Pyar ke doh deewane(pg 24 updated!!!) - Page 4

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Kripa got worried if laksh would recognise her, laksh thought she looked familiar but couldn't remember.

 

Kripa-(thinks) God I hope laksh doesn't recognise me

 

Laksh- So Anum introduce me

 

Anum- This is my little sister Kripa

 

Laksh- Kripa sounds familiar anyways hi I am laksh

 

Kripa-(relieved) Hi

 

Anum- And this is my devar Angad

 

Laksh- Matlab

Anum- Yeh mera pati ka bhai hai

 

Laksh- Kya (shocked, tear well up in his eyes) tumne shaddi karli

 

Anum- Haan Sahil seh remember you introduced him to me in college well when you left I became good friends with him and gradually I realised I was in love with him so we got married.

 

Laksh- Anum tumne mujhe bataya bhi nahin

 

Anum- kaise batati, ur the one who said until you don't become successful, I cant ring or try to visit you.

 

Laksh- true, Anum I am pretty tired, is my room that way

 

Anum-yep its that way, I'll call you when dinners ready

 

Laksh-sure

 

Laksh goes in to his room and opens his suitcase he takes out a ring and some photos of him and Anum he gets out his lighter and burns all the photos.

 

The background song plays-

Zindagi is tarah se lagne lagiRang ud jaaye jo deewaaron seAb chhupaane ko apna kuch na rahaZakhm dikhne lage daraaron seAb talak sirf tujhko dekha thaAaj tu kya hai yeh bhi jaan liyaAaj jab gaur se tujhe dekhaHum galat the kahin yeh maan liya - 2Teri har bhool mein kahin shaayadHum bhi shaamil hain gunahgaaron seAb chhupaane ko apna kuch na rahaZakhm dikhne lage daraaron seAa mere saath milke hum phir seApne khwaabon ka ghar banaate hainJo bhi bikhra hai voh samet te hainDhoondkar phir khushi ko laate hain - 2Bojh to zindagi ka kat ta haiEk duje ke hi sahaaron se Zindagi is tarah se lagne lagiRang ud jaaye jo deewaaron seAb chhupaane ko apna kuch na rahaZakhm dikhne lage daraaron se

 

While that happens we see Kripa in the room looking at some college photos

 

K- Kyun Sameer, tum mere sab se acha dost teh to phir tumneh aisa kyun kiya.

 

K- Laksh yaha hain to kya iska matlab hain ki sameer bhi Mumbai mein hain, mujhe patah lagana hoga

 

Angad at this point comes into the room

 

A- Hi sweety

 

K- Angad tum plz yaha seh joa

 

A- (Puts his arm around her) Kyun mein tumhaara boyfriend hoon na

 

K- Angad shayad tum bol rahe, yeh sirf ek natak hain tum plz yahaan she joa

 

A- No Kripa u haft to come with for a drive

 

K- Angad I don't want to go  

 

A-(Grabs her arm) come on Kripa u haft to

 

K- (she pushes his hand away) enough what do u think of urself pehela tum mera kamreh mein athe ho knock karneh keh bagair mujhe tumhare saat nahin janah agar tumhe janah hain toh akelah joa aur haan agali baar mera kamreh mein knock kar keh anah  

 

A- Tike hain Kripa agar tumhe nahiye janah toh maat joa mein toh aise keh raha tha we are friends isliye

 

K- Angad mein

 

Before she could finish Angad had left

 

K- (To herself) Oh no yeh maine kya keh diya Angad seh mujhe maafi magni chahiye

 

Kripa goes to Angads room where shes sees Angad punching the punch bag angrily, Kripa gets a bit scared

 

K- Angad

 

A- (Looks at her angrily) Kya

 

K- Woh (he looks at her more angrily) kuch nahiye

She goes outside

 

K- (To herself) No I haft to do this come on Kripa

 

She goes back in but doesn't look at Angad, she looks straight down on the floor with a worried face

 

K- (Says it quick) Angad maine room main joh bhi kahaan usse keh liye sorry I didn't mean any of it. It's just that I was in a bad mood I am really sorry

 

Angad smiles at Kripa coz she looks so scared. Kripa looks up to see Angad smiling and she also smiles.

 

A- (Sternly) Tum kyun muskara rahiye ho, is this a joke to u

 

K- (Quickly gets scared and stops smiling) I am sorry mein janthi hoon keh (interrupted)

 

A- Ek minute Kripa yahaan aoa

 

Kripa walk to Angad, Angad looks at her innocent eyes. Angad smiles, Kripa doesn't know if she should smile because she wouldn't want Angad to shout at her again so she doesn't say anything.

 

A- Kripa u can smile

 

She starts smiling

 

A-(yells) Itnah bhi nahiye

 

She quickly gets back to a sad face

 

Angad starts laughing, he hugs her 

 

A- Kripa u are too funny

 

K- Huh matlab tum mujseh naraaz nahiye ho

 

A- Ofcourse not

 

K- Thanks u

 

A- Well I had fun

 

K- Matlab

 

A- Matlab ki I had fun making a fool of u

 

K- Angad I hate u

 

A- I love people who hate me

 

K- arrghh (she goes)

A- (Shouts) Hey Kripa Sharma what about our drive?

 

K- Get lost

 

At dinner, Kripa takes the opportunity and asks Laksh

 

K- So tum Mumbai mein akelah aiye ho

 

L- Well my sister is already here she lives at the hostel in her college and my brother sameer is in America

 

K- Oh ok (to herself) Thanks god

 

Anum comes downstairs she is wearing a lovely pink sari

An- Laksh hows ur sister haven't seen her in ages

 

L- Simones fine

 

Angad hears Simones name and his face turns blank

 

An- Ok u guys eat

 

L- Kyun Anum tum nahiye koaghi

 

An- No I am waiting for Sahil hes taking me out for dinner

 

L- Ok (to himself) Jitnah khush chahein ho loh mein yeh sari khushiyaan chine loongah agar maine tumhe ause Sahil seh alag nahiye kiya toh mera naam bhi Laksh nahiye

 

Preview- WHOS SIMONE? WHY DID ANGADS FACE GO BLANK BY HERAING HER NAME?

WILL LAKSH BE SUCCESSFUL IN HIS PLAN?

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by memze - 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: blah_blah

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Originally posted by: Mulle

great story so far 👏 👏    
continue soon 😉

Thanks a lot 😃

That was an amazing part memze!!!! 👏

Iqra

noooooooooooooo!! i dont want my sista nd jiju separate!! i want them together!! make the laksh die ok?lol 😭 !! great part continue sooon 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: me_iq

That was an amazing part memze!!!! 👏

Iqra

thanks

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

noooooooooooooo!! i dont want my sista nd jiju separate!! i want them together!! make the laksh die ok?lol 😭 !! great part continue sooon 👏 👏 👏

ill keep ur suggestion in mind and to find out who our didi ends up with ull have to keep reading