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Pyar ke doh deewane(pg 24 updated!!!)

Shazii Goldie

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TonguePyar ke doh deewane


Character intro

The khannah family (live in Mumbai):


Anum khannah-23yr old(played by Unum of if) after her husband's mom and dad shifted to NYC she lives with her husband and her devar in Mumbai. They only decided to stay because Angad did not want to shift. She used to be Anum Sharma.


Sahil khannah 24 yr old(played by Unum's boyfriend)-eldest son and is married to anum, he loves her a lot, he goes to office and handles the business.


Angad khannah-

A hot 19yr old, he attends music academy, he is a very friendly person at the same time he is a flirt, immature typical guy.


Sharma family(lives in nainatal)


Gayatri Sharma-she is a widow of surbhayan Sharma. She loves Kripa a lot as Kripa is her only child.


Kripa Sharma-

a sweet bubbly 18yr old girl, she loves her sister a lot, after she got married and left she really missed her. Kripa has just got an admission at music academy and is coming to stay with her sister in Mumbai.


Guys I'm posting the first part in 10 mins I hope you all liked the intro.

Edited by memze - 25 March 2007 at 4:03pm

girlie18 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 July 2006 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
soundz interestin
cont soon
Shazii Goldie

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Posted: 17 July 2006 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
Part 1

We see a big mansion with a sign saying khannah mansion.the camera zooms inside the house and see a girl doing pooja,we now see that girls face its anum khannah,wife of sahil khannah.she gives the aarti to a guy sitting down watching cricket not really paying attention to anum.she goes to the tv and switches it off.

Guy-anum,yeh tumne kya kiya

We now see the guys face,its sahil khannah.

Anum-sahil you know I don't like people ignoring me and you also know I don't like watching my programs coming on in 10mins and I cant miss it.

Sahil-10mins right so let me watch cricket till then.


Sahil-fine I give up,vaise tumhara devar aj subha kaha hai.

Anum-soraha hai kyun

Sahil-well go on wake him up,he stays out half the night and sleeps all day.pagal

Anum-don't call him pagal hes your brother.

Sahil-anum tum na hamesha apne devar ke side leti ho.

Anum-shut up sahil,ill just go and wake him up.

She goes in a messy bedroom and we see a guy sleeping,she goes to him and pulls the covers off him.

Anum-angad uto

We now see a pair of brown eyes slowly open,he smiles to his bhabhi.we now see his face its Angad.

Angad-good morning bhabhi

Anum-good morning,now comeon get up now

Angad-5mins bhabhi

Anum-no Angad get up now because next time your brother will come to wake you up and you know what hes like.

Angad quickly gets up

Angad-im up im up

Anum-angad ek favour karoge

Angad-anything for u bhabhi

Anum-baat he ki meri choti behn Kripa got a admission at music academy so shes coming today by train so can you pick her up from the station.

Angad-vaise bhabhi apki behn kaise dekhti hai

Anum-angad my sister is not that type of girl so don't even try anything.

Angad-trying im not trying anything bhabhi.
Anum-yeah yeah

While Angad and anum chat abit more we see a girl watching cartoons,shes wearing her winnie the pooh pgyamas,a lady shouts her name,we see that ladys face its gayatri.the girl turns her face and we see its Kripa.her mom comes up to her and pulls her ear.

Kripa-kya muma

Gayatri-kripa your going in abit,go and get dressed

Kripa-5mins mom

Gayatri-shut up and go and get dressed.

Kripa goes and gets dressed in a red churidar with red bangles and puts light make up on.her mom comes and hugs her.

Gayatrti-beta apna dhyaan rakhna

Kripa-jee mama ap pareshan mat ho,mein anum di ki saat hoon

Gayatri-ha phir bhi khair yeh sab choro and give your mom a hug.

She hugs her mom and sets off to the station.angad also heads off to the station in his black shirt and blue faded jeans looking hot as usual.

Preview-Angad and Kripa meet

blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 July 2006 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
cant wait 4 the next part!!!

angad-kripa meet!! Wink
Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 17 July 2006 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Great Intro
hawoo Goldie

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Posted: 17 July 2006 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
hey great prt!!!!!! like the concept cant wait 4 a-k to meet Wink
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great part
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Great part!!!
Plz cont soon!

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