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Virika FF : I need You..

This is an ss based on the current separation track'where sb goes missing and viren searching for her.

Chapter 1

"Listen to me Virenji Please'. Just once'listen to me'You don't know the whole truth"

"What else should I know now jeevika' You have broken my trust on you'When I warned you not to reveal the truth'still you did the same mistake'Its just because of you tht Badi ma is suffering through all this' Just get lost now' Out of my sight' I don't wanna see your face Jeevika'"

She was about to leave when the nurse came panicing' "Patient room me nahi hai sir..!" she said breathing heavily.

"Virenjee me bhi aapke saath aati hu'please'"

"No ways Jeevika'tum badi ma se dur hi rha aur mujse bhi'"

Viren left the room leaving Jeevika with tears in her eyes.

She said to herself, "I think he's really hurt. I'm so sorry Virenji. Par me apne mummy papa ki insult hote hue kese dekh sakti thi?"

She took his photo, hugged it and started crying bitterly.

"Virenji, aapne kaha apko mera muh tak nhi dekhna' Thik he"

She took her bag and started packing it.

All this time Virat was standing outside with tears in his eyes seeing his Bhabhi hurt and teary. She had sacrificed a lot for the family. He went inside to pacify her but it was of no use.

"Bhabhi, sab thik ho jayega, mein bhai se baat karta hu, aap abhi kaha jaa rhi hu, and look at you, aapne kalse kuch khaya nahi he aur aap pagalo jese ro rahi'please control yourselve..me hu na.."

Saying this he hugged his bhabhi to calm her down.

"Nahi Virat ab kuch thik nhi hoga, unhone kaha ki who mera muh tak nhi dekhna chahte. I should leave this house now."

"Bhabhi lekin aap kaha jaogi?"

"Me meri beeji ke pas jaake rahumgi. Please Virat mujje mat rokna mene wese bhi bahot tang kiya he is parivaar ko, Please let me !"

"Lekin bhabhi" Virat held her hand " Bhabhi, aapka haath toh bahot garam he.. aapko bukhaar he bhabhi."

She took her hand and went towards the door. "No Virat. I'm Fine bas thodasa bukhaar he utar jayega. Well bye.." She said trying to hold back her tears. She loved her family more than herself. Leaving them was a very big punishment she gave herself.

Soon she was out of her house and took a taxi to go to the station.

On the other hand Virat narrated the whole incident to Manvi.

"ye kya virat tumne di ko jaane kese diya..?? unko bukhaar he fir bhi.."

"mene bahot koshish ki unhe rokne ki par'who bahot hurt hui he manvi, bhai ko unhe itna nhi daantna chahiye tha"

" haan virat, par tum yaha kya kar rhe ho' chalo hume di pe naza rakhni hogi, unko jab fever aatat he toh who bahot weak ho jaati he"

"Nahi Manvi tum yahi ruko me jaata hu, agar bua ko kuch pata chala toh please mujje call kar dena, aur me tumhe bhabhi ke baareme bata rahunga. Aur tum bhi jyada tension mat lena n take care Ohk?" Saying this he kissed her forehead and ttook his car to follow his bhabhi.

While the taxi was moving towards the station, she saw sb walking there. She stopped the taxi and asked him to wait.

When she came out of the taxi she saw her virenji following sb and trying to call sb who was walking on the other side of the road.

 Precap: He saw a crowed of people gathered around. Then he came to his sense and realized what really happened. And he was like"Oh My god"



Please Comment!! I need a feedback..

This is my very first attempt of writing...!

I need guiding and suggestions. Do Help..!!


Chapter 2 - Page 4

Chapter 3 - Page 6

Chapter 4 - Page 10

Chapter 5 - Page 14

Chapter 6 - Page 20

Last Chapter - Page 25

Note - Page 31

Extra Chpter Part A- 37

Extra Chapter Part B - 44


The Real END!!!



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welcome babe, 
and yh its lovely for a first attempt seriously 
p.s. yayyy first to comment
btw honey where r u from???
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Edited by aasma1 - 23 January 2013 at 8:43pm

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I'm from Navi Mumbai...
Thnks for the comment... :D
Btw where are you from..?

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Originally posted by laurenza.carson

I'm from Navi Mumbai...
Thnks for the comment... :D
Btw where are you from..?

oh im from the UK

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Cool... Nice to meet you.. :D

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Originally posted by laurenza.carson

Cool... Nice to meet you.. :D

same here babe x

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