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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zinnia.TaaRey

Fab update. And love the bonding between Taani and Khushi :)
Thank u so much.. God bless u

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Curvmars

Andy Loved the update! Awww...Embarrassed
 
Arhi..Embarrassed
 
Rey ka new prank! LOL
 
Bechari Taani...Hmm...
 
Waiting for next update..
 
Update soon!
 
Pm me!Big smile
M so happy u liked it.. Thank u so much.

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
awww arhi part was so cute
and rey's new prank LOL
update soon

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Thanks for pm dear
do update next part soon

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Chapter 5: Apologize

Raizada House:

Khushi feeling guilty of spilling the tea on Arnav and arguing with him this morning, walks back and forth in her room talking to herself.

Khushi : Atte hi gadbad kar di, ye Devi maiya, thoda bacha nai sakti thi aap hume??? Chai zameen pe girr jati,humpe gir jati..lekin nai!!! Chai ko toh us..us khadus laad governor pe hi girna tha!Subah bhi pata nai kya gyan diya unhe yoga pe. Khushi Kumari Gupta, ab jake unse maafi mangle, agar unhone humara gussa Shyam bhai pe nikala toh?? Taani ko bohot bura lagega!! Nahi nahi, hum aisa nai hone denge, Hum unse maafi manglenge!! Par kaise?? Taani kaha hai..usse puch leti hu…

Scene shifts

Rey, Nilesh And Vicky walks in the house..looking left and right..Rey hiding a screw driver in his hand

Rey: Listen Nil, Vicky tum log kisko bhi room me mat ane dena..ok.. yahi rukho, understood?

Nil: Yea yea Rey, tum tension mat lo..hum hai na!!

Vicky: bus tum jaldi se AC karab karo aur come back ok.. jao jao…All the best

Rey enters girls room ,

After 5 mins

Anjali  and Taani wer walking together wen she see's the boys

Anj: Nilesh Vicky?? Aap kab aye?? Aur yaha kyu khade hai??

Nil: wo..wo..hum abhi abhi aye di.. hain na Vicky??

Vicky: haan di.. hum toh bas just abhi aye hai..aap jayiye na…aap jayiye, hum thik hai

Anj: haan par aap yaha kyu khade hai? niche jaiye..hum abhi apke liye kuch late hai..

Vicky: nai nai…Di.. hum abhi khake aye hai… aur hum yaha khade hai….kyunki….kyunki…wo..Nil batayega na.. Nil bol na..

Nil: (all nervous)Rey… wo Rey jo hai na… wo… Ipod…Wo Ipod hi lana bhul gaya…  kya di apka bhai aaj kal bohot bhul jata hai. Isliye wo Ipod lane apne room me gaya…

Vicky: haan..aur hum yaha uska wait kar rahe hai.. yaha…iss jagah…I like dis place..muje ye area bohot pasand hai… (starts spinning round and round)

Anj: smilingly, thik hain..hum abhi aap k liye Pani late hai,waise  Taani ye Rey k dost hai..Nilesh, Vicky ye Taani hai, Shyam ji ki behen!

Nil (raises his eyebrows) slowly whispering to Vicky: hmmm…to Rey iski baat kar raha tha…Taaaniii… hiee Taani!!!

Taani: hiee… ek kaam kijiye di,aap jake aaram kijiye..main inhe paani deti hu..

Anjali smiles and agrees and Taani goes to the kitchen. After few minutes Rey comes out of the room,

Rey: come on come on guys lets go.. (and pulls Nil and Vicky and just thnTaani comes and Rey almost hits The tray that Taani was carrying , Rey and Taani both hold the Tray,(Taarey bg music look look hawa hawa,)lost in Taani the screw driver falls from Reys hand Taani see's it, Rey Vicky n Nil all stressed )

Taani: aap..aap aise humesha…aur yeh screw driver…?

Rey: (nervous,trying to change the topic, looking at Taani and the screw driver)humesha?? Main kya humesha?? Tum humesha.. tum humesha muje bang karti rehti ho….

Taani: dekhiye kal jo..

Rey: (Fumbles not knowin what to say)kal.. haan kal..kal bhi tum aise hi bang karke girne wali thi..maine tumhe bachaya…tumne sorry bhi nai kaha….thank you bhi nai bola…aise thodi na hota hai…hain na guys… ?

Vicky: yea yea.. aise thodi koi lucknow se aake aaram se itna chilled out reh sakta hai yaha…wo bhi Rey ke hote hue..

Rey slowly to Vicky: abhey..ye tu kya keh raha hai…pagal hua hai kya?? Use shak ho gaya toh..?

Taani looking at them mysteriously.Just then Khushi comes who was looking out for Taani

Khu: Taani.. aap yaha hai..hum apko kabse dundh rahe the…chaliye mere saath…. Muje zaruri baat karni hai..(looking at rey, ) aap??? Apko toh hum..apko toh hum badme dekhenge…(pulls Taanis hand and drags her out.)

