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Savage Awakening - A KriYaansh SS [Chp 15 on 99] (Page 55)

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Awesome update..
loved it ..
Kr ke lya kehne...Big smile

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Aweee dere talk

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Nice update :-)
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superb update
loved it 
thanks for pm
update soon
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CHAPTER 9 - Heart Vs Brain! Ultimate Battle.

She knocked the door.
She clutched the hinge.
Finally after a couple of minutes he opened the door revealing his tight muscular body without a shirt. She immidiately looked away turning in a beautiful shade of red.
'Im sorry' she said
'Whats wrong Ghai?' He asked.
'Just tell me when youre done changing and ill come k?' She said her face turned still not facing him.
'Nah, budge in ' he replied moving inside and leaving the door wide open for her. As soon as he came in he grabbed himself a shirt and wore it pinning the buttons.
'Can u please put some clothes inside the house?' She said rolling her eyes.
'No. Because i guess u like it better whem am without them' he said
'What did u just say?' She asked in an abrupt manner.
'The same that you heard' he replied with an evil smirk.
'YOU ARE SUCH A...' before she could complete he snapped
'bas***d. I know that' he winked at her.
She rolled her eyes then in an arrogant manner replied 'for your information im not as perverted as you think'
'Yeah, youre even more perverted' he replied
'I didnt mean that!' She shrieked
'Whatever' he snapped wishing this conversation to end
'Dont whatever me' she said with arms crossed around her chest.
He signed. Dropping the clothes in his hands he walked towards her and stopped only when they were centimeteres apart from each other.
'Then what do u want me to do to u?' He asked.
Kriya looked elsewhere. Anywhere apart from him, two buttons of his shirt were still unpinned causing his muscular and broad chest to peek out which WAS a major distraction for her. She bit her lip.
'Dont do that' he instructed
'What?' She asked
'Bite your lip' he said
As he moved closer sandwhiching her between the wall and him she hushed 'get off me'
'Why do i make your heart race?' He winked
*Heart : hey! dont tease me. I already want to kiss you!*
*Brain : just tell him to get off you!*
*Heart : why do u have to be so stubborn, shes enjoying it*
***Kriya : Will you two just shut up? Im trying to think here***
'No way' she said.
'Lying wont help Ghai' he said
'My name is Kriya' she said gritting her teeth.
He chuckled.
' get off me' she yelled pushing him and moving out of his grip.
*Heart : you shouldnt have done that*
*Brain : stop being so girlish, im proud of you ghai *
*Heart : youre pathetic!*
*Brain : youre..*
***Kriya: shut up both of you! AND MY NAME IS KRIYA!!***

7pm in the kitchen-
'You want to go there?' He asked with utmost innocence.
'We have to. Lets my things from my place?' She asked looking at him.
'Sure. Get into the car' he instructed.
'How much time will it take?' She asked once she was in n he had started driving.
'Probably 3 hours' he said not looking at her.
She nodded.
After a long long gap of silence he spoke up. 'Listen im sorry okay, i was just playing around, i didnt mean to scare you'
'U didnt scare me' she said 'just embarassed me a bit'
*Heart : awww.. he's adorable!*
*Brain : you're so cheesy. Hes just being nice!*
***kriya : gimme a break! I dont want to share him with you two!***
What was happening to her? And why were her insides talking? Before she could think abt anything else his rich cologne made its way into her nose causing her to twitch.
*Nose : mm.. he smells nice!*
***kriya: he isnt a grilled sandwich shut up u!***
Kriya sneezed suddenly with a hell lot of force.
***kriya : woah that was a mean way to take revenge!* **
*Nose : ehehehe!*
Rey handed her a bottle 'bless u! U fine? ' he asked.
'Yeah just this stupid nose!' She said abruptly.
*Nose : hey! I heard that!*
***kriya: will u guys just stop it?***
*Heart : hes so adorable*
***kriya : enough! Stop the fuss***
*Brain : thanks!*
***kriya : i never said u could speak brainy!***
She let out a sigh. A sigh of helplesness. Baffling between her brain and heart she didnt realise when they were already outside her place. A man stood on her porch his black mercedes parked a little away. Her eyes grew wider she knw what was going to happen next. Scared she spoke up.
'Rey stop the car!'
'Why?' He asked
'Just stop the freakin car!' She almost yelled her eyes fixed on Cero.
'Who is he?' Rey asked
'Hes just a noone' she said
'Im coming with you' he said
'No! Rey please let me handle this' she said
*Brain : Take him with u. Cero is dangerous*
***kriya : for once dont speak***
*Brain : just advicing*
'I said i am coming' he growled.
'No u r not. Let me handle this' she said and walked out of the car. He could see her climbing the steps of the frontyard, walking in elegant manner. He saw the two of them talking. Rey was waiting, waiting for him to make a wrong move towards her, even if he looked at her in a weird way rey was going chop his balls in just a fraction of second. They seemed to have a normal chat but he was a sharp eye. Soon rey saw his hands moving towards her waist, he was trying to grab her while kriya was pushing him away from her. Before rey could even think of doing anything he slapped kriya due to which she crashed on the floor. Rey has been waiting, he thomped the door of his car and proceeded towards the guy while kriya was lying helplessly on the floor with blood running down her face in a stream.
He puched the guy hard which made him fall on the ground, he then grabbed him by neck and almost killed him when he heard kriya wailing, telling him to stop. "U touch my girl once again and ill chop your balls" he yelled punching his face'
'Wh-who are..?' Before he could comlete rey gave him a final punch before getting up and yelling 'NOW GET LOST'
Cero took no time in getting up and buzzing off, Rey saw the black Mercedes going away and then dissapearing after a while. Once cero was gone he made his way towards kriya. Her mouth was bleeding little by little, he picked her up in his arms as she crossed her hands behind his neck.
'Which bathroom?' He asked
'The one beside my bedroom' she said
He placed her on the edge of the bathtub, then he sat on the floor cleaning her wound with a cotton.
'Sit still' he instructed.
' Rey, i can do it myself' she hushed
'I said sit still' he said
*Heart : Oh my god! Hes so cute! Im going to faint *
*Brain : Then ill be there to catch you!*
***Kriya : will you two stop flirting and allow me to concentrate on him?***
'Rey u dont hv to do this' she hissed
'I know i dont have to do this, but what if i WANT to do this?'

Edited by Painted_Sky - 31 October 2013 at 9:55pm

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SheLooks18ToMe Goldie

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Posted: 26 September 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Resd for halwai

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Posted: 26 September 2013 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Am already here...
bohot jaldi karing na
i know
*patting my back*
enough timepass...low battery hai jaldi jaldi unres karna padega
Pehle toh *bows down to you*
you are incredible

i mean...really i can't believe what u wrote in the above update

aaj tak brain v/s heart toh bohot suna tha
pehli baar nose bhi beech me aata hai yeh dekh rai huROFL

ab toh bas eyes baki hai
(imagine -
kria to eyes
"stop drooling on him"
"will u stop checking him out all the time

i mean seriously monku
you are amazing yaar...
Take it frm me...bohot aage jayegi tu

cuming to the update
sab kuch ekdum fatang tha

ahem ahem
Kria ka chod hamara kuch khayal hai tuje?
Maarna hai kya

car ride was nice really

i loved that dishoom dishoom fight b/w rey and that jerk...kya punch maara rey ne..wah mera hero <3

and than that last line
haaayeee that was so sweeet...
Cont soon please
Thanx 4 the res monku
love u so much
dher saara pyaar...

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 26 September 2013 at 1:39pm

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