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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
updated on pg 4Big smile

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smarty94

ayeeeiinnn haayyeeiinnn naye FF pe ab stalking kareingay hummLOL yep back into employment youLOL

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*EDIT*

THAT WAS WOoW!!!!! usually i am left confused when writers put up the first chapter, but this has left me with a pretty clear idea of the story, although I am pretty sure, mera idea ghalat hoga, 'cause you are the writerjee hereLOL  Never know...

while reading, i did know ke KHUSHI will be introduced as SHASHI's daughter but i totally forgot it while reading it, and i kinda felt lost that errr... don't they already know about her. But then that's the way things are when you have a veeerrryyy active imaginationLOL LOL

so he has already come to her notice, having such thoughts about women, hmmm good! acha hai pehle hi notice karlia, ab mehnat karni toh paregi but ziada nahi LOL although, as a girl i did feel a bit ajeeb, as any girl would, when you know being "spoken" about like this, but felt really good when KHUSHI gave him an even karara jawabLOL yep. some of men are like that. Not all, someLOL

take care and oyee YOU HAVE TO HAVE TO (like ASR would say) continue this Big smile wish me luckLOL

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
new ff wow
interesting concept
liked it
contintue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
That was one interesting chapter and start. Khushi and arnav as usual didn't hit off well. That's the beauty of their relationship though.
I can't belive Vines With Thorns is going to end. I hate it when you stories end. Atleast lucky for me u start a new one.
 
Liked the update
waiting to read more
continue soon
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 7:33pm | IP Logged
congratulation on your new FF,
the start was brilliant, i am glad that Khushi is strong woman in this one, it would treat to watch Arnav and her encounter!
looking forward to the story!!

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
Cngratz on strtng a new FF...
Suprb strt nd intrstng cncpt...
Cntinue soon

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
Boxing, thats where men look utterly drool worthy!  :D
Awesome. 
Khushi's nature I love! NK ,  Arnav & Akash as usual Head over heels!

Beautiful work!

And if you could please decribe their muscles when they are working! :P

And ONE more thing I would like to say Is Zara you are one of the very few writers that give importance to all characters! Loved how in such a short update LOL you bought in Aman, NK, Payal even though it was just a couple of lines! That is a true author who gives importance to all her characters! :D 

Wells done looking forward to see PaYash as I've missed on the show! Love Deepali & Akshay! Mwuahh! Embarrassed

Thanks love!


XOXOXO



Edited by -NishaSobti- - 25 January 2013 at 5:35am

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Wooow very different concept... 

superb writing...

awesome start...

loved all the young characters... 

Hope you update it soon...

Thanks for PM..

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