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prava55663 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 December 2010
Posts: 11798

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Well Begun...

waiting how the ETF would solve the case..

who is the girl?
waiting to know more

Edited by prava55663 - 26 January 2013 at 10:44pm

kaveriw2008 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 23 July 2012
Posts: 16360

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 1:49am | IP Logged suspense in it

kon hai uss ladki ko mar dala

kon thi wo ladki jo mar gayi

kon hai wo dusari ladki

and where is ETF arjun and most imp my riya...

update soon dear...thanks for the pm

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Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 November 2012
Posts: 15028

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Di awesum start...
u should defo continue..!!

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ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 November 2012
Posts: 7910

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Wooo intresting start!!
full of suspence.!!!.
wana to read more..!!!
conti soon..!!!
n thank for the pm ..dr..!!!!

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sashashyam IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 04 January 2012
Posts: 13411

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
My dear Tina,

It is so good to have you back. I hope you had a pleasant and productive time of it while you were away.

Now, as for this new story of yours, I hope it is going to be largely a mystery. In fact the opening reminded me of the beginning of one of PD James' novels, where the murder takes place under identical circumstances, except that there it was a serial killer and here it appears to be a serial contract killer.

It seems highly irresponsible and inconsiderate of her friend, male or female, to leave her at the bus stop so late at night instead of dropping her home safely. It could not have been too far away if it was a walkable distance, even without the shortcut thru the park, and in any case, so late at night, it should have been her safety that mattered and not a little extra driving. I cannot understand why she let this happen, poor thing.

Tina, as you obviously plan to continue with this, I have only one request. Please work out the wholestory in advance, or at least a good bit of it. What you once told me is your normal practice, of writing half an hour at a time as time permitted, and putting down whatever inspired you at that point of time, is perfectly all right for a romance, but not for a mystery!

But if this is going to be an Ariya romance disguised as a mystery, I need advance warning, please!Wink I will then get out pronto and leave the field clear for your innumerable other admirers!

Shyamala Aunty


Chapter 1

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princesshelen IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 November 2012
Posts: 2866

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Interesting start
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

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umamah70 Senior Member

Joined: 13 January 2013
Posts: 677

Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
wow ,...nice startThumbs continue soon ...
and thanx 4 PM...Smile

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ipkknd-fan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Wow great start cant wait to

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