SS:Past,Present and Future Discontinued Note Pg61 - Page 10

ohh wow.. amazing update :) lovd it.. nd precap sounds intrstng.. riya ka kia reaction hoga.. eagr to know.. continue soon :)

ayesha k sath riya bhi roi😭😭😭

arjun ayesha ka dard samajh sakta hai or usko handle karne ki koshish karega..but i hope k riya bhi yeh samjhe😕 or kuch galat na soch le..😕

update soon..

and thanks for the PM dear😊

Nice part dr,
precape sound interesting...
ohhh ashiya on arjun arm..wana to read riya's reaction...
conti soon

Great update...

Dear Tina,

The case itself is still in a state of suspended animation, but I liked the description of each of her colleagues helping Aisha cope with not just the tragedy but the horror of what happened to her younger sister. Everyone's reaction rang true, and while Arjun's dard ka rishta  was perhaps to be expected, Rathore's sense of responsibility for his team member and his confused sense of sadness and frustration at their inability to prevent such crimes come thru very well.

Shyamala Aunty

[QUOTE=haruhi26]

Chapter 3

wow!!nice one dear...👏

Nice update..
Poor Aisha..feeling bad for her..

superb update
loved everyones concern for aisha
lets see how arjun handle aisha
intersting precap
waiting for more
continue soon

awesome update :) loved it

Hey ...
The part was nice ...
Loved their unity ...
You have expressed every ones emotion amazingly ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...