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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by JPRules

Mind blown. Again!

Seriously Niyoti you really are brilliant with these fics! The simplest of situations and dialogues are made so impactful just because of how well you wrote them. This rendezvous fits in so perfectly with the QH universe that I could literally see it happening in the show!

You have a very creative perspective, very atypical and unique, nothing cliched.
I loved your idea of using Ayaan as the pov, because it not only gave us an insight into his character but it reflected how we the audience of the show view Asad-Zoya. Well done.

They need to hire you... like asap lol. Looking forward to your next! Big smile



EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Thank you so much! My head might swell to such an extent that i may just fly away.. Lol.Big smile

Atypical and unique huh? LOL. I was wondering how this would turn out considering i was altering Ayaan. If he shares the same gene pool as Asad then he has to have something in common right? So i took some libertiesWink

 I was writing something else, when this one sorta just popped in and refused to go away. So i had to write. Didn't want to anger the museTongueLOL

Loving the feed back!

Niti

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 1:12am | IP Logged
its awsome 

loved it

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Nice!!! Plsss continue

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
Loved the story :-)

Nikki <3

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Kriti--

its awsome 

loved it


Originally posted by varshificat

Nice!!! Plsss continue


QUOTE=1D_D3-Crazy]Loved the story :-)

Nikki <3
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Thank you so much!Smile

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
aha, this was fantastic ! 
Loved the way you described not only Zoya, but Ayaan as well .. sidetracking from the very much messy, shabby look. 
& Loved the nok-johk between Asad and Zoe .. and how well does Ayaan seem to predicts what he sees. Great job ! : )

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hilly

aha, this was fantastic ! 
Loved the way you described not only Zoya, but Ayaan as well .. sidetracking from the very much messy, shabby look. 
& Loved the nok-johk between Asad and Zoe .. and how well does Ayaan seem to predicts what he sees. Great job ! : )


 Ayaans hair is shabby indeed LOL

Thank you for the feed back!

Niti

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A wonderful two shot

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