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Savage Awakening - A KriYaansh SS [Chp 15 on 99]

SheLooks18ToMe Goldie

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Banner Credit - Kinjal Di ! 

 Introductions Page 1, Keep scrolling

 Secret Revealed Page 13

 3 Is It Love?  Page 18,

How Feelings Change! Page 25,

  7 Years Later Page 39,

 So, They met Again? Page 44

 Some Twists, Some Turns Page 49

 You have the world!  Page 52

Heart vs Brain  Page 56

 Bear it, Sweety Page 66

 His Again?  Page 79

Demands Page 87

Time to Tell Her Page 92

Medical Shop and Stories Page 95

The Council and the Elder. Page 99

Edited by Painted_Sky - 01 February 2014 at 3:16am

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SheLooks18ToMe Goldie

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
Chapter 1:Introductions

she stood outside. waiting for her friend she was already enough late. her life was perfect atleast she thought it was, she had Loving Friends, A very sweet Sibling, and ya a perfect Fate. her Future was secured and planned. She had everything she needed, except for Love. well, it had no place in her simple sober life. but little did she knew what circumstances she was about to face? what difficult moments she had to pass in her so called Perfect Life...??

"Jaldi kar na yaar" she yelled enough loud to shake up her room-mate..

Finally after getting no reply she went off. she didnt have time for all this drama... It was different from what she'd expected, the place was silent as compared to everydays rush and all gossiping noise of the students. she looked around all d eyes were fixed on her. but why HER? she checked herself, was she wearing anything odd? no, she was in her usual clothes. she turned.. oh so this was what the fuss was all about. Reyaansh Singhania. she continued walking, she didn't care whoever came. how does that matter to her?

Reyaansh Singhania, looked stress and Pale, but first he had to find out who was she? her high heeled boots made a tikk-tok voice when she walked, and her short length hair moved as she walked soon she was climbing the stairs. She was the only girl who didn't turn when he came, this was unusual, she stopped when one of d girls told her to stop, he started walking, and soon the little voice of girls gossiping was back. he was soon on d stairs when he turned and saw who this girl actually was. he winked and left.. 

She stood there, her mouth wide open! How dare he? how dare he wink at her? soon the crowd began to move. back to normal. she rushed after d group of boys. 'excuse me?' she said they still kept moving. no response! HMPH! now her anger had no limits!! she walked in front of him and yelled "I'm talking to you. How dare you wink at me han?"  there was no response for a minute, they stood still, silent as a statue and den they exchanged looks and began laughing.. what was this all about? she wondered one of the boys stepped forward "so - what?" he said while d boys still kept laughing. she looked at him, her face turned "Say Sorry" she said the boys laughed harder. "What?" he asked again "Sorry. Say Sorry" she said, he laughed pulled her cheek and left along with his group of boys. What the hell?? what did he think of himself? a superstar...!? exactly what?  anyways she wasn't here to start a fight with any kind of flirt hero. she was here to study. Thats all. She went to her class. her speed a little more faster than before now..!

"Where were You?" she yelled "What where you? you take a ton of time to get dressed and u expect me to wait" she said "okay, i take a lot of time, but where were you? you entered much later dan me, Kriya " she said. so she was no one else dan our dear Kriya Ghai..

"accha baba im sorry, chal lets sit." she said racing to d first bench. "Oye, udhar kahan chali? rey will sit there, we're supposed to sit here at d back" sharon said "piche kyun? me toh aage hi bethngi" kriya declared and pulled sharon with her. "tu na, kriya" she said and sat with her friend, It was impossible for kriya not to break any rule. reyaansh and d boys came in d class they stood in front of KriSha "Mene kaha tha na yahan mat beth, ab bol!" she hushed "chill" kriya said "Kya hai?" kriya said, as a boy came forward rey stopped him. "Meri hai" he said, kriya's eyes widened "Seat meri hai" rey said to kriya "Naam likha hai?" she said "Please, Late ho rha hai. Jao ladkiyon ke sath jaa kar betho" one of d boys said "Tum Swayam ho na?" sharon asked innocently "Haan kyun?" he said not noticing her much. "Bas esehi.." she said and blushed. "Kisne kaha ki ladkiyan aage nhi beth saktin?" kriya yelled to rey. rey moved forward, and wen to the seat behind kriya ghai. he was sure to teach dis girl a lesson. and he did.. he troubled her until d class got over, sometimes he threw pens, sometimes pencils, and sometimes paper written 'My Seat'.. she yelled at him once "Can u stop this please? its irritating me." she said ...

