Kumari Gupta, ab jake unse maafi mangle, agar unhone humara gussa Shyam bhai pe nikala toh?? Taani ko bohot bura lagega!! Nahi nahi, hum aisa nai hone denge, Hum unse maafi manglenge!! Par kaise?? Taani kaha hai..usse puch leti hu'ROFL

Too good... Loved the way U r portraying khushi's character..ROFL


Vicky: nai nai'Di.. hum abhi khake aye hai' aur hum yaha khade hai'.kyunki'.kyunki'wo..Nil batayega na.. Nil bol na..

Exactly what was expected out of Vicky...ROFLROFL

Vicky: haan..aur hum yaha uska wait kar rahe hai.. yaha'iss jagah'I like dis place..muje ye area bohot pasand hai' (starts spinning round and round)

Too hilarious...ROFLROFL


Rey: (nervous,trying to change the topic, looking at Taani and the screw driver)humesha?? Main kya humesha?? Tum humesha.. tum humesha muje bang karti rehti ho'.

Taani: dekhiye kal jo..

Rey: (Fumbles not knowin what to say)kal.. haan kal..kal bhi tum aise hi bang karke girne wali thi..maine tumhe bachaya'tumne sorry bhi nai kaha'.thank you bhi nai bola'aise thodi na hota hai'hain na guys' ?

Vicky: yea yea.. aise thodi koi lucknow se aake aaram se itna chilled out reh sakta hai yaha'wo bhi Rey ke hote hue..

Rey slowly to Vicky: abhey..ye tu kya keh raha hai'pagal hua hai kya?? Use shak ho gaya toh..?

Lagta hai D3 k characters par Phd kar dali aapne...ROFL exactly yahi ho sakta hai..ROFL

Nil: God Rey!! Ye koun thi?? Ek silent killer toh dusri Action thriller!!!

Wow... Nil k punch lines to superb hai..ROFL

Taa: aare shanth ho jaiye please.. aapko Arnav ji se maafi mangni hai na??

 Awww..Day Dreaming Our smart Taani. Bina bole hi sab samajh jati hai... Cute taani..


Khu: nai Taani' hum kuch nai kahenge' Haan'hum unse bina kuch kahe maafi mang lenge' par kaise!!! Socho Taani koi toh tarkeeb socho'(just thn an idea struck khushi's brain) soch liya' maafi mangne ka sabse purana tarika..aur sabse asan bhi'. Khatt'!!

Khushi ka Lucknowi andaaz...ROFL


Khushi to herself: Ye lo. Photo mein bhi hasne ki liye Khadus ko gudgudi karni padi!! Photo mein toh muskura sakte hai, par nai, khadus kahe ke! Khair hume kounsa inke saath apni shaadi ki photo khichani hai jo inta dekh rahe hai!! Hum ye khat rakhne aye hai..par kaha rakhe? Yaha' bistar pe'(she moves the pillow and keeps it there, looks at it and frowns)nahi.. acha nai lag raha' yaha..iss sofa k takye ke pass rakhti hu (keeps it, then moves the other pillow) nahi'.yaha khat dikh hi nai rahi' (removes it and keeps shifting the places and messes things on the table,the vase falls down,but she ignores it and is not able to deciede where to keep it)

Hai...Day Dreaming I'm fida on Khushi's comic timing..ROFL


The red part is my comment in the quote.
Waise aapka precap to superb hai.
Hope k usme zyada TaaRey romance mil jaye.
Thanx for PM aur ha update karna mat bhulna..
Lots of best wishes..
Take care... Bye...

