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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

Gosh, finally an epilogue to Yes Boss & what an epilogue! I'm so happy that he popped the question and the proposal was just so very sweet and dreamy. *Haiye* You did a great job & I loved it!

Btw I think perhaps you might wanna link the epilogue with your Yes Boss FF? I'm sure it will attract new readers if the title states completed as everyone loves a completed story especially with an epilogue, just a suggestion if you don't mind me saying. :) Thank you for writing this!

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abavi

@abavi

IF-Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

The proposal was the highlight of the OS... but I should say I found it a little difficult to imagine Arnav ji saying so perfect dialogues... he is a man of few words...

but still the words used for the proposal was so beautiful... 😳 loved it!

[edit] Oh I completely missed the part where you mentioned that this could be a sequel to your FF... I remember reading the first few chapters of it.. and then lost track of it... so it is completed now? Now I shall read it- and now I understand the character is from the FF, I will be able to appreciate it better

Edited by abavi - 11 years ago

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Tanvi Dandime

@TANVI_SEXY

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

amazing os..😊😊 Edited by TANVI_SEXY - 11 years ago

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gangsu

@gangsu

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Awww its so beautiful d way u xpress.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

It was beautiful!

Loved Khushi's naivety 😆 she was thinking abt the games she play in her PC 😆

OMG! The proporal was so romantic!
Loved it!

Thanks for the pm.

Love,
'J'