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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kaussar

nice.Clap   is this the end? hope you continue it.


This is just a two shot so i guess this is the end. Thank you for readingBig smile

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Loved it ! x Big smile

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
LOL
fabulous

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Really nice... Great job

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Amazing... Really enjoyed that.. Clap

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kohli4ever

Amazing... Really enjoyed that.. Clap


Originally posted by kandygrover

Really nice... Great job

Originally posted by hopehot

LOL
fabulous

QUOTE=divc]Loved it ! x Big smile[/QUOTE]

Thank you guys! Big smile


Edited by niyoti - 27 January 2013 at 6:28pm

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
Brilliant!
I loved how realistic it was :)))
Good job!
Look forward to reading more from you.

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Posted: 28 January 2013 at 12:07am | IP Logged
Mind blown. Again!

Seriously Niyoti you really are brilliant with these fics! The simplest of situations and dialogues are made so impactful just because of how well you wrote them. This rendezvous fits in so perfectly with the QH universe that I could literally see it happening in the show!

You have a very creative perspective, very atypical and unique, nothing cliched.
I loved your idea of using Ayaan as the pov, because it not only gave us an insight into his character but it reflected how we the audience of the show view Asad-Zoya. Well done.

They need to hire you... like asap lol. Looking forward to your next! Big smile

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