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SS muhabat hamsafer meri...updated chap 3

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:46am | IP Logged
<font color="#990066"><font size="6">MUHABBAT HUMSAFER MERI
<font size="2">Hi guys here is a new ss on Ariya .hope u wl like it.</font>
</font></font>He saw her sitting on the only bench in the park near thewaterfall.she had a peculiar liking for that place ...he
thought.With blue orchids on one side and a big pinus tree on
other and the sun rising behind she seemed to b part of
nature.she was looking at the only rose flower on the
bench.He went near her and touched her shoulder.she looked
towards him there was something in her eyes which made him
feel embarassed
he was about to youch het n wipe her tears when she
vanished.he looked at the bench it was empty.He looked here
n there ...his eyes searching for her.He cried out 'Riyaaa'
'Riya 'he woke up startled with a fast beating heart and
sweat on forehead.He felt sweat on his forehead.He felt
sweat on his forehead even in this chilling january night.He
looked at the side table.the clock showed 5 minutes past 12.He
looked out of the window the moon between clouds
'ri these clouds of misunderstanding will have to dissappear...i
promise
He looked at her photo placed in heart shaped frame n said
Happy birthday ri i love u i really do
'''''''~~~~~''''
Yeh tumse keh diya kisne
Ki tumbin jee nahi sakte
Yehdukh hum seh nahi sakte
chalo hum maan lete hain tumbin boht roye
kayi raaton ko na soye
per abke jo lotoge tum hame tabdeel paoge
ki aisa kyun kia humne
to sun lo gor se
purani ek riwayat tang aake chood di humne muhabbat chodd
di humne
since last one hour chotu and shree had tried to make a
conversation with her.they had praised one another so much
in order to get a response from her but she hadnt spoke a
single word.They looked at one another dissapointed and
resumed their work .Both knew that the person she looks is
not real her.From morning they noticed her pushing back her
tears sometimes by blinking and sometimes by pressing her
lips .Acp sameer rathore the always alert man didnt failed to
notice her behaviour. but he chose to ignore .He knew what
was going to come her way soon.yes he would be soon joining
them .he had to inform them soon

TO B CONTINUED
I Want to thank shru n shruti for their support.
This is particularly dedicated to my zoon whom i am missing so much.i love u zoon
plz hit the like button and comment

chapter 2 on page 6
Chapter 3 on page 10

Edited by samiya.059 - 14 February 2013 at 9:57am

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:47am | IP Logged
my dear sam os which is dadicated to sanchu
starting was wounderful and Clap
that was a dream ,he was crying for riya
it was a riya's birthday ...
and poem was mindblowing sam i loved itClap
and wat happened to her
why she is behaving like this
oh sam i am very exicited to read next part
continue soon sam dearHug


Edited by shrutisweety - 27 January 2013 at 6:52am

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:57am | IP Logged
haye awesome sami ...

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:02am | IP Logged
nioce... continue soon!!

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged
its jus amazing... culd really picture the scenes... cool... great start... update soon...

Edited by Leki - 28 January 2013 at 10:22am

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Nice..

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:14am | IP Logged

superb start...
lvd it...
the poem ws beautiful...
arjun dreaming of riya...
wat hs happnd to riya??
continue soon...
cant wait fr d nxt part...
plz pm me wenevr u update...
thx...!!!!!

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lovely awesome sami

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