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FF LEARNING TO BREATH..updated pg 25 (Page 6)

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Posted: 05 February 2013 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Fabulous and excellent chapter,VinnieClap
Slowly and surely their relationship has started to build.Smile
 

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by octopie

Wow Vinnie ! The chapters just get better and better.
There feels a lot of emotion packed in this chapter too, and how her small gesture of concern means so much to him, even if she may not realize it.

I really loved how you showed in your story that he's starting to feel again yet feeling like why should he deserve to be happy ? it's a really sad thing... Disapprove and just focus on those parts were important which you wrote out, about his battle with himself, his succumbing to the torture of his demons and past, the fight between acceptance and resistance to feeling this way, and all such things.

also love right now how you're keeping him from telling Sugni everything or telling her how much her concern means to him. it's a very big load to unburden, let alone easy to talk about. especially if he might feel that he doesn't even deserve the support or the some release of speaking to somebody about it ? and also possibly thinking if that person can not even begin to guess what's within Vickram, that her image of him would change after he tells her (?), and the happiness he's gaining bit by bit right now would then be lost too? (not sure if that's also on your mind, as the author)

there was humor too in parts, so great ^-^

all in all, loved the chapter ! it's nice to see somebody is there for Vickram when his own family members weren't. she's illuminating and bringing out good things about Vickram ^-^ his demons must be afraid of her Embarrassed

Octopie,
 Thank you so much  for leaving  this review. Smile  I am glad that you are enjoying the story.  Yes at this point Vickram dose not see himself in a good light and thinks every one around him  would hate him to if they knew. A case of his inner guilt  blinding him.  But then he meets  Sugni,  who it seems lets nothing shake her. She sees the good in almost everything. And most importantly She trusted him, by taking his offer, when he doesn't even trust himself to really help her. She is going  to slowly bring him back  to his old self...but it will take some work...stay tuned!WinkWink

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by widdy

Fabulous and excellent chapter,VinnieClap
Slowly and surely their relationship has started to build.Smile
 


Thank you Widdy,!, Yes but you know coming to terms with and accepting his feelings  is not as easy running down a bus  for this Vickram Singh now!


Edited by Vinnie79 - 06 February 2013 at 6:13am

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Posted: 06 February 2013 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
Great job Vinne...!!! It was superb as always...
Omg!!! Cop but why??? I guess.. I hv to wait for the next one...

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 8:50am | IP Logged
omg vinnie this is superb...
i just loved the brave sugni and vikram...i am loving him even more... he is so caring,protective,sensible and helpful...alas if cvs cud have used these as a storyline here instead of sugni as chulbuli...it wud have been much more interesting.

Cant wait for the next part and how vikram will save her from cops...
great going...

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:52am | IP Logged
Smile Vinnie!!! Superb,Amazing,Splendid,fantastic,Awesome and stupendous.
Great job Clap Vickram and Sugni relationship is blossoming beautifully Day Dreaming
Looking forward for the next chapter.
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SmileVinnie, this gorgeous flowers is especially for youHug


Edited by Sandy66 - 08 February 2013 at 6:49am

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 5:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by K.swati885

Great job Vinne...!!! It was superb as always...
Omg!!! Cop but why??? I guess.. I hv to wait for the next one...

 Thank you so much for your appreciation  K. Swatie... Don't worry you will find out soon. Wink   Keep reading! .Smile

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 6:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ash_arti

omg vinnie this is superb...
i just loved the brave sugni and vikram...i am loving him even more... he is so caring,protective,sensible and helpful...alas if cvs cud have used these as a storyline here instead of sugni as chulbuli...it wud have been much more interesting.

Cant wait for the next part and how vikram will save her from cops...
great going...

Thank you so much Aarthi,  Yes if  PSH  gone down that road it would have been a big hit today.  It was  great to see Vickram stand up for her, in front of all. I would have loved to see him and Sugni working together for the betterment of the bedni's instead of the stupid  love triangle.
Please keep reading, your comments mean  a lot!

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