Oh god! she was too much, no girl has ever behaved with him this way. and d way her lips moved made his heart tickle. well, she was just enough to get him done. he was stressed, Pale. Last night was enough for him. ugh! what d hell was going on with him?? he looked pale and she noticed it. he thought. her pinkish lips were enough to make his heart spin round. umm.. yeah d truth was dat she was different much different from d girls he had met before..! he looked at d other side instead of her lips which were getting him insane now! ugh! he focused on answer instead "No i cant stop thiS" he replied "UGH!" she yelled and d teacher turned "Whats going on?" the lecturer asked "Nothing sir" he said "Nothing?" she looked at him "Sir, this boy is disturbing me" she said the lecturer punished rey and swayam to stand outside which wasnt at all like a punishment for guys. Now he was sure to take revenge...

After the tiring Day..
Kriya was heading to her girl's hostel with her friend sharon when someone happened to grab her arm. How dare he? she turned and Surprise Surprise he was no one else than d Reyaansh. bloody reyaansh she thought. what d hell!!!!?? "what is this?" she yelled trying to free herself..
"Sharon can you please leave?" he said not looking at sharon much instead his gaze was fixed on her. "k" she said "U take care han' she hushed to kriya and left. after she left ...

K: what is this? 
Rey: this is to warn you that im gonna take revenge
K: what revenge? 
Rey: forgot d morning so soon, dear?
K: what kind of human are you? 
Rey: How are you so sure that im a human?? 

And kriya was left confused... 

What is rey? a human? and what was he talking about? we'll find out sooon...

Precap:- KriYaansh moments...

So how was it?
Good? Bad?
Well, i leave it to you guys.. 
Pleassse tell me weather to continue or not..


-Rashii Wink

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 28 January 2013 at 9:09am

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krasforever IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3502

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 5:30am | IP Logged

yayy m d 1st oneDancing
awesome concept...
n 1st chap was mindblowing...
dat 'meri hai wali' line was superb 
plzz continue soon...
m really excited for upcoming Kriyaansh momentsSmile

Edited by krasforever - 27 January 2013 at 9:43am

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-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 5:40am | IP Logged
main kisko review karun yeh bata dena... Tongue

chal me back to my work...

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Roxxy47 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5494

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 5:41am | IP Logged
*Unresd Miss.Nautanki Tongue*...

Finally read it Big smile...
Amazing story , yeh zaroor kahun gi cause i know U Like it Wink...
Start ek dam mast tha...
Kria 'The Reyansh Singhania' ke ane par ruki nai , something new for Rey , But esa toh hona he tha cause she is 'Kria' LOL...
Start se he Kria ne Reyaansh se panga le liya , so like u Rishu Tongue...
First day he Rey aur Swayam ko punishment dila di But Rey bhi kuch kam nai tha Wink...
Ending pe woh Threat , jese Kria dar jaye gi , Rey must know it's Kria whom he is talking to...
Iss part mein ek cheez ajeeb lagi , Rey being Pale n Stress , woh thora strange tha...
But tu toh Rishu hai na koi na koi cheez toh ajeeb hogi Tongue...

N ya abhi he bata rahi hun i might not be able to comment further , so plz ziyada drama mat kariyo , i mean it Stern Smile...

Luv ya Heart...
Your's 'Miss.Boy-Hater'...

Monkey Emoticon Cici

Edited by Roxxy47 - 02 February 2013 at 2:35am

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anjali22 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:55am | IP Logged


awesome update

Edited by anjalijayan - 27 January 2013 at 7:24am

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chand91 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11856

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:59am | IP Logged
nice strt
pr tumne intro ko 1st prt ku likha?

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-Vaish- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:01am | IP Logged
start bada mas tha..

loved it...

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