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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
Wow
Arnav Singh Raizada and his thoughts...
Feels same thing..
First was am accident, then next day confusion and determination of stop coming there
Third day its not a big deal... even he is gonna leave this place soon
Jealous
After week he came there to meet her see her...in order to get rid of her thoughts ; make sure he wear indeed best and look handsome
When he didn't see her ,alarmed himself something happens..

Superb feelings of ASR when he starts his new journey

Like it. One doubt this time serious or funny . We will get your funny thoughts dialogues in between na?

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:18am | IP Logged
you are quite a prolific writer... was wondering if and when we would be seeing your next piece! an interesting premise... a lovely picture of how much arnav was intrigued by the girl and his obsession with the colour of her eyes... I am sure she has been fully aware of him hanging around her store... the intensity in those eyes is hard to ignore... his decision to finally meet and the special care he took about his appearance was cute... it nearly became anti-climactic when she wasn't at the store but then she crashing into him was surely meant to be... such a nice reason to be in each other's arms, fulfilling his heart's desire of learning the colour of her mesmerising eyes! there was a magical aspect to that encounter... can't wait to find out how things progress!

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Ah..i just loved the starting...The name of the ss is very interesting..The projection of the prologue is just fantastic..here starts a new journey..looking forward to this ss :)
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
great start! Clap

brilliant chemisrty.
hint of intrigue.
they are  people i know, yet i am not sure if they are the same..  great feeling you gave to the beginning of their story.
beautiful writing.Clap

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:30am | IP Logged
it was simply awesome...Smile nd i know its gonna b great too...Smile

do continue soon...Smile

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:35am | IP Logged
looking forward to this story after reading ur sins.

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant update. Loved it.

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Oh such a fascinating start! 

Arnav, poor boy, he is smitten.Embarrassed And Khushi is like a beautiful mystery... oh I am waiting eagerly for Part 1 :) Thanks for the PM. 

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