Nil: God Rey!! Ye koun thi?? Ek silent killer toh dusri Action thriller!!!

Rey:Yahi hai dono… jiski raato ki nind udne wali hai…kyunki….

All the guys give eachother a smirky smile

Vicky: chalo..ise pehle aur gadbad ho jaye…ye screw driver utha lo….and lets go from here.!!

Scene shifts: Terrace

Khushi dragging Taani who is still holding the tray.

Taa: khushi…kya hua… yaha terrace pe kyu laye muje?

Khu: (biting her nails..and taking both  the glass of water from tray and drinking it.) Pehle ye rakho yaha pe..(keeps the tray on a bench) hume apki madat chaiye…aapko agar kisi se maafi mangni hai toh aap kaise mangenge… kya karengi jisse wo apka gussa kisi aur pe na nikale…aur..

Taa: aare shanth ho jaiye please.. aapko Arnav ji se maafi mangni hai na??

Khu: (sighs)Haan…hum jabse aye hai tabse pata nai kya bake jate hai unke samne..humari bhi galti nai… wo humesha galat waqt pe humare samne ate hai..wo toh insane hi galat hai..pata nai khud ko kya samajte..(stops, seeing Taani folding her hands staring at her)

Taa: Maafi…aap maafi ki baat kar rahe the… aap baat shuru ek topic pe karte hai..aur khatam kahi aur… nai..!!!khatam?? khatam to apki baatein hoti hi nai…bas…aise agar apne unse maafi magne jayengi na…toh bhul jayiye maafi!!

Khu: nai Taani… hum kuch nai kahenge… Haan…hum unse bina kuch kahe maafi mang lenge… par kaise!!! Socho Taani koi toh tarkeeb socho…(just thn an idea struck khushi's brain) soch liya… maafi mangne ka sabse purana tarika..aur sabse asan bhi…. Khatt…!!

Scene shift

Khushi and Taani moving towards Arnavs room

Taa: khushi… muje lag raha hai kuch gadbad hogi…..Arnav ji ne hume unke kamre me dekh liye toh??  kuch aur sochte hai na.. chalo yaha se…

Khu: Ye Devi maiya… iss ladki ko darne k alawa aur kuch ata hai kya, khud b darr rahi hai aur hume bhi dara rahi hai!! Dekho taani.. daro mat.. hum kounsa chori ya Dhaka dalne jaa rahe hai andar...!!Aur Arnav ji  abhi office mein hai.. ek kaam karo tum mat aao… hum andar jate hai..khat rakhe ate hai,…kitna aasan hai na… (looks at the room door and swallows saliva)

Taa: kya aapko sach mein…

Khu: haan…aap aise..darye mat…jao.. chinta mat kijiye…

Taani moves slowly away from her…and Khushi Takes mini steps towards Arnav's room…

Khushi opens the door…. The room be's spick and span. Everything in its proper place. On the wall there be's a pic of Nani, Arnav and Anjali, where obviously Arnav was not smiling. And next to it a pic with Rey,Arnav and Anjali In it,  in wich Rey and Anjali are tickling Arnav and hez laughing.

Khushi to herself: Ye lo. Photo mein bhi hasne ki liye Khadus ko gudgudi karni padi!! Photo mein toh muskura sakte hai, par nai, khadus kahe ke! Khair hume kounsa inke saath apni shaadi ki photo khichani hai jo inta dekh rahe hai!! Hum ye khat rakhne aye hai..par kaha rakhe? Yaha… bistar pe…(she moves the pillow and keeps it there, looks at it and frowns)nahi.. acha nai lag raha… yaha..iss sofa k takye ke pass rakhti hu (keeps it, then moves the other pillow) nahi….yaha khat dikh hi nai rahi… (removes it and keeps shifting the places and messes things on the table,the vase falls down,but she ignores it and is not able to deciede where to keep it)

 

Precap

Khushi to Arnav: aur aap hume ajeeb keh rahe?? Khud ko dekhiye pehle… photo mein bhi hasne k liye jise gudgudi karni padi isse ajeeb cheez kya ho sakti hai..dekhiye… (and in full speed walks to show the pic ,and she slips due to water on the ground and falls on arnav,Arnav on the floor and Khushi over him.

Scene shift: Outside Arnav's room

 Rey then does cartwheel and directly lands on his one knee with his head low infront of Taani..lifts up his head and see's her smiling at him and he cant help but smile back, both remains still (Look look Hawa hawa, bg music Taarey's)

 

 

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Loved the update dear!!!Embarrassed Khushi all worried that how she is going to say sorry to him>?LOL taarey scene...Embarrassed.. Rey to Rey hain!!! Precap.. wow... fab job dear!!Big smile Update soon! Pm me!Smile

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
Very nice updates. And muje PM Kyun nahi kiye pehle? Chalo koi bat nahi. Aagese karana haan. Anyways, I am really loving this opposites attrack thingy. Rey the prankster and the precap

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
loved it dear...khushi...bolti hai to bolti hi jaati hai ...rey kya karne wala hai???update soon...

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