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Afshan9

Originally posted by AndyTaarey

Khushi : Atte hi gadbad kar di, ye Devi maiya, thoda bacha nai sakti thi aap hume??? Chai zameen pe girr jati,humpe gir jati..lekin nai!!! Chai ko toh us..us khadus laad governor pe hi girna tha!Subah bhi pata nai kya gyan diya unhe yoga pe. Khushi Kumari Gupta, ab jake unse maafi mangle, agar unhone humara gussa Shyam bhai pe nikala toh?? Taani ko bohot bura lagega!! Nahi nahi, hum aisa nai hone denge, Hum unse maafi manglenge!! Par kaise?? Taani kaha hai..usse puch leti hu'ROFL

Too good... Loved the way U r portraying khushi's character..ROFL


Vicky: nai nai'Di.. hum abhi khake aye hai' aur hum yaha khade hai'.kyunki'.kyunki'wo..Nil batayega na.. Nil bol na..

Exactly what was expected out of Vicky...ROFLROFL

Vicky: haan..aur hum yaha uska wait kar rahe hai.. yaha'iss jagah'I like dis place..muje ye area bohot pasand hai' (starts spinning round and round)

Too hilarious...ROFLROFL


Rey: (nervous,trying to change the topic, looking at Taani and the screw driver)humesha?? Main kya humesha?? Tum humesha.. tum humesha muje bang karti rehti ho'.

Taani: dekhiye kal jo..

Rey: (Fumbles not knowin what to say)kal.. haan kal..kal bhi tum aise hi bang karke girne wali thi..maine tumhe bachaya'tumne sorry bhi nai kaha'.thank you bhi nai bola'aise thodi na hota hai'hain na guys' ?

Vicky: yea yea.. aise thodi koi lucknow se aake aaram se itna chilled out reh sakta hai yaha'wo bhi Rey ke hote hue..

Rey slowly to Vicky: abhey..ye tu kya keh raha hai'pagal hua hai kya?? Use shak ho gaya toh..?

Lagta hai D3 k characters par Phd kar dali aapne...ROFL exactly yahi ho sakta hai..ROFL

Nil: God Rey!! Ye koun thi?? Ek silent killer toh dusri Action thriller!!!

Wow... Nil k punch lines to superb hai..ROFL

Taa: aare shanth ho jaiye please.. aapko Arnav ji se maafi mangni hai na??

 Awww..Day Dreaming Our smart Taani. Bina bole hi sab samajh jati hai... Cute taani..


Khu: nai Taani' hum kuch nai kahenge' Haan'hum unse bina kuch kahe maafi mang lenge' par kaise!!! Socho Taani koi toh tarkeeb socho'(just thn an idea struck khushi's brain) soch liya' maafi mangne ka sabse purana tarika..aur sabse asan bhi'. Khatt'!!

Khushi ka Lucknowi andaaz...ROFL


Khushi to herself: Ye lo. Photo mein bhi hasne ki liye Khadus ko gudgudi karni padi!! Photo mein toh muskura sakte hai, par nai, khadus kahe ke! Khair hume kounsa inke saath apni shaadi ki photo khichani hai jo inta dekh rahe hai!! Hum ye khat rakhne aye hai..par kaha rakhe? Yaha' bistar pe'(she moves the pillow and keeps it there, looks at it and frowns)nahi.. acha nai lag raha' yaha..iss sofa k takye ke pass rakhti hu (keeps it, then moves the other pillow) nahi'.yaha khat dikh hi nai rahi' (removes it and keeps shifting the places and messes things on the table,the vase falls down,but she ignores it and is not able to deciede where to keep it)

Hai...Day Dreaming I'm fida on Khushi's comic timing..ROFL


The red part is my comment in the quote.
Waise aapka precap to superb hai.
Hope k usme zyada TaaRey romance mil jaye.
Thanx for PM aur ha update karna mat bhulna..
Lots of best wishes..
Take care... Bye...
Wow... dis comment was more colourful and intresting than ma update...LOL 
koi mera update pade na pade tera comment zarur padega...Wink
Thank u so much for this..u hv no idea how much dis means to me.. thank u so much..God bless ya!!  And thank u for the suggestion..il definately keep that in mind!!Thumbs Up

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Awesome..awesome .awesome..loved it! Especially dat dialogue wer nil said ...ek toh silent killer aur doosri action thriller..rockin...cant wait fr TR eyelock